Date: 12/28/13 03:36 pm Title: It's All Over
I loved the way you emphasized the misery and numbness throughout this chapter! I hope you continue!!!
Date: 02/09/12 09:41 pm Title: It's All Over
Woah.. I liked it a lot. Bloody. Nice. He lives awesome. Sometimes I hate almost all storys have happy endings. But oh well.
Date: 09/29/10 12:02 pm Title: It's All Over
oh sad........... and beautiful!
Date: 04/01/10 09:15 am Title: It's All Over
Why are they going to be separated?
Author's Response: Tom: -raises eyebrow- Because the assholes sent him to Hell. Stupid fu-
Alcie: -shoves sock in his mouth- Shut up, Teddy, kthnx. Anyway, yeah, they're going to be separated because Axel gets set to St. Helena's and Tom doesn't get sent there until a year afterward. So... separation is imenant. Aaaaaaand, apparently there are two more one-shots coming, so be on the lookout. ^^
Tom: -glares at Alcie-
Axel: -dead laughing-
Date: 03/25/10 09:15 pm Title: It's All Over
;-;
That was so horrible.
Poor Axel! ;-; His dad is so awful to him. I'm really glad Tom found him, even though I knew that for the story to work he would live, I was still worried about it.
Another great oneshot.
I can't wait to see more of St. Hell. :]
Date: 03/25/10 04:13 pm Title: It's All Over
oh wow, wow, wowo, wow, and more wows. that was... i liekd how you jus thad him slowly fade, and how Tom felt the numbness his twin was embracing.
Date: 03/25/10 10:53 am Title: It's All Over
So... Lyric isn't exactly capable of replying at the moment. *eyes him worriedly* But, uhm.. He wanted me to mention how much he loves his brothers and that, out of everything, this part did jump out at him:
"Because... i-it hurts to breathe. It always hurts. I just want it to stop. T-Tomi, make it stop."
Lyric told me to tell Axel that... he gets it now. He remembers the conversation they had under the stars over spring break (How could he forget) and he said that he fully comprehends what Axel was saying now, and that now it means so much more. *sad smile and huggles for all - goes to check on Lyric*
Author's Response:
Axel: -whimpers and clings to Lyric whether he wants it or not-
Tom: -hugs both of them tightly refusing to let go-
Alcie: -has nothing to say; clings to Mis and nuzzles-
Date: 03/25/10 06:03 am Title: It's All Over
I was near tears for this!
Axel, how could you do that?! Wanting to leave Tomi here to suffer on his own? Your not some emo kid that needs to cut himself, so dont do it anymore. Please?
So I completely LOVE this whole series, I Love the 'triplets.' Kinda want to read more into Lyrics life, but reading these one-shots makes me want to read more of the actual story.
Thanks So Much!!
Author's Response:
Axel: ... -says nothing, hiding face in Tom's shoulder-
Tom: He doesn't cut himself anymore, kthnxx. Hasn't in a long time. And he's had enough sco-
Alcie: -shoves a sock in his mouth- Comfort your brother and shuddup. Sorry about him. He's grouchy. ^^ Aaaaaaaanyway, I'm glad you like it and there should be a 2-shot about Lyric going up today!
Date: 03/25/10 04:54 am Title: It's All Over
Aw ;____;
Like I said before, these just make me want to read it more and more. And it doesn't help that you're keeping me up at 4.51 in the morning to finish this xD Oh well, I'm finally getting sleepy so I suppose I'll drop off to bed :3
Poor Axel. That poor kid. Like, you'd think that he'd be some emo kid who cuts himself all the time and whines about how pathetic his life is. But the way you write it...it's like we're seeing so much more than that. It gives reason to what Axel does and I was almost in tears as I read this. Especially the bit where he said it hurts just to breathe. That...wow. Powerful :)
I also really like the name Axel xD And the nickname Axe. Too cute. I didn't think it was too bad of a name in Kingdom Hearts but...it's really nice here, definitely.
I need sleep D:
Oh and btw I totes stole the name Lyric for personal use as a name cuz it's epic shizz kthxbai.
I really need to read, like, all your stories. I've been putting it off D:
Author's Response:
Alcie: Yeah, no. He really did have a terrible life, but he never whined or complained about it. He just dealt with it. And sorry for keeping you up, but I"m glad you liked it. ^^
Tom: -says nothing; clinging to Axel-
Alcie: -pats Tom's head-