Date: 05/03/10 11:53 am Title: Just a Little Reminder
I'm glad your doll was okay!
And yeah, theres been alot of TK....kinda too much, but *shrugs* its still good XD And yeah..that kid NEEDED to be threatened with abandonment
Author's Response: Lol thanks! :D And now you know that it's a real doll freak writing this freakish doll story. XD
Haha yeah I went a bit far with T.K. ;P But needed to get it out that he's not just some side character that will be tossed aside at the end or something. At least, that was my aim. Who knows. XD;;
Date: 05/03/10 10:08 am Title: Just a Little Reminder
Aww, I loved it:')
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 05/03/10 07:44 am Title: A Soft Spot
poor t.k. i guess that it's a good thing that he's a doll...and poor tomi and bill...they don't even get a chance to be around each other...that's sad...
Author's Response: Yes, T.K.'s just fine. ;3 But yeah, Tom and Bill need some real time together. :(
Date: 05/03/10 07:17 am Title: Just a Little Reminder
I understund that this isn't about Bill and Tom anymore. I'm just afraid that T.K. will steal Bill from Tom and that's the reason I don't like him. I'm so so sorry but I just can't let go of that feeling. I know it's stupid because it hasn't happened but you know...
I promise I'll try to think differently about him and keep my mind open. I love so much Bill and Tom together in this story. I thought about maybe to wait when story is finnished and read it then as a one go but I don't think I can do that.
This is a really good story!
xx
Author's Response: Lol there's no need to apologize. I wrote T.K. this way on purpose so people would think exactly that, but I suppose I went a bit overboard and now all the piled up T.K. hate is making me dizzy. @_@ And a bit sad. ;P
Thank you so much for being willing to at least give him a chance. There needs to be readers willing to change their mind or at least not completely hate him, or else this entire story won't work out at all. ;P
Thanks again! :)
Date: 05/03/10 05:16 am Title: Just a Little Reminder
I'm honestly not surprised this moment came and I think it had to happen (just like Tom said with their own moment). A part of me feels so bad for T.K. because he is just stuck in wanting something, someone like Bill (if not Bill himself) because he wants to feel that kind of love from his owner.
At first, reading this story made me upset, because after all Bill and Tom had gone through in ABD, to now have someone try and break them up...well, I will swallow my pride and say it made me really sad, but I still read on regardless.
Wanna know what changed my opinion of T.K.? The night I was chatting with 'him' on formpring. I was trying to ask 'him' specific questions just to try and figure out if he was really so mean to want to just break them up but it was a lot of his answers and emotions under them that made me realize that he's not a bad 'doll/person'.
But like you said, there's a lot of T.K. we don't know yet that we've yet to see, so I will just end this with saying that I don't hate T.K. He's like that nuisance child that makes you angry because you think you can control him but then find out you can't and he continues to annoy you and YET you love him and care about him regardless.
And really, also the things that 'Tom' has said about T.K. also made me change my mind about him. I know it will never happen, but I'd love to see a moment between Tom and T.K. just because I wanna see what their real interaction is like and see if T.K. still puts up his act even in front of his Mama Tomi.
Tom is extremely compassionate to T.K. having been in that exact situation and he can probably understand even more where he's coming from, wanting to have a life with his owner, who in this case is Bill and also his boyfriend. I know that kinda splits Tom's loyalty, but I know that his first priority will always be Bill, but there's also this part of him that will always be that doll and that's why he won't throw T.K. out or abuse him in some way, not unless he hurt Bill and even then, I just don't see Tom being so horribly mean back to T.K, even IF he manages to steal Bill from him. Tom became such a humble person at the end of the first story, he had lost what was most important for him until he found it again. It's like that second chance at life and he's trying to make the best of it now.
T.K. will continue to surprise me and I honestly wanted to hug him here when he was at the verge of tears because of Bill's threat. I get where Bill was coming from, yes, very much so. In a fit of anger, I'd have probably done the same, but it isn't until you put yourself on the other side that you go 'well, fuck. that was a low blow'.
I feel for all three here, that's my honest answer. I see where each of them are coming from and don't even know how they can fix it without one of them ending up super hurt.
Reality is that T.K. is a part of their life and they can never get rid of him without losing a part of them. He's their child. You can rip him out of your life but then you will always have that guilt in your heart and you will always wonder if what you did could have been handled differently.
Review is kinda long and I'm sorry, but I guess as a reader of this series, I owed you my answer, when you feel like everyone is hating on this story because there's not much Tom/Bill.
I MISS Tom, I don't deny it, but the times he's been here, I truly think he continues to be so fucking wonderful and I love him so much, but T.K. I just can't hate anymore. He wants love, attention and understanding. He was to belong and feel wanted with all the good and the bad and I can't fault him for that because that's what we all want in life.
