Date: 03/22/10 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
I'm hooked. Love it so far...only I pray Jorge doesn't decide to make Bill pay later for turning him in--Bill is due some happiness. Really looking forward to the next chapter and the meeting between Bill & Tom!
Date: 03/22/10 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
really interesting so far. I can't wait to read more.
Date: 03/22/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
I love it all! amazing job.... I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: 03/22/10 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
I love it so far!
Date: 03/22/10 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
omigosh this really good so far i will totally favorite this is u keep posting i cant wait to find out what happens next and dude..tt
Jorg is such a fucking prick
Date: 03/22/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
Since you have one other review, I will be courteous and take a minute out of my life to tell you... WHY DID YOU STOP IT THERE?? Im in love with this story now, you absolutely have to finish this thing. I love it, liebe liebe ist. Btw cool sugestion, at some point in the story Jorg could come back to Bill, just when Bill has his life straightened out, Jorg comes back? Eh Eh?
Author's Response: Thanks so much fopr your comment! And yeah, I will definatley try to write that in!
Date: 03/22/10 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
Great start, but poor Bill :-( I do want to read more.