Date: 05/08/10 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'm intrigued so far. I'm also curious to find out what the connection is between Bill and Tom and why Tom knows so much.
Author's Response: The reason why Tom knows it all has briefly been explained already, he's like a "guardian", but it will be expanded on at some point. I'm glad you're intrigued :D
Date: 05/08/10 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
I cant wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 05/08/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really where this is going! It seems like I always get into alternate universe stories. Tom seems nice, I don't think I'd mind finding a book like that. ;] Are they going to age as the story goes on?
I like your writing style. I don't know if I've actually read any of your other stories, but from what I see here, I think I am going to need to. I like how you describe things in such.. detail! I feel like I'm reading a novel.
As for how I think they'll get along from here? Somewhere, in the back of my mind, I had a weird thought about how maybe later Tom could actually turn against Bill. But, I doubt that. I am thinking that they'll get closer. I'm not sure what'll happen just yet.
I hope you update soon, I'm going to track this!
Author's Response: Don't think I would mind finding a book like that either, haha ;) Yes, they're going to age! The story goes through how Bill grows up :)
Oh, thank you! I hope you enjoy them, if you decide to read any of my other work :) I'm extremely flattered, thank you so much!
Thank you for tracking and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story b29;b29;
Date: 05/08/10 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Haha, it's fine that you took long because this was a really sweet chapter :)
I like how mature Tom is. It's really nice. I think they're going to get along just great and Bill's going to be protected by Tom. I'm wondering what kinds of trouble they're going to have from here on out D:
Author's Response: Ah, good! Tom is meant to be a very mature kid, since he's not exactly a ~normal kid, so I'm glad that came across. Thank you!
Date: 05/07/10 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
awe! more?
Author's Response: Yes! I just don't know when. D:
Date: 04/06/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooooh, I really like this. I love stories with children, first of all (and you write children wonderfully. I feel like a kid reading this, smiling like a total fool), annnnnd it has that Peter Pan *feel* to it, if that makes a tad of sense. I don't know. But I like it. A lot, a lot, a lot. :D Quite excited for the next chapter!! Great work.
Author's Response: Yaaay :) Aw, thanks. I love writing the boys as children, too, which helps, I think. And I get the Peter Pan feel! Hopefully the next chapter will be up... soon? :D
Date: 04/06/10 12:23 am Title: Prologue
I like this. :3 I kinda skimmed over it when you posted it on LJ, but I didn't say anything. Annnd.... yeah, I'm excited. :)
Author's Response: You lurker! :o hhaha, I'm glad you like it :)
Date: 04/05/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Hi Tomi :3 more puuulease :)
Author's Response: :3 soooon :)
Date: 04/04/10 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww ! This is so cute! Love itt
Author's Response: Thank youuu *_*
Date: 04/03/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw now that was a cute little scene. I loved the little golden tornado. This is just such an interesting, different story. :D
Author's Response: The golden tornado was all Nina's idea! I'm glad you think so, thank you! <3
Date: 04/03/10 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi, Tomi-chan :)
very cute, and six year old Bills and glitter is always love XD
Author's Response: hehe, thanks :3
Date: 04/03/10 12:12 am Title: Chapter 1
HAI TOM!! *Waves* Ok I'm a dork, but the story is getting all the more interesting! Can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: You're no dork :D Thank you! :)
Date: 04/02/10 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really cute so far. I like it a lot. Please continue soon! :D
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Author's Response: I will continue, I'm glad you like it! :)
Date: 04/02/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
-waves- Hi TOMI!!!!
Very nice. Descriptive. =D
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
Date: 04/02/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
ooh hello tom :)
please tell me thats not the last we see of beary ;)
i seriously adore bill like this.
xxxx
Author's Response: hahaha, Not yet. Beary isn't dead. :D awww, he's cute, no? But bby can't stay 6 years old forever :O
Date: 04/02/10 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this story already and it only has two chapters:)
Author's Response: This makes me happy to hear *_* :)
Date: 04/02/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
HI, TOMI! :D
Dude. I am legit excited for this. It sounds kind of like a manga called Fushigi Yugi if you've ever heard of that, where a teenage girl is pulled into a book set in ancient China, and it's just an overall epic manga because there's these seven constellation warriors that have to protect her, and...not your average medieval times manga :D
But yeah. I'm excited for Tom :3
Author's Response: :D I can honestly say this is not related at all to this, because I have never heard of that in my life before! =p I'm excited for Tom, too ;)
Date: 04/02/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww!
Author's Response: heheh :3
Date: 04/02/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Frank-Alfred Dennis St. Willhelm McAlberto Thomās is fucking amazing.
And you too. Just so you know.
Author's Response: The feeling is mutal, bb! <3
Date: 04/02/10 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is sooo cool! It definately reminds me of all those fairy tales and whatnot that I'd read about or watched as a kid.
Author's Response: Good! It's meant to be fantasy and fairy-tale-y :)