Also, I know that you will continue to show us more of T.K.'s life and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Wow what a review! XD!
Haha I'm pretty sure I've already lost a handful of readers from all the extensive T.K. time, so I thank you tons for still reading. And also, I know that you had the opportunity to find out a bit more about T.K. before others, but I'm still glad you gave him a chance at all when you started 'speaking to him' in the first place, because all the T.K. hate hurts a bit. ;P
Lol it's ironic you saying you want to see a scene between Tom and T.K. only, because there's actually going to be a few (I think?) of them, the first happening in the very next chapter. XD I can't say for sure if anything really important will be revealed in this initial meeting alone since it's not written yet, but yeah, they'll have time to speak when Bill's not around.
To say Tom's loyalty is split is completely true. I don't even know what to add to that because you hit it right on, except maybe that despite the connection Tom has with both of them, it's Bill's decision that will really matter in the end. I hope I'm not spoiling anything by saying that.. XD;;
Thank you so much for the lovely review. :) And of course, thank you for the T.K. support, and for all the amazing feedback on this story in general. T.K. and I both really appreciate everything. ;3
Date: 05/03/10 05:15 am Title: Just a Little Reminder
sok, it was a better chapter than the last few, ill honestly admit. i agree that the constant t.k. being more than annoying was a bit too much for me to read through at times. i hope that you do put Tom in the chapters more and dont let Tom's and Bill's relationship end, its too sweet. i thought you wouldve made t.k. more of Bill and Tom's rebel son than want to seduce Bill constantly, i guess that confused me the most. maybe t.k. will start respecting his parents and not try to rape his dad? Tom's the mom, so Bill's the dad? yeah... hehe.. i liked that you added more Tom in this one though, it seemed to flow a lot better. love you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. :) I'll try to not let Tom edge out of the story away from here on. Haha the thing about T.K. though, is that despite calling Tom his mama, he doesn't exactly see himself as their son, so everything he's doing is fair play in his mind. Well I mean, he kinda does see himself as their son, but kinda not... ;P It'll get explained later. XD; Thanks again!
Date: 04/30/10 08:07 pm Title: A Couple Good Laughs
awwwwwwwww he's ticklish!!! that's so cute!!
i feel some Bill/T.K. coming on and i'm ready for it!
hahaha Andi worries too much but it makes him a good friend
great chapter
Author's Response: I think I honestly love you for saying you want Bill/T.K. stuff to happen. :3 But alas, the next two or three chapters don't have any sort of thing. D: As for later chapters, there might be a liiiiiiiiiiiittle something... I mean, what? ;P
Thanks so much. :)
Date: 04/30/10 11:47 am Title: Prologue: Here We Go Again…
I know the feeling. I've had dips in reviews before n I go rock back and forth in a corner lol! But really, don't let it get you too worried. This story is fantastic
Author's Response: Lol! Haha yeah, I really shouldn't have been so bothered by it. I'm just a super paranoid person that jumps to conclusions alllll the tiiiime. @_@ But thank you so much. :)
Date: 04/29/10 11:01 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
Just so you know, I can't always review. I don't always have time to read chapters while I have net, so I save them and read them later at home.
"So you're the one who turned him into a weenie" had me DYING btw lol!
Author's Response: I do understand that not everyone can review and I'm honestly not expecting that every single person reading to review every single chapter. It's just that the huge drop in the last chapter worried me. :T
Lol! I'm glad you got a laugh outta that. I blame my sister for such a phrase... XD
Date: 04/29/10 01:43 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
Hahaha T.K. is ticklish!!!
How cute!!! x333333
And so is that gif of Tom getting tickled! XDDD
x3
And that ending with Tom was really sweet. x]
I'm kinda missing the Bill/Tom fluff.
You write it really sweetly.
OMG and Andi freaking out about Bill being poisoned! XDDD
I also really like seeing the different side of T.K.
But he needs to stop tricking Bill already! XD
Update soon I hope!
Oh and don't worry about super long chapters, they're the best! :D
Author's Response: T.K. acts like he's all that, but so weak to something like tickling. XD
I know it's been really lacking, but there's some Bill/Tom fluff coming up! x)
Lol thanks! I'm working on the next part. :3
Date: 04/28/10 03:41 pm Title: A Couple Good Laughs
I'm on Team TK. Seriously.
This story is addicting. Enough said.
Author's Response: If you're serious-serious, then you're awesome. XD Poor T.K. needs more love, so many people seem to hate him... :(
Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Date: 04/28/10 12:47 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
awwwwwww cuteness to the max babe! i think Bill should stay with Tom thru this whole thing and t.k. should end up with andi~
Author's Response: Thanks! :) Haha we'll see how things turn out... ;3
Date: 04/27/10 05:08 pm Title: A Couple Good Laughs
This chapter was soooooooo cute! And adorable! I love it story!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Date: 04/27/10 02:30 pm Title: A Couple Good Laughs
actually sympathize with TK :P cause i'm extremely ticklish and my friends do that to me all the time -_-' *grumbles* LOL
aww i'm worried because of tom. i fear for what he may think about bill and TK situation..
