Date: 12/29/10 06:19 pm Title: Who Am I To Say
THIS FUCKING SUCKS! not the writing but the story i like happy endings not sad ones that make me want to go on a skittle binge and make me cry!
Author's Response: Awe, I'm sorry I made you want to go on a skittle binge and make you want to cry =/
Date: 12/26/10 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 47
Aww, I love happyendings:-) I am so glad he came to her… well I expected he would come to the airport and then I thought it was hopeless when he didn‘t. But this was beautiful, there can‘t be better end:-)
Well… first of all, I want to apologise… my English is not very good… I mean, I understand everything, reading is not a problem at all, I enjoy reading in English, it is pretty cool, but say or write anything in English is much more difficult for me, I am not so sure about my grammar… So there are going to be mistakes, especially tenses are problematic for me (and ignore my articles, ok? They are wrong, or they are not there at all:)), so I am sorry about that. The reason why I am writing this is that I‘d like to say quite a lot of stuff about this story, so I‘ll just hope you will understand what I mean and that you won‘t think I am dumb or something because of my mistakes:-) I promise I will try to do my best:-)
So, I really liked it. I couldn‘t stop reading and I spent few days with this story. It was funny, but I had tears in my eyes few times as well. Especially in the end (letters for everyone of them were totally heartbreaking).
When Kim and Tom had sex without protection, I honestly didn‘t think she could possibly get pregnant… I was sure she was using something, pills or whatever, and condom was just insurance. I will try explain it… I just don‘t know a girl (or a woman, Kim was 25 year old after all), who does not using pills or any other contraception, and lots of them do not even have a relationship. It is pretty common (as far as I know), be protected all the time, with or without guy… damn it, it is hard to express what really is in my mind right now. Anyway, I thought Kim was kind of stupid she wasn‘t using anything. Because condom is not the best solution, it is supposed to be just insurance. Well, I really didn‘t like Kim for being so naive and stupid about this. And I was pretty upset about the baby. At first I was hoping she will get rid of it… I know, I am a bad person for wishing that, but I couldn‘t help it. I just was not OK with it, it was a huge complication. They didn‘t know each other long time and everything… (I wrote a story, you know, pretty long one… almost neverending story, about Tom and one girl as well, but I let them have a baby after EIGHT years together, and they still weren‘t ready for it at first! They were pretty shocked and did not know what to do about it:-) Of course they were exited about it after few days, but I just want to explain why it seemed wrong to me, have a baby after barely few months).
BUT I really got used to that idea and eventually I was OK with the baby. And I have to say I was pretty impressed that Tom was going to be responsible and take care of Kim and the baby. It was so sweet:-)
But then they lost the baby! Aww, I was upset again! (Seems like I do not know what I want, huh?:)) I was so sorry they lost their baby… (And I hope Kim will not have any troubles with next child in the future, when she will decide to have one).
Well, I am glad there was a happyending, it was a relief. I enjoyed reading the whole story (maybe sometimes there were too many unnecessary details repeated, or too many exclamations and excitement for my taste, but I guess it is just because different point of views… You know, in our country we don‘t get so much exited over every little thing, we are pretty calm people here:D But it has nothing to do with the quality of your story, of course. It is just my observation, and I am always honest about stuff like that, so I hope I expressed myself right… It‘s pretty annoying not being able to say exactly what I want because of my primitive level of English, you know?:-))
OK, now I am gonna stop talking:-) Well, it took me almost an hour to write this, but I am glad I am done with it, so I can let you know I read you story and I loved it:-) That is the only important thing, after all:-) Sorry about the lenght of my review, but I needed to write my opinion:-)
P. S. I will read the sequel as soon as possible:-)
Author's Response: I understood everything you were trying to say in your comment, so you don't have to worry. Your English is very good and you really don't have anything to worry about, hun =] rnrn
Now, to answer a few things from your comment: When Kim got pregnant in the story, I realize there was no talk whatsoever of her being on birth control. That doesn't mean she wasn't on any birth control...however, it doesn't mean she was either. You are in fact the only reader who had brought this up. I realized way later (after I had typed up the chapters and had posted them, that there was no talk about birth control or anything else) I decided that it was too late to go back and change anything. It's still too late. rnrn
I wish I would have went back and added something though. Now I see it would have probably done some good. =] rnrn
I am glad you enjoyed the story over-all and happy to hear your thoughts. I love to hear what you think and am glad you were honest =] (No worries about the length of the comment either. I think you deserve the right to your opinion =D )rnrn
Thank you for the comment and I do hope to hear from you again in the future. I hope you like 'Wrapped In Your Arms' as much as you enjoyed this one as well.
