Date: 05/09/10 05:15 am Title: Chapter 3
I love it !! More pleeease! :D
Date: 05/09/10 02:34 am Title: Chapter 3
awwww, poor Bill. maybe Tom can watch him like a hawk and get Bill to stop cutting. thanks for updating~ i giggled hard when Tom smirked at Bill's 'I'm really hot.' comment~~~ i hope Tom jumped right into Bill's bed when he asked them not to leave.. xoxoxoxo more please babe?
Date: 05/09/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww poor Bill! Give me more!
Date: 05/09/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter 3
thats so sad i dont want bill in anymore pain T_T
Date: 04/15/10 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
hmmmm I wanna sleep now like Bill
Date: 04/14/10 01:54 am Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
I'm loving the story line it's a great idea. The only thing I'd have to say is more description. You got the right amount of dialogue but like I said description could use more. I'm not saying to get overly word-y but some more words out side of dialogue would add greatly to this. But still good story none the less, I wish I could read the next chapter now but I have to go to sleep DX. By the way I noticed chapter two doesn't have a title, I don't know if you meant for it to be that way but I just thought I'd let you know.
Date: 04/10/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 2
please let Tom be gayer than hell and flirt with Bill like its going out of style? i think Bill would open up more to him if he was getting hit on by Tom like he was just as intranced as Bill is to him. Tom acting like a love-sick virgin would be so cute~
Date: 04/09/10 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
so far i like it! :D
and...i LOVED Bills reaction to Tom's hotness! :)
Date: 04/08/10 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bill sure does go to sleep a lot. I really like how this started and I can't wait to see what makes Bill finally come out of his shell, or if he does at all! I would like to know more about what Tom thinks about having his parents adopt a kid his own age.
Date: 04/08/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
AHHH!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!! XD XD XD UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/08/10 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, poor Bill. I do hope things get better for him now that he's there with Simone and Tom. Really enjoying this story!
Date: 04/08/10 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww can't wait till the next chapt i wanna see more Tomi/Billa :D
Date: 04/08/10 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
ive been waiting for u to post more of this so glad u did luv this so far
Date: 04/08/10 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
cute! Tom is hot though!
Date: 03/27/10 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
Looks good! I hope you will update very frequently :) and that this story will be a long one hehe!
Some parts in this chapter seems a little rushed? I don't know..maybe I'm the only one who thinks so.. but it is well written! You write with many details, and I like those kind of fics.
Date: 03/25/10 03:29 am Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
Please Please PLEASE! For the holly Tokio Hotel more is needed :D
Date: 03/23/10 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
Hey, I really enjoyed this first chapter! I feel so sorry for Bill, he's been through so much already and he's only sixteen! I really hope that he learns to open up to his new family, that he and Tom get on and he won't have to be alone anymore. I'm really interested to see how this story unfolds, so please update soon! I'll be tracking this :D
Laurie =] x
Date: 03/23/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
I like it. Please keep going.
Date: 03/23/10 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
Hmm I like it so far but are we going to get to know what happened to bill's mom? Or what became of jorg? Is he going to come out soon and try to hurt bill or is he out of the story for good?
Date: 03/23/10 01:42 am Title: Chapter 1- All he wanted.
update again