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Reviewer: Lrigrl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/30/10 11:49 pm Title: Why? can't you do it?

HOTNESS.

One thing, though.

"He slowly lowered his head, inhaling Bill’s musty scent and gave the tiniest of licks.

I think you meant "musky". "Musky" means that something smells bad.

Reviewer: TasteOfSarrows Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/10 11:33 pm Title: Why? can't you do it?

So I love this series to DEATH, but I have one thing I have to say >.>
The majority of the second chapter was like..stalling? no...thats not the word. Like..convinving tom. I know hes awfully knew to this and stuff..but like..the amount of the chapter that it took to convince him was sort of extreame to me xP
sorry, I still LOVED it though, really :D
This seires is REALLY GOOD.
keep going with it :D

Reviewer: dusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/10 11:28 pm Title: Why? can't you do it?

LOL, Tomi is so innocent, it's delightful. Loving this series, so bloody much!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/10 11:27 pm Title: Why? can't you do it?

Lol Tomi is cute! lol

Reviewer: Savannah Suicide Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/10 10:55 pm Title: Why? can't you do it?

xDDDDDD

Oh god. I've never enjoyed twin!sex as much as this. It's absolutely making me crack up. I love how Tom's completely opposite from his normal personality here and he's all 'omg no, sex' and the like. It's just too adorable. And then Bill being the experienced one...

*____*

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/10 12:21 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

Love it! Tom's just too cute. And what generation were the blue-things? Because I don't remember them, at all.

Reviewer: chiko Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/10 12:12 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

SO awesome. Do continue. I'm looking forward tot he next chapter. Innocent!Tomi is so funny xD

Reviewer: hughes012 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 11:24 pm Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

Not awesome. Surpasses awesome by fucking light years. This is...;) Apparently, I have a thing for shyTom. Who knew??

You two have the perfect mixture of sexy smut & adorableness. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: dusty Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 06:55 pm Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

Yep, still all kinds of awesome! This story is so much fun! I love how innocent Tom still is, even with Bill-shaped temptation so close to him. *giggles* I'll be looking forward to more!

Reviewer: twincestkindom Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 04:23 pm Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

i have never read this story!!! it is really good!! love it!! Bill the sex demon!! XD
please continue!!

Reviewer: leahq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 02:19 pm Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

HEHEHE Still awsome INDEED! God I was wondering when this would be up! I'm so madly in love with it.. kudos to you all for the idea of shy tom! It's brilliant and I can't wait until Bill get's his way..

Reviewer: iceqween000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 12:37 pm Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

VERY GOOD! update quickly!

Author's Response: XD I shall

Reviewer: Haleema Kaaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 12:17 pm Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

Of course it's still awesome! Ooooh Tom's so cute when he's so innocent, and a sex demon Bill really is sexy ;)

Author's Response: Isn't he though? *awwws and cuddles Tom*

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 12:17 pm Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

Genius! I love this series.

Author's Response: WOOO! I'm glad to hear it

Reviewer: Momiji_Jones Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 11:00 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

awsoeme i luv thm ^_^

Author's Response: Me too ^^

Reviewer: ichliebedreads Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 08:10 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

Tomi!! just give him your sticky out bits!! we dont want poor Billa to starve, don't we? more?

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 06:36 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

totally still awesome though i miss some of the humor from before. Post again soon :D

Reviewer: rainbowfail Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 06:16 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

This is awesome. The best fic for a long time I might say :P You are sooo talented. Give me more RIGHT NOW :D

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 05:47 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

*grins* this is getting hotteeeeeeeeeer x3

Reviewer: Ladite Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 05:02 am Title: What?! Why the hell would he want to give him a blow job?

Yes, it's still awesome. Your Tom is so cute! Like the way I could pinch his cheeks ;) And so shy, aww... But I'm sure Bill's gonna change that ;)

xx

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