Date: 03/08/10 10:17 pm Title: Crash and burn
Amazing story!
Date: 12/07/08 11:08 am Title: Sunday morning
God this is sooooo good!!! Please update soon!
Date: 12/06/08 09:46 pm Title: The devil on wheels
Really great start, just had to stop and say that, I am completely blown away, must read more!
Date: 09/15/08 11:55 pm Title: The devil on wheels
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! I love this story!!!!!!! Dont stop! Your on a roll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/04/08 03:39 am Title: Sunday morning
Oh, you just had to stop it there, didn't you? Oh well, I really like this, I love how close the twins are and everything. I so can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 06/28/08 04:54 pm Title: Sunday morning
I am impressed! I like all the characters! I found this Levi guy so cool and I'm glad he's slowly starting to respect boys. Kolina proved herself in being such a protective friend, really like a big sister. And all the other members, they're great. And as for twin's love, I never read about love this pure before, it made me cry... I really, really admire you and your fiction and looking forward to read more of you.
Date: 06/02/08 06:53 pm Title: Sunday morning
No, LEVI, NOOOOO!! Don't do this! They trusted youuuuuuu! I really love the twins in this. This little universe that you created is so perfect!
Date: 05/12/08 09:08 pm Title: Sunday morning
i like it..lol.continue!!
Date: 05/06/08 10:54 pm Title: Sunday morning
Update soon! PLEASE!
Date: 05/04/08 06:54 am Title: Sunday morning
Yey, you updated!! This is amazing, I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 05/04/08 12:13 am Title: Sunday morning
Ahhhh! I'm so glad you updated! ^^ Great chapter... I'm totally wondering what Matthews found out. :/ Can't wait for the next one! More soon, please! :D
Date: 05/03/08 01:36 pm Title: Sunday morning
Its a great story :D
Date: 05/03/08 06:27 am Title: Crash and burn
BRILLIANT STORY!!!!!!
Date: 05/02/08 05:33 pm Title: Sunday morning
Man been waiting so long for this so glad that it was amaazing! lol Love Jesus seems like a chill dude.
Date: 05/02/08 05:10 pm Title: Sunday morning
^_^ *squeals* &, surprisingly, I literally squealed when I got the e-mail saying this had been updated. You just made my day, big time.
&& I'm loving the story still ((of course, I love all your stories)).
Just one thing... what's up with the single quotation marks for almost all the dialogue?
Other than that, I love it.
And... gah, I just love the affection between the twins. You make it so sweet and loving. Great chapter-- and oh! I can do one of those gangster style handshakes, too! ^_^ Of course, thanks to that "how to be gangster" vid.. lol, sorry, that part between Tom & Jesus (nice name, by the way) made me laugh.
:D does this mean i'm going to be seeing more updates from you????????????? or was this like a... once in a blue moon type of update?
Author's Response: lol blame the single quotations on my beta XD anyway i'm glad you liked this, and yeah i will be updating more often i even have a new fic i'm worknig on XD right now i'm working on the last two scenes of #27 which should be up tomorrow if we're all lucky ^_^ thanks so much for reading this :D i'm happy you reviewed :D
Date: 05/02/08 12:26 pm Title: Sunday morning
getting interesting
Date: 05/02/08 12:10 pm Title: Sunday morning
ooooh, love it!
Date: 05/02/08 12:09 pm Title: Sunday morning
I love your characterisations in this. Your own characters are interesting and well thought out. I love Kolina. It seems as if Levi is slowly coming round... Or, he's intrigued by Tom at the very least. Although I'm worried about this 'information.' This is so interesting!
Author's Response: Aaaaawwwwwww thank you love!! I'm so happy you like this. A lot of people love Kolina and to be honest she's one of my favorite OFC i've ever written. As for Levi, things will start to clear up in the up coming chapters. I'm glad you don't know what he's thinking, i really wanted that to be clear. You don't know whether he's starting to like Tom or if he's just using him and Bill to get all the info he wants. Thanks for your review love. ^_^ it means a lot to me :D
Date: 04/09/08 05:15 am Title: Crash and burn
ohhhhhhh my god!
absolutely loveeeeeeeeed it
please keep going!!
it´s like so beautifull!
the way Tom takes care of Bill is just breathtaking!
keep going ok??
I´m so looking forward for the next chapter!!!
Date: 03/31/08 11:26 am Title: Crash and burn
Love this story! The dynamics between Bill and Tom are so intense and beautiful, especially from the view of a stranger. Please update soon!