Date: 04/27/10 01:25 pm Title: VII
Tom should have asked for Bill's number! Gaah! xD But at least they'll see eachother at the wedding, right? ._. I'm really looking forward to that. (Even though I have a feeling it'll be an angsty reunion xD )
Thanks for adding me on LJ btw ^^ I added you because I like to stalk the good writers on THF, and I think you're an awesome author sooo... XD
Author's Response: Should have, but didn't, because he's a weenie. =P But they will see each other at the wedding -- that's all I can say! And you're welcome (and thank you), although, unfortunately, that journal is a bit boring, I'm afraid. lol
Date: 04/27/10 01:20 pm Title: VII
Oh, Tom. I wanna hit you over the head and hug you after.
Author's Response: Do itttttt. =)
Date: 04/27/10 12:40 pm Title: VII
Ooooh, next chapter shall be very good. After a year of not seeing each other and now that Tom has come to the realization that he wants to be whatever Bill needs him to be, I'll be on pins and needles trying to imagine how their reunion might go. I'll be looking forward to more! Thanks for the fantastic update!
Author's Response: Thank YOU for the fantastic review! Hopefully the next chapter will meet your expectations. =)
Date: 04/22/10 10:04 pm Title: VI
no! :( tom shout stop bill! Dont let him leave again!
Author's Response: =(
Date: 04/22/10 09:53 pm Title: VI
Is he insane? Of course he can be that for Bill. Make him see bby, make him see :)
Author's Response: Of course he's insane. lol I'll work on making him see, promise.
Date: 04/22/10 07:31 pm Title: VI
Yes, I definitely thought that was his "sickness" but for some reason, I thought that they had already been that to each other, and that was why Tom was so desperate to have his brother back. Why he was so upset by these visits, besides just being upset that his brother seems to be hurting so bad. I think I must read too much fanfic and already have things set in my head at the outset of the story, when I should be keeping everything clear at the beginning. So anyway, I was quite surprised when Tom didn't react favorably at the end!
You know I'm always excited for more, and these short chapters are driving me batshit, woman! xD
Author's Response: haha I do that, too, sometimes. I get all my stories mixed up and I'm like, "wait...whaaa?" But no, they've never actually been that for each other. And I know the short chapters have to be driving everyone batshit, because they're driving ME batshit. I want to try to update more than once a week, but life gets in the way and such. But I'm going to try to do better. For you. =)
Date: 04/22/10 06:30 pm Title: VI
-died- ... -is dead-
Author's Response: *revives you*
Date: 04/22/10 05:47 pm Title: VI
Or maybe yell at him while he’s hugging him.
Awwwwww!! It just makes me want to do the same to both of them, maybe smack them a few times, just because. :P
Tom jerks away and it’s Bill’s turn to flinch.
URG!!! NO!!! I love it though; absolutely love it, all that happens/happening in here. So what if it's not good for their mental well-being? It's… wonderful... yeah, idk, I just love it. So that line up there, well, really, seriously, as I read "jerk away" it was underlined, italicized, bolded, made huge, everything to emphasis that one word to me, just because that's how it seemed, and yeah, I flinched back a little reading it, sue me. :P
But really, I think that was one of the most powerful sentences. Like, the first few sentences and the last few are always strong in these short of chapters (NO!! I'm soooo used to the long ones, I feel like I was so spoiled then :P ) But then to have a sentence in the middle stand out so well, makes me smile. :D
But oh dear, the last line is kind of scary, send shivers up my spine. Just the way it seems to mean, Tom goes without Bill for months. Oh dear, it's so scary to think, omg, what happened to Bill? How is he taking his brother rejecting him? Does he understand? Oh fudge, what if he kills himself!? What will Tomi do?? NO!!!! Maybe Bill's watching Tomi. o_O Oooooo... Hehehe, all these things, bah. :P *huggles* (hehehe, I just barely had time to read this chapter and the last, so no review on that one. ^^” Next one though, next one. :D I loved it all the same, except I have more of a craving now. :P )
Author's Response: I'll get back to writing long chapters eventually. But this is just something a little different I had up my sleeve. lol But the last line scared you? I guess you'll have to read the next chapter to find out what's going on. *suspenceful music*
Date: 04/22/10 04:54 pm Title: VI
You're such a genius, girl!
Just let me have a chat with Tom so he can have his brother back, I have to teach him somethin' about twincest!=)
Update soon,make us happy.
Tanti baci
Author's Response: Oh, I don't know about genius, but thank you for the compliment anyway. =) (Updated a minute ago. Though, I'm not sure how happy it will make you. lol)
Date: 04/22/10 03:04 pm Title: VI
Oh stupid, stupid Tom! You just couldn't handle it right, could you?
Yep, I knew it :). And I understand the shock, but... it's still so wrong. It's not a reason to pull away. Especially now, not in this situation. Very difficult situation and I kind of knew that it wouldn't be that easy, but I'm still happy that Bill told him.
