Date: 04/11/10 04:30 am Title: Chapter 17
Noooooooo, I was hoping for another chapter! :(
I seriously hope you update soon. Like, now.
And holy shit, Tom's being such an ass right now. He's pretty much giving Kim mixed messages. I hope they talk it out soon.
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'm trying to get the next chapter up right away =]rnrnTom is being an ass...
Date: 04/10/10 05:05 am Title: Chapter 13
Gerard Butler = b29;b29;b29;b29;b29; x 5748754867584914584
You get brownie points for including him in this chapter. =D
Author's Response: HAHA Thanks! rnrnI couldn't think of a movie, and I really liked 'Law Abiding Citizen and Gerard Butler is pretty damn sexy! It was a win-win! =]
Date: 04/09/10 05:38 am Title: Chapter 8
I mentioned a few chapters back how your writing was okay, not great, but okay. And I don't know what happened between that post and the next one, but all of a sudden the writing seemed to pick up. I think I just spoke too soon lol. As with everyone, there will always be room for improvement, but I'm enjoying reading this much more. :)
Author's Response: =] I'm so glad to hear it! rnrnI did find a beta just so you know =D I am having some troubles with a few things in the chapter I am working on and I thought I should get some help. Thanks for your help. I didn't take anything you said badly. It was definitely helpful critisicim. =]
Date: 04/08/10 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 17
:O more please! love it
Author's Response: There will be more, don't worry =Drnrn
Date: 04/08/10 07:07 am Title: Chapter 3
I'm going to continue reading because the plot seems interesting, but I'm going to be honest here: the quality of writing is, well, not so great. A greater variety of descriptive language would be very helpful. More narration could be used among all the dialogue as well. If this story is un-beta'd, I suggest you find someone to beta it. I don't know how helpful this review will be seeing as you've already posted 17 chapters, but I thought I would let you know anyway.
I meant for this to be constructive criticism, and I'm sorry if you took it the wrong way. :) I think if you work on your grammar and writing, any future fics will be great. :)
Author's Response: This is my first story, and I am trying really hard, and I really value your input. Thank you. =] To be honest, I'm not much good at writing or good with words (obviously, as you can tell), but I really wanted to write my own because I had this idea for a story for a long time and had read so many other stories. rnrnI had been meaning to get someone to beta it, but kind of forgot. =/ rnrnThanks again!
Date: 04/08/10 03:13 am Title: Chapter 17
Ha! You tell him Kim!
What a douchebag! *throws Mah Maryjane high heel at Tom* watch yourself boi!
Update soon!
Ps I like Georgs girlfriend she seems awesome!
Author's Response: HAHAHA Why didn't I think of that line?!? LMAO! rnrnYa, I like Georg's girlfriend too. I'm going to try and make her a big part of the story.
Date: 04/08/10 01:26 am Title: Chapter 17
ooooo drama! i really liked the chapter! i can't wait for your next update!
Author's Response: I will try and get the next chapter up soon! Thanks!
Date: 04/08/10 12:00 am Title: Chapter 17
I so looove this story and I hope to read more chapters soon, really. I can't say anything bad on this it's perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks hun! That really means a lot to me =D
Date: 04/06/10 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love this story, write more please!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm updating right away! =]
Date: 04/06/10 11:17 am Title: Chapter 16
i need more more more of this.!
Author's Response: I will try and get the next chapter up soon =]
Date: 04/06/10 10:56 am Title: Chapter 16
I love this story
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: 04/06/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 16
Ah Toms a douchbag! Jerk! She better not take him back soon. Make him suffer a bit.
Update soon I'm loving this!
Author's Response: Yes he is!! Don't worry, she won't take him back right away haha
Date: 04/05/10 09:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohh I just LOVED! Your details made me feel inside the story *.* Ohh John is pathetic, how can a man can be like this? UGH! Deena is so cute, If only i had some work friends like her! Gave her cash and a free day! HAHAHA
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!! I'm so glad you are enjoying it! rnrnYes, John is pathetic. He's a real person, actually. =/ A pathetic excuse for a man. I am taking lots of my real life and putting it into the story. =DrnrnThank you for the kind review!
Date: 04/05/10 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 15
omllll D: you know. i love this story and i don't want you to leave it there so you best update soooooooooon.! xDDD
Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can! I am typing it up right now!! =D
Date: 04/05/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 14
Are you kidding me!?!? you can't stop the chapter there! I want more, It's so good! I love it.
Tom and Kim are just the cutest together :)
Author's Response: =/ Sorry. I had to stop it somewhere. rnrnThank you so much!! I'm glad you like it! I am posting the next one right now, but please don't shoot me =/
Date: 04/05/10 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 14
i actually cried during this chapter ;__;
Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you cry =[rnrnIt was really hard to write. I cried typing it up.
Date: 04/04/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 14
I'm in love right now
Author's Response: =D
Date: 04/04/10 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 04/04/10 04:06 am Title: Chapter 12
Natasha is a real bitch of a friend mate. If her relationship is bad there's no need for her to ruin everyone elses happiness. I hate people like that ugh. Like they get upset when people tell them their truths. Anyways I'm loving this! Please update soon!
Author's Response: The funny thing is, she's a real person! haha rnrnI am so glad you are liking it!! I will update as soon as I can =D