Date: 05/29/10 08:13 pm Title: Devour
Nickelback is from my province and they have been here a bunch of times so I've seen them before...they are AWESOME in concert. I've never seen Breaking Benjamin, Sick Puppies or Shinedown (as I had said) before. I'm really looking forward to it. I will definitely let you know how it goes!! =D
As for the story, you can't expect things to happen just like that. I think if you rushed things your characters wouldn't have been developed enough. When I read your story, I feel like I'm right there and can see what's happening. I can't do that with a lot, you know?
I LOVE IT!!! I get so excited when I see a new chapter has been posted =D I'm a fan HAHA
Author's Response: That's wonderful. Breaking Ben is so great live. I saw them in January. It'll be amazing, I just know it. rnrnI know what you mean with the characters. I know it's a long story, but I wanted that development. It wouldn't have worked out right if I hadn't done it that way. I write the way I would want to read it.
Date: 05/29/10 07:52 pm Title: Devour
This will be the first time I get to see Shinedown in concert and I am soooooooo PUMPED!!! I have been wanting to see them forever and I can't wait! I pretty much bought the tickets just to see them! HAHA That's so awesome you got to meet them!
Don't freak out, this story is just as amazing as your first one! I LOVED the first one because you had so much going on and I don't think it was slow at all. You know how to keep us readers wanting more =D
Author's Response: I haven't seen Shinedown or Nickelback yet. Or Sick Puppies for that matter! But I've seen Breaking Benjamin and that concert would have just been amazing. You seriously have to have a fantastic fucking time and let me know how it was. ^_^rnrnThanks a bunch. I had a lot of people telling me the first one was too slow. But at least someone liked it that slow. ;) hahaha
Date: 05/29/10 07:46 pm Title: Devour
YOU MET SHINEDOWN?!?!?!? I am so jealous!!!!!!! I get to see them open up for Nickelback on June 1 but still...LUCKY GIRL!!!!
Now, I think you are moving at a perfect pace with this story =] Not too fast and not too slow.
I think Tom and Trina are moving at the perfect pace with their 'friendship' as well. I like that they have a little secret between the two of them and everyone is so scared that Trina is going to kill Tom. It makes me laugh everytime April gets all worried HAHA
I loved this one and I can't wait for the next! =D
Author's Response: Shinedown was just so fucking CHILL. I loved them. They were so awesome. I wanted to go to their concert in Fargo, but I couldn't get tickets. A friend of mine(my Liz) actually works at a radio station there and we were just at the station when they showed up. It was great. I'm jealous of YOU for actually getting to go to the concert. -.- Not fair. I hope it's a fuckin' BLAST. Actually. I know it will be. haharnrnI'm glad you like it so much. Seriously, I keep freaking out that I'm going too slow because that's what I did in the first one. Agonizingly slow. haha
Date: 05/29/10 07:01 pm Title: Devour
I'm so inlove with this story, it's almost embaressing!
It would be really fun if like tom and trina flirted more. but.. she seriosly needs to dump taylor.
And dumping taylor doesn't mean she has to be with tom, so if she dumps Taylor she can play with Tom a bit, like to test him if he really can be trusted! Just some ideas :D
Update sooon!
Author's Response: Those are some good ideas. Using Tom just sounds like a fantastic idea in general. lol ^_^
Date: 05/26/10 01:11 pm Title: Santa Monica(Reprise)
Where'd you go?
I missed ya so
seems like it's been forever
since you've updated...
Please another chapter :)
I think I've been going crazy for awhile
I'm in denial, going through withdrawal.
Trina's missing in action at law!
Hahahaha, bear's claw. I'm a geek. >< I made a remake
of that song! Where'd ya go?-Fort Minor
Insane in the membrane!
Author's Response: I'm amazingly not dead. I've just had a minor case of writers block. BUT. I'm better now and I'm working. ^_^ Fear not.
Date: 05/20/10 06:50 pm Title: Dream On
Hehe cute chapter specially love April and her shovel moment lol
Trina really needs to break up wit mr clingy and Tom wit stupid whore hehe
can't wait for the next chapter
heart u and ur wonderful mind
Author's Response: Gettin' there. I promise. ^_^ thanks for the lovez!
Date: 05/19/10 05:47 pm Title: Dream On
ooh! I like Tom being all sweet and wonderful, hehe!
I really dislike Giselle, her atitude and personality is just enoying, her name doesn't really make it better, haha! Nah, just kidding!
Another lovely chapter, so I'm gonna ask you like I think I always do, to update soooon! :D
Author's Response: I think you do ask every time, but if you didn't, I think I would feel sad!! I tried to pick one of the most annoying names in my database lol so I think it worked out.
Date: 05/19/10 05:41 pm Title: Dream On
I've been wanting to watch Glee since the beginning
and haven't found time. But I did last night! And I love it!
Also, you named the chapter after the song, I suppose..?