And after all, I'm sure Tom will find those same feelings insidse of him eventually. It's just hard to see them both hurting like that. It's just love and it's especially love. It should be enough.
Angsty twincest love rocks! :)
Author's Response: In all fairness, he was taken by surprise. =( I'm glad you're happy Bill told him, even if it didn't have a desire outcome. It was important, though, just to get it out there in the open. Thank you so much for being so awesome. <3
Date: 04/22/10 01:48 pm Title: VI
...THAT'S NOT SICK YOU IDIOT!!! D:
And here I was, thinking AIDS or something *sighs* Oh Bill...oh TOM -.-
Author's Response: Awwww. I know, these poor boys, right?
Date: 04/22/10 12:43 pm Title: VI
omg i knew it! This tears me up every single time I read an update, but I can't stay away because I can always see the light at the end of the tunnel :)
Author's Response: There IS a light at the end of the tunnel. I'm glad you can see it because I want you with me. <333
Date: 04/22/10 11:03 am Title: VI
Oh man, poor Bill, I had an inkling that might have been why he thought he was sick, but I didn't imagine it would come to this. He took Tom completely by surprise, didn't he?
I'm so loving this story, maybe I'm more a glutton for angst than I figured myself to be. Hee, but it's so fantastically written, I can help myself.
Author's Response: He really did take Tom by surprise, which isn't really fair, but you know, it is what it is. I'm really glad you like it. Glutton for angst made me laugh -- that's so me. =P Thank you SO much. ♥
Date: 04/22/10 10:53 am Title: VI
I knew that was what was bother Bill *nods* One of my friends told me it was HIV but I was like, hmmmm, no. *was right* *is smart*
xD
But anyways! I really love this. I'm such an angst-whore, I just love it when it's angsty xD This is perfect for me, I love it.
Author's Response: There were a few different guesses that I got. I really thought everyone would catch on immediately, so I'm glad I fooled some people. =) Also, I'm an angst-whore, too. Angst is my happy place. So thank you for enjoying it with me. =)
Author's Response: There were a few different guesses that I got. I really thought everyone would catch on immediately, so I'm glad I fooled some people. =) Also, I'm an angst-whore, too. Angst is my happy place. So thank you for enjoying it with me. =)
Date: 04/22/10 10:32 am Title: VI
NOOOOO ! My god Tom, DO SOMETHING ! He can't let Bill go ! Omg I can't even leave a coherent review... loll I just really can't wait for the next chapter and I hope they'll be back together soon, leaving your twin is never the right choice Bill... :(
Author's Response: You're so right. Leaving should never even be an option. But the next chapter is up now, so you don't have to wait any longer. =)
Date: 04/20/10 03:20 pm Title: V
Grrr! I really want to hate Bill's wife now, I reallyn do... Like you said, maybe all of this angst has on purpose, but right now it feels so hopeless. How much it takes for them to find each other again... to come back home?
Very angst-filled chapter again, but in a good way. Like I've said before, I love how you write Tom's desperate emotions. It's just that this struggle, this.. stubborness of Bill's is frustrating. Tom would give EVERYTHING for him, doesn't he get it? Now I'm 100% sure that I know what Bill meant on a previous chapter.
Author's Response: It's NOT hopeless, I promise you that. They'll find their way back hoem eventually. Thank you so much for your review. And we'll find out very soon what's wrong with Bill, and what Tom can do to help. =)
Date: 04/20/10 12:55 pm Title: V
omg -heartclench- guh, kk i KNOW this is going somewhere but my heart is dieing with each chapter (its really good though i love that about this fic, a good angst is always welcome)
Author's Response: I knew the story was sad, but I never knew it would have such an effect on everyone. Which kind of, in a sick way, makes me really happy to hear. Just that it's got that strong of an impact. So thank you, even though it's sad and making your heart die. =\ ....=)
Date: 04/20/10 01:29 am Title: V
God, this chapter makes me want to cry. Things are coming to a head. I can't wait to see how it goes when Tom finally catches Bill.
Author's Response: Things ARE coming to a head, but there's still ten chapters to go. =)
Date: 04/19/10 08:30 pm Title: V
I LOVE the way you write. I just needed to tell you that again cause my heart hurt along Tom’s reading this chapter, when he thought that Bill was avoiding him :( I had tears in my eyes and then I was cheering for Tom when he was talking to Bill’s wife ! You make us feel many different emotions by the power of your words ... my god, I love this story and I am really looking forward for more :)
Author's Response: I love that you love the way I write. I'm so glad you can get inside the story and feel what the characters feel. That's, really, one of the highest compliments I can think of, so thank you. More soon, because you guys are awesome. <333
Date: 04/19/10 08:29 pm Title: I
I'm just stopping by to say I really can't wait to read this, but I'm going to wait until it's finished. You're so insanely effective at angst that this could totally wreck me. ♥
Author's Response: I would hate to wreck you, but waiting until it's finished is probably a wise decision. =) There are about ten chapters left, though, so it could take a while.