Date: 05/04/10 11:30 pm Title: Seventeen
Lol i love the thought of caramel pancakes...I'm going to make some! Oh and thanks I really wanted to know why Bill is who he is for such a young guy!
Author's Response: They are sooooo good! I love them. :3
Date: 05/04/10 10:53 pm Title: Seventeen
Oh I hope you're feeling much better now! Thank you for updating~Tom has really came a long way with Bill's encouragement and patience. I really like to shower scene in relation to washing away the past. Hopefully Georg will get his punishment for the hell he put Tom through.
Author's Response: I am feeling worse, actually. It'll pass eventually, then I'll be okay for a month and be sick again. (I suck) Thanks for your care and thanks for the review :D xoxoxo
Author's Response: I am feeling worse, actually. It'll pass eventually, then I'll be okay for a month and be sick again. (I suck) Thanks for your care and thanks for the review :D xoxoxo
Date: 05/04/10 10:43 pm Title: Sixteen
I love being in the rain-imagining Bill & Tom in the rain was beautiful in my mind. Love the song-this was just a wonderful chapter, love this story more and more-thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D xoxox
Date: 05/04/10 10:27 pm Title: Six
You are such a beautiful writer
Author's Response: ;blush; Thank you! So, so much. :D xoxox
Date: 05/04/10 10:12 pm Title: Seventeen
I hope you feel better soon! Once again, another adorable chapter... I'm so glad that Tom is ready to leave the past behind and move on with his life !
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/04/10 09:00 pm Title: Seventeen
OOOH i cant wait for more :P
Author's Response: :D xox
Date: 05/04/10 09:00 pm Title: Seventeen
OOOH i cant wait for more :P
Date: 05/04/10 08:47 pm Title: Seventeen
Awesome chapter! I just love that last bit with Tom letting the water wash away the bad and letting go of the hurtful memories.
Hope you feel better soon. *hugs*
Author's Response: Thanks, love! xoxox
Date: 05/04/10 06:55 pm Title: Seventeen
i hope you feel better soon :) i feel horrible now, compared to when i was reviewing paint , remember the girl i was telling you about? Yea she loves another girl ... Any advice on a broken heart ?
Author's Response: Ouch. All you can do is remember that she wasn't made for you, at least not right now; but everyone has someone for them and the wait will make it so very worth it. You can't cure a broken heart quickly, that all comes in time, but every day it will become easier to move on. If this chapter speaks about anything, it's to remind you that you have to deal with a lot of pain and a lot of shit you'd rather do without but once it's over you will be happy. You'll be a lot happier soon and you won't hurt anymore. xoxox
Date: 05/03/10 08:35 am Title: Sixteen
I love the rain. When I get out in the rain, I feel like I'm getting myself cleaned through and I feel a lot lighter and happier. People think I'm crazy and sometimes my parents won't let me get out, then I sit inside and look out, enjoying that the world gets cleaned for once, cleaned from every bad thing that happens everyday. Suddenly it's a lot nicer to live, a lot nicer to go outside. People don't understand why I love rain so much and they always complain and run inside, while I'm smiling and stay outside.
In this chapter, I felt just like Bill, calm and happy. If I just have had someone next to me like here, I would be more than happy and I've proven my point that even a girl like me, can get someone to like me like that. Thank you for writing this story and for letting me pour my heart out to you. Thank you!
Author's Response: You will definitely have someone to lie down in the rain with. I know you will. xoxo
Date: 05/03/10 08:30 am Title: Two
I'm almost glad that Georg is an ass, or else I would feel sorry for him when Tom went for Bill. Ok, that's a lie.. I like it when people's hurting Georg.. :/ especially when they let him fall down stairs (A) hint?
Author's Response: Haha poor Georg. :-(
Date: 05/03/10 06:59 am Title: Sixteen
this chapter was great! it contained so much and you should be very proud of it^^
Hope that you'll get better soon^^
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 05/02/10 11:19 am Title: Sixteen
I started reading your story yesterday and am actually in love with it (and the song). The writing is really inspiring and completely relates to my life (as well as many others I can imagine). It really moved me and actually gave me some notion of self worth, and for that I thank you.
Author's Response: Xoxoxox!
Date: 05/02/10 10:10 am Title: Sixteen
I loved it. It's as magical and simple as always : Thanks I really enjoyed reading this chapter.
Please take care :D
Author's Response: Thank you! xox
Date: 05/02/10 07:03 am Title: Sixteen
So damn cute. You wrote this chapter so perfect. And the song! BEAUTIFUL. x
Author's Response: Thank you! xoxox
Date: 05/02/10 06:08 am Title: Sixteen
i loved the ending image in this scene, of the three of them in bed. This story makes me want to go sit out in the rain. Perhaps I will sometime in the future. Thanks for the update, keep up the great work, and feel better soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! xoxox
Date: 05/02/10 04:21 am Title: Sixteen
Tomi is improving more :33
Oh god I just fell in love with the song :33
Can't stop listening to it.... :3
Author's Response: I listen to it a lot, too! Haha. My daughter loves it. :3 xoxox
Date: 05/02/10 04:10 am Title: Sixteen
Georg just ruined everything for Tom, didn't he.
Love the image of them lying in the rain.
Love the song! It's beautiful! :]
Author's Response: I think anyone in the rain is a beautiful sight! :3 xoxox
Date: 05/02/10 01:04 am Title: Sixteen
Ah I just want to go lay in the rain now. The song is beautiful by the way. Love the rain sound effects in it as well. Totally brought the song and story together.
Author's Response: It is quite beautiful, isn't it? Vaughnee definitely has talent! xoxo
Date: 05/02/10 01:02 am Title: Sixteen
that song is beautiful! i cried :O. i can just imagine bill and tom and their life in that. wow. its like of this story was amovie that would be the song that would be in the trailer as they showed parts of bill and toms life. swee, sad, and happy. all togethr in one BEAUTIFUL piece of artwork! i adore this chapter :DDD!!
Author's Response: That's exactly how I feel about the song! Part of it makes your heart hurt and the other makes it feel so alive and wonderful! :3 xoxoxo