Date: 03/30/10 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
awwwwww sooooo perfect !!!!!!!! love it !!!!!! XD
please continue!!!!! ^^
Date: 03/30/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aw, so sweet.
Date: 03/28/10 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1
i wasnt sure what to expect when i started reading this, since it just said 'tom is different' and i guess i didnt put two and two together with the title xD i really like this so far, and i like how bill is the popular boy, in most stories, its tom as the popular boy and bill as the 'freak'.
im tracking this story so i will know when a new chapter is posted (:
Xx
Date: 03/27/10 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! I love this story!!! XD it is soooo cute!!! please continue!!! hope everyone is jealous of Tom because he is with Bill !!! XD
please continue!!! :)
Date: 03/26/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
This seems like it'll be interesting.
Date: 03/26/10 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's a good concept for a story, but there is ALOT of gramatical errors such as unneeded capitalizations, and incorrect punctuations. There's alot so I can't go through them all.
friends.par- friends par.
Sexy. Bill Fell- sexy. Bill fell
he laughed, placing his hand now in Toms "So where do you want to go" he was happy- ... now in Tom's. "So where do you want to go?"
Look through it, theres quite a bit. But I really like the story.
Date: 03/26/10 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm in love with this. Hopefully the following chapters will come quickly and soon? What will make Tomtom Orange or Purple?
Date: 03/26/10 11:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, interesting...! :D
Date: 03/26/10 01:55 am Title: Chapter 1
=O not my celly felly Slagathorn! how dare they want it!xD
I LIKE IT!!!! KEEEEEEEP IT COMIN'!!!!