Date: 12/21/10 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 31
she needs to trust Tom like, if that happend to my boyfriend then I would take his word on it
Author's Response: Yeah but she's already had so much stuff happen in the past. She has trust issues with people already. Finally after letting Tom in someting like this happens.
Date: 12/19/10 04:20 am Title: Chapter 28
yay!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: =D
Date: 12/19/10 01:16 am Title: Chapter 26
Lame!!! more sex!!! jk
Author's Response: More sex? There wasn't any sex to begin with LOL
Date: 12/18/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 25
yay I am so happy!
Author's Response: Glad to hear it =D
Date: 12/18/10 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 24
the dark haired girl should be Jasmin and the red head should be Shanon
Author's Response: Thanks for the ideas =] If only I didn't have names already =D
Date: 12/18/10 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 23
o.0 I am so happy, but what about john
Author's Response: What about John? Kim and him were never together. She had feelings for him a long time ago and he hurt her...hurt her bad. The only person Kim wants now is Tom =D
Date: 12/18/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 22
:D it was a planned date! and jost was a part of it!!!
Author's Response: haha how'd you guess? =D
Date: 12/18/10 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 22
:D it was a planned date!
Author's Response: =D
Date: 12/17/10 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 21
aww yay this is good I love it!
sorry I don't post everytime :( I'll try from now on
Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it, hun! It really means so much to me =DrnrnDon't worry, you don't have to review every time. Just knowing that you like it, makes me feel happy. Thank you!
Date: 12/14/10 08:47 am Title: Chapter 47
*sigh of relief* well...ahem....well uh *sniff* yeah speechless!!! So uh im gonna head over to the sequel now and embrace the awesomeness of that one!!! Woooo!! This was absolutely beautiful beyond compare, well done honey!!! Big ups!!
Author's Response: =D Thanks hun! I am so glad you liked it!!! It really means a lot to me =] Considering this was my first fic and all...I was a bit unsure about it, but yeah...it really, really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it =D I hope you like the sequel as well. Thanks so so much!!
Date: 12/14/10 08:33 am Title: Chapter 46
Oooooohhh eeekkk girl this has me on the edge of my seat!!!
Author's Response: haha and of course I had to leave it on a cliffhanger =/
Date: 12/14/10 08:17 am Title: Who Am I To Say
Gut wrenching!!! *sniff* TOM u freaking ASS!!! Damn you!! But on a side note, just for this chapter cos I kno this aint the end.
Author's Response: You're right... Tom is an ass!!
Date: 12/13/10 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 12
TTTTTOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM
Author's Response: haha maybe? =D
Date: 12/13/10 09:21 pm Title: Chapter 42
Omg!!! I don't want to brag myself... I kno way happens!! Oh NO!!! I'm scared to go on but I know I must *sob* eppp here I go>>
Author's Response: I know, it's hard to do, but if you want to get to the sequel you must continue reading. You can do it, hun. =]
Date: 12/13/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 8
aww she is not a slut just for dancing her friend is a bitch
Author's Response: Yeah, Natasha is being a pain. =/
Date: 12/12/10 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
o.0 Kim and Tom are gunna fuck like monkeys
Author's Response: hmmm....I don't know about that haha
Date: 12/12/10 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
yes yes you do like Tom
Author's Response: haha maybe she does =D
Date: 12/12/10 11:15 am Title: Chapter 35
That was not wat I was expecting...Tom is just making it worse!! Using sex as an escape is a big NO NO well as not only physically hurting but it was emotionally. Oh dear how will this end...
Author's Response: It's true. Tom lets his emotions take over and doesn't think things through. He just takes action and doesn't think about the consequences. In the end, Kim gets hurt. =/