Date: 02/06/12 11:03 am Title: A Fairytale Gone Wrong
Sequal?
Date: 04/13/10 01:43 pm Title: A Fairytale Gone Wrong
Wow, I really liked it, though I think it should be rated 'R'
But yeah it totally shows all the emotions a relationship like that can bring. Good job!
Date: 03/22/10 06:55 pm Title: A Fairytale Gone Wrong
I hope that the people this happens to in real life have a support system outside of the relationship that can show them how unfair it is and help them get out. This isn't fair to Bill and anyone else.
I think I saw somewhere that this was your first fic, if that's true, amazing job, you write like a pro and the story was beautifully developed.
Author's Response: I agree whole heartedly. It's never fair to be in that kind of a relationship.rnrnAnd yep, this is my first fic. Thanks so much! That really means a lot to me that you enjoyed it. :D
Date: 03/22/10 12:58 pm Title: A Fairytale Gone Wrong
I see this is ur first story on here! i wish my first fic is half as good... :P I absolutely loved this fic! It is such a great idea and the song fit so perfectly. I love how its in Bill's POV and therefore it is a bit vague what's going on in Tom's side.... Somehow I think Tom does love Bill in some weird, twisted way.... I love how you started with this fairytale life Bill had and all this talk about Prince Charming :P I love how Tom was so sweet and charming at the beginning and I love how you had everyone else somehow see Tom's bad side; something that Bill was oblivious to... and i also love how Tom would comfort Bill after hurting him, and then stop after awhile... The atmosphere of this fic is great! I love that it's in Bill's POV... makes things more blurry and unclear, makes me wonder about what's going on in Tom's mind... Poor Bill tho... :'( But I dunno, I think it's nice that he's holding onto hope and that he still loves Tom after everything (but maybe that's the part in me that loves to see fic!Bill suffer... eep!)... I hope everything will be ok for Billie... anyways, lovely fic! I absolutely LOVED it! Thank you for it, and I'm looking forward to more fics from you! I have my eye on you! o_O
Author's Response: Yep, yep! First fanfic ever! I was so excited when I was posting this. :DrnThank you very much. The song randomly came up on my MP3 player one day and I started planning the story out in my head. I'm just glad you enjoyed it. :)rnYes, Tom does love Bill in some strange way, I'm sure of it. Bill just wanted his Prince Charming and I think a part of Bill didn't want to see the bad in Tom.rnI never considered Tom's side in this. Hehe, maybe this story needs a counterpart from Tom's point of view. :3rnThank you so very much for the long review! I appreciate it very much! :D
Date: 03/21/10 05:54 pm Title: A Fairytale Gone Wrong
I really like this - it was so sad, but in a really weird way...it made me feel optimistic. You made Tom such an asshole. D: Great story! :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)rnYeah, Tom is an ass in this story. Originally it was the other way around, where Bill was abusing Tom, but at some point it got switched around in my head.rnThanks! :D
Date: 03/21/10 04:10 pm Title: A Fairytale Gone Wrong
I've had friends that lived through that. Makes me sad everytime I think about it. Good story.
Author's Response: It makes me sad as well. I had a close friend go through it last year and I'm glad she was able to get out of it. I hope your friends are alright. D:rnThank you very much. :)