Date: 05/04/10 11:51 am Title: IX
His fingers brush Tom’s hand in passing, and they both jolt at the built up current of energy between them. It’s electric like the sky during a thunderstorm is electric, jarring as it would be if the world suddenly stopped spinning. Behind shy eyes, they grin at each other and then applaud as the groom runs away with the bride.
What a beautiful description! I love how aware, how in tune they are of each other, even with as long as it has been, even with everything that has happened between them. Fantastic chapter! Off to read more since it seems you posted another one! *bounces*
Author's Response: I love it when people point out passages that they like, and that's one of my favorites, too. I'm glad you're picking up on the little things, like how in tune to each other they still are. Because they're still twins. =)
Date: 04/30/10 09:32 pm Title: VIII
Wow, the tension between the twins was very well portrayed in this chapter. I'm so glad that they are going to talk... I hope Tom doesn't let Bill escape again! Can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! ♥
Date: 04/30/10 03:28 am Title: VIII
still with you! yay!
Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!
Date: 04/30/10 01:33 am Title: VIII
Thank goodness they spoke and it was a little awkward but not horrible. I mean, it's still so tentative but I feel so much better after this chapter. :D
Author's Response: I think everybody feels a little bit better after this chapter. <3
Date: 04/29/10 09:45 pm Title: VIII
The light at the end of the tunnel is getting brighter!
Author's Response: It is, it is! ♥
Date: 04/29/10 08:23 pm Title: VIII
Still with you, dear :)
Okayk, 3am, so short review for this and the previous chapter at the same time. The previous chapter felt weird without Bill being there. Like Tom's lonely world. It made the chapter's world somehow incomplete just like it would be if the twins would have to separate. It worked that way very well.
And this one... Maybe for the first time on this fic I felt relieved. They're finding back. At the same time I fear every move to turn Bill away again, but no, they can't. I love how you write from inside Tom's head here.
It's going to be all good, I feel it. Just that... WHY there has to be the wedding, when twins should be making up? :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you caught on to the emptiness of the chapter vs. the emptiness of Tom's world without Bill. I'm really glad that feeling came through loud and clear. And I think relived is a common feeling after reading this chapter. There's definitely a glimmer of hope. We're on our way back down the hill now, so things are going to really start taking shap. Thank you so much for reading and for your review. <333
Date: 04/29/10 08:21 pm Title: VIII
thank God bill is back!!
Author's Response: Yes! Right where he needs to be! ....sort of.
Author's Response: Yes! Right where he needs to be! ....sort of.
Date: 04/29/10 04:37 pm Title: VIII
YES!
I can't thinkg of anything else to say ♥
Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 04/29/10 04:05 pm Title: VIII
*__*
Author's Response: <3
Date: 04/29/10 04:01 pm Title: VIII
Great chapter, cant wait for an update! I feel so bad for the twins. Hopefully they'll break through the shell thats come between them..
Author's Response: There's definitely a light at the end of the tunnel. =)
Date: 04/29/10 01:50 pm Title: VIII
still with youuuuuu.
huh. i'd hate to be in their situation. so awkward. :/
Author's Response: I know it's awkward, but it'll get better. They're still brothers, after all. =)
Date: 04/29/10 01:45 pm Title: VIII
....he was THISCLOSE to getting smacked by me if he hadn't opened his mouth.
XD
Good boy, Tom. I'm proud!
Author's Response: Well then, it's a good thing he opened his mouth, huh? =) <333
Date: 04/29/10 01:22 pm Title: VIII
Of course I'm still with you! Loving this! The reunion was all I could have wanted, despite nothing being resolved, there's a promise of a talk afterwards now. It's great that Bill is looking healthier and I loved Tom being so flustered by his presence. I'll be looking forward to more. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're still loving it, even though we still haven't gotten anything resolved yet. There's a light at the end of the tunnel, yes? =)
Date: 04/29/10 12:56 pm Title: VIII
Ahh, the tension. I love it.
Author's Response: haha Tension is good, yes?
Date: 04/29/10 12:50 pm Title: VIII
hell yeah still here.
Author's Response: Thank you. <333
Date: 04/28/10 12:04 am Title: VII
You know I'm reading and re-reading each paragraph, trying to remember everything for the 'small things' that are hidden, right? I'm really curious now. Well, always, but even more now. xD
Author's Response: lol Just enough to drive you a little crazy? I like hiding small things in random chapters that come into play later. It's kind of fun. =)
Date: 04/27/10 08:13 pm Title: VII
I have a feeling that just when Tom is willing to be 'that'kind of brother for Bill, Bill will return with a new boyfriend or something. Yay drama! Haha. I hope that they find one another in the end :) I can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Yay drama! is right. =P There's no telling what's in store for them (well, there is, because I already know, but I'm not telling), but I'm glad you're reading. The next part is up now. =)
Date: 04/27/10 08:11 pm Title: VI
I am in LOVE with this story. The angst is soooooo good. I am a big angst fan. Haha. And you write it perfectly! I pretty much predicted this encounter and the reason as to Bill's 'sickness', but that doesn't mean it was any less powerful. This story kind of reminds me of All It Takes is Time...hm. Anyway, great job! I'll definitely be following this one. :D
Author's Response: I am a big angst fan, too. I'm glad I'm in such good company. haha And I read a bunch of All It Takes Is Time last summer, but I haven't gotten around to finishing it. I should really do that someday soon. But thank you so much for the review; I'm glad you're on board. =)
Date: 04/27/10 05:36 pm Title: VII
It's always so painful to read a story where the twins are apart, missing each other so bad but they won't do the first move to get back together even if it's what they both want. I really like this story, can't wait to see what will happen on the wedding day!
Author's Response: I know; I hate seeing them apart and missing/needing each other, too. However, I tend to enjoy writing them like that because I'm apparently an evil person. haha I'm glad you're still liking it. Wedding day is up! =)
Date: 04/27/10 03:51 pm Title: VII
Who's wedding? lol i feel stupid, but m confused now. m sure it'll make more sense later.
Author's Response: Why, Simone and Gordon's wedding, of course! ♥