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Reviewer: kissmebabe822 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/10 09:56 pm Title: Part Two

Sleepovers? Blowing off hot girls? Alcohol and Dancing? I love It! Bastian seems really sweet!

I am so glad that Lyric was able to get away for a night, and be a teenager. To feel the desire, and strong attraction to someone else. I think this was a good night for Lyric :)

Thank You so much for the little view into Lyrics past before St. Hell..

Author's Response:

Lyric: Bastien IS a good guy, his mind was just corrupted by Bradyen an-
Misery: Lyric! *gives a look* I know you want to defend him, but it's best to leave the for the next one shot.
Lyric: O_O Oh GAWD! You're gonna write that one?!
Misery: *nods slowly* Gonna have to, babes. For people to fully understand you, they gotta see where you're coming from.
Lyric: *groans and collapses*
Misery: *snickers* Drama queen... ANYWAYS! XD You're welcome, Anna. Keep your eyes peeled for the next one shot, and the next update to St. Hell!

Reviewer: kissmebabe822 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/10 09:24 pm Title: Part One

Aww!! I hate argueing parents. Makes me just want to hug Lyric..

I like gettin an insight into his life. Gonna go read the next part now...

Thanks So Much!

Author's Response:

Lyric: *shifty eyes - sneak attack hug* HAI!
Misery: *giggles* He gives you luffles
Lyric: XD

Reviewer: Annalas Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/10 04:00 pm Title: Part Two

*read both one shots*

I'm glad to see insight into Lyr's life *will EVENTUALLY get around to reading St. Hell* My only suggestion is to reread and check that you replaced Bastien's name with Jimmy. There were a few times you forgot >_-

Author's Response:

Lyric: O_o Wrong universe, Mis...
Misery: *groans* I know, I know... Blame Word for not replacing them when I told it to!! *stomps*
Lyric: *blinks* What are you, twelve?
Misery: *shifty eyes* Maybe? *grins* Ok, fit over! *nuzzles Anna* Danke liebling! I'm glad you caught those before another reader did and I ended up embarrassed as shit!
Lyric: You're already embarrassing yourself.
Misery: *death glare*
Lyric: Uhm... But I still love you? *smiles meekly, offering hugs*
Misery: *nods and hugs* Damn straight you do.

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/10 03:30 pm Title: Part Two

Tom: -groans, covering his eyes- Now this part I could've lived without reading. Well, he first half of it was fine... but god... -groans again- I do not wanna know about my brother... doing that kind of stuff with someone. I think I'mma lose my lunch.
Axel: -smiles a little and pats his head- so over dramatic... -smiles a little at Lyr before hugging him again-
Alcie: -stops groping Mis and looks around- Hmmm...? Oh, -shifty eyes- Hi. ^^


Author's Response:

Lyric: *gigglefit* Oh please, Tom! It's not like there was anything graphic! It was very tasteful and sweet. My first kiss with a guy. *flushes*
Misery: *fondles and nuzzles Nony*
Lyric: O_O And yet you're ok watching that!? *clings to Axel and buries face in his neck* Blind me! Please, blind me!

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/25/10 03:25 pm Title: Part One

Tom: ... ... -blinks slowly- I... I dunno what to say.
Axel: -hugs Lyric with a small, sad smile-
Alcie: Well since these two fail with words, I'll just say it's nice to see some of Lyr's happy memories. ^^ It sucks about his parents fighting, for sure. But at least he had a good friend. :D


Author's Response:

Misery: Well Bastien wasn't ALWAYS bad.
Lyric: *nodnod* He was very good to me, up until... well, you know. *looks away*
Misery: *pets him* It's good to hold onto the fond memories.
Lyric: *tackles Tom and Axel* No sad smiles. The past is in the past.
Misery: *beams and nuzzles Nony* So proud of our boys. They've come such a long way...

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