I like this chapter it's, b-a-s-i-c :)
Author's Response: Lol I DID name the chapter after the song. It's a great song and it was a fantastic episode. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. I wanted to keep it a little low key for now. Shit's gonna hit the fan and I need people to be ready for it. ^_^
Date: 05/19/10 04:39 pm Title: Dream On
I think it's good that Trina has her guard up around Tom. I would be the same way if I was in her position. It's nice to see them taking it slow and just being friends.
Taylor is being a big baby about everything though. I can't stand the guy haha
Author's Response: Yes! You're feeling exactly what I want the audience to feel! I'm getting it across. Excellent. I'm glad you can't stand him. lol
Date: 05/17/10 06:47 pm Title: The Bird and the Worm
AWWWW!
She misses Tom C:
Loved loved loved this chapter. I like the idea of her teaching Tom guitar.
You're a great writer and I can't wait to see what's next. :)
Author's Response: Aww!!! Thank you! Times 2! I hope you like what comes next. I try my best. ^_^
Date: 05/16/10 11:01 am Title: The Bird and the Worm
Awwww :)
It's so cute..
Everyone else is in their "What the hell?!?!" moment
While Tom and Trina are getting back to the basics
It's nice and sweet ;)
Author's Response: I like that!...them getting back to the basics because they so are!
Date: 05/16/10 10:07 am Title: The Bird and the Worm
Haha, that was cool!!! Finally they're on speaking terms again...XD
Author's Response: Lol Right? Everyone's diggin' it, but they needed to hate each other for a while.
Date: 05/15/10 09:36 pm Title: The Bird and the Worm
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW freakin happy moment =D
i love this story and its coming along wonderfully..now trina and tom need to break up wit their significant others and get together =D did i mention i heart u
Author's Response: hehe. Aww! I heart you too!!! Thanks! And fear not, I have a plan. MUAHAHAHAHA!
Date: 05/15/10 08:42 pm Title: The Bird and the Worm
dump taylor, dump taylor! haha ;)
I like the idea of the guitar training. That means more Tom/Trina alone time, hehe! I could really picture Bills' and the others faces when Trina were nice to Tom, wich actually made me laugh out loud!
Please, update soon! I wanna know what's gonna happen next. Can't you give me a smaaaaall hint on what's gonna happen in the next chapter? :D
Author's Response: Hahahaha. I could give you a hint, but I'd have to kill you. ;) And then it would be useless to you. I'm workin' on the Taylor thing. I have a big ol' surprise for that. hahaha
Date: 05/15/10 08:32 pm Title: The Bird and the Worm
I really liked this chapter. I'm so glad that Tom and Trina are kinda/sorta friends again.
I like the line where she finally admits to herself that she missed Tom. It will take time but eventually things will be good between them...I hope =D
Congratulations on your nomination! You totally deserve it! =D
Author's Response: Lol thanks times like...10. I'm not sure. I think I over-exaggerated, but it doesn't matter! Thank you! lol I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/13/10 03:58 pm Title: Bad Things
I was expecting lightening but..
I got fucking FIREWORKS!
She, she, almost died?!
I called that :) And Tom's still a jerk,
for the stupid things he said to Trina a long time ago..
JesusDani, I will die if this isn't continued!!!!!!!!!!
:):):):):):):):)
Author's Response: Lol I will have to continue then. Can't have death anywhere! Fireworks are pretty fun, though....
Date: 05/13/10 09:54 am Title: Bad Things
.......totally at a loss of words.....I am literally in SHOCK right now....I mean, I kind of knew what the reason was since it was logical (yeah logic is the way I work) but I guess I just HAD to READ it to BELIEVE it...I just...can't even begin to explain the emotions I have right now...I don't even know myself if I'm actually happy, or sad, or...even...I just don't know...this is truely the first time a story would do that to me...non the less, I stil absolutely lOVE this story...you are an AMAZING writer, seriously...don't EVER stop writing...that's my advice... :D
Author's Response: I will take that advice. Thank you so much. Not to copy you or anything, but I don't know what to say except for thank you. :D
Date: 05/13/10 08:20 am Title: Bad Things
wooooooooowowowowowoowowowoowwowowo
jajajajajajajaj
It's good! :DDD
I want the NEXT chapter soon! :D
Author's Response: I'm working on it as fast as I can. I have a portion done already! :D
Date: 05/13/10 01:33 am Title: Bad Things
YAY! Tom has normality now! And the secret has been unleashed. Holy crap. All of that just because of stupid crazy people. Not even the good kind of crazy either......
Author's Response: Mmmmhm. I hate crazies. I do. They ruin everything. lol
Date: 05/13/10 01:29 am Title: Bad Things
i. love. you. this was beautiful and epic and i stopped studying for finals to read it. SO MUCH LOVE RIGHT NOW
Author's Response: Lol. I'm flattered that you stopped studying. But hey, you're supposed to take breaks right? ;) Thanks!!