Author's Response: LOL poor you! XD Although I've been in such a position as well, and so I do understand it as well... D: Hehe XD
More about Tom's thoughts on everything will be in the next chapter! ;3
Date: 04/27/10 01:56 pm Title: A Couple Good Laughs
I haven't really reviewed like I should, but this is turning out differently than I thought. And of course, that's your right as it is your story, lol. But I loved the Bill and Doll!Tom characterizations from the previous story and this one is missing that completely. There is practically zero Tom in this one.
I really am not liking this TK character much at all. He tricks Bill, he talks badly about Tom but then calls him Mama, and the whole story is basically about him.
I feel really bad for Tom in this one. He was the one that spoke up to adopt this doll to start with and now the doll is trying to take his life away from him basically. That's really gotta hurt, but it's completely getting glossed over. And the whole Bill/Tom relationship is not very prevelant in this sequel.
This isn't meant as a bad review, really! I just wanted to explain why my reviews have been absent. :D
Author's Response: I'm going to make an announcement regarding this sort of thing in the next update, but this is exactly why I did separate this from A Beautiful Disaster instead of just having it continue as a longer story. Before I even started writing this, I knew it was going to be a lot different with T.K. being there, and so I separated it and just made a sequel as if to start everything anew, rather than just continuing Bill and Tom's love story from the first one. I do understand how you feel, and I probably could have made these beginning chapters a lot better in terms of having Tom around more often along with getting readers to get to know T.K., but I guess all I can say is the drama between all three of them that everyone is waiting for will come along. Apparently I just have to pick up the pace and make it happen like... now. ;P
Thank you for your thoughts and honesty! :) I'll work on making it better so everyone can enjoy it again.
Date: 04/27/10 10:16 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
I don't think you should worry about the reviews, really. People just tend to have lazydays, in which they are to laxy to review. It usually doesn't have anything to do about the quality of the chapter.
And for this chapter; lovelyyyy. I don't like it, but I have to say that I like TK more and more each day that pass. But I still want Bill to be with Tom! You can't take them away for each other, NOOOOO!
just... Make TK happy to, will you? pretty please?
And I'd love some more Bill/Tom action, ehehe. Sorry, can't help wanting it: (
So yeah. It's beautiful. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Haha thanks, but there definitely are some people who are losing interest in this story with how it's coming along apparently. :T I'm so glad to hear from those who are still enjoying it, so thank you. :)
I'm so happy to hear T.K. is starting to become more likable! x) And I'm not planning on separating Bill from Tom, so don't worry. ;) And there will be more Bill/Tom time coming along! :3
Date: 04/27/10 10:01 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
Tom looks adorable being tickled. I womder if someone would make a 'Tickle-Me-Tom' doll? You know how much i love this story, how it makes me laugh, cry, smile, it's wonderful. As always, I'm patiently waiting for more after thoroughly enjoy what i just read. Take a bow.
Author's Response: LOL "Tickle-Me-Tom" sounds so adorable!!! Omg! XD Awwww I want one! x)
You're so sweet, and I thank you so much for your kind words. :')
Date: 04/27/10 07:38 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
awwwwww... ticklish tomi.. iz adorable.. <3 <3 moar soon?
Author's Response: Hehe it does make a cute image. x) Yes, I'm working on the next part! :)
Date: 04/27/10 04:03 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
And you wonder why I dislike TK so much. He keeps getting in the way of Bill and Tom! :/
But the tickling thing was a bit cute. And I really adored how protective of Bill Andi was, and how Tom reacted. It was really sweet. I'd like to see the TK/Andi pairing, pl0x. I think that would be just about the sweetest thing ever <3
Author's Response: But he's so fuuuuuuuun. ;P
Hahaha writing Andi out in this chapter I feel like I made him really annoying with how overprotective he was. XD And ahhh, more T.K./Andi requests. I'm considering it, I swear I am, but you know Tom/Bill is the only pairing I ever write. ;P But I'll think about it!
*loves on you*
Date: 04/27/10 03:03 am Title: A Couple Good Laughs
I like the fic but I feel like in the last three chapters nothing importNt happened besides hair change name change and ticklishness.
Author's Response: Really? Hm, I see. I'm sorry you feel that way, but I was just attempting to show more about T.K. since he's really not just that annoying bastard I wrote him as in the first chapter. But anyway don't worry too much, I'm gonna pick up the pace and start all the real drama soon and that means Tom will appear more often and blah blah blah... ;3