Date: 03/24/10 12:32 am Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
this is just beautifully written. I LOVE THIS! and BILL!!! OMG, so intense! XD I LOVE IT! more soon?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! More will be up soon.
Date: 03/24/10 12:05 am Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
I like this, even though Bill got shot...
guess what? I turned 21 today, so it's my birthday too....
Author's Response: Thank you. Oh, happy birthday to you too! Hope you had a great day.
Date: 03/23/10 11:51 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
I am soo loving this right now. Totally loving you! haha
It's kinda weird that you would post this, because for a long time I've been thinking that its strange I haven't come across a story where one of the twins is hurt at a concert, like on stage while playing. I hadn't thought about actually writing one, but I was definitely hoping I'd come across one. And than all of a sudden today you posted this! So hats off to you!! :D
Their natural dependancy is easy and believable to read. I love how your sort of stopping to take the time to give a brief explanation about who each person is. Even though we already know, I like how you add it, and how it flows and it's not choppy.
I'm excited for the story. Kills me what happened, but yeah.. Can't wait till you update.
It's a favorite already! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've wanted a story about the twins being injured at a concert, especially shot, for over a year. I am so overwelmed with your review now, so, thank you again. I like to write each story as if the reader don't know anything about these boys to begin with, it's just how I like to do it, so I am glad you do too. I will update soon, and hopefully often from then. Thank you so much! :)
Date: 03/23/10 10:33 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
Ahhhh this is horrible! The story is really amzing but ah the idea (which is really good) so sad I pray to god this never happens! Is this a oneshot or will it be a series? Still good story I loved it,
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! This is a chaptered story, which will be around 27 chapters long, I think.
Date: 03/23/10 09:21 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
Goodness! This sent chills down my spine!
Author's Response: Good! That must mean I'm doing something right! Thank you.
Date: 03/23/10 08:45 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
....whoa, that is sad. googd, dont get me wrong, but sad.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 03/23/10 06:47 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
Poor Tom. What a nightmare fo rhim to see Bill like that.
Author's Response: Yes. That must be a nightmare. Thank you for your review.
Date: 03/23/10 06:34 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
I really don't know if I should read this... MCD is so sad.. But it's very well written so I think I'm gonna give it a try anyway...
One more thing, the banner is AMAZING, one of my favorite, all time.
Author's Response: Thank you for giving it a chance! I know that not many read MCD so I'm really glad you try. And, thank you so much, I had fun making it!
Date: 03/23/10 05:59 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
I dont know if I should read this I CANT stand MCD :0 but il wait till the next chapter maybe *hoping* bill is actually alive ?.. :P
Author's Response: Then I'm not sure if this is the story for you, lady! Since, you know.. Bill is.. Euhm.
Date: 03/23/10 05:56 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
Omg this is fantastic so far.
I truly loved it. 'am going to read it for a second time. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That makes me smile so hard. :)
Date: 03/23/10 05:44 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
wow! Intense! OMG!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/23/10 05:34 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
:'( So sad.
I even turned Zoom on as I read the last part and it made it worse. :'(
Author's Response: :( Aw, baby. Thank you for your review.
Date: 03/23/10 05:25 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
I'm so glad I know your motives behind killing Bill, you meanie. I do love this, though. And the banner is so beautiful, omg. *hearts*
Author's Response: Haha, it's the whole point! Hahahaa. Thank you!
Date: 03/23/10 04:55 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
O______O Better hope this doesn't invade my dreams and in the morning make me think this really happened the night before in Marseille... Shit. *is crying now*
Author's Response: Oh, I really hope not! Thank you for your review and *hands tissue*.
Date: 03/23/10 04:39 pm Title: Marseille, France, March 23rd 2010
this is not a good start....
i mean it's good, nicely written and... thick (for lack of a better word) without it beeing too thick, but you just shot Bill in your first chapter, man!
Author's Response: Well, I must be evil then! Thank you so much though!