Date: 11/05/24 11:24 am Title: Just a Kiss
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 06/13/10 06:51 am Title: Just a Kiss
WOW, thank you for you're kind review, it made me smile. Yes, I have written others, but I have yet to post them, I am currently working on one called "Gangster's Prayer" there's a Banner on my Bio on the very bottom as a tease which will soon come with a summary. Thanks again. xoxo
Date: 04/27/10 07:52 pm Title: Just a Kiss
Wow. I really really liked it!
Author's Response: Thank You so much for you're review!
Date: 04/23/10 04:02 am Title: Just a Kiss
I really liked this. It was sweet and innocent while showing how much they love each other.
Great job. :]
Oh and p.s. I agree that you should change it to italics.
It's done like this:
< i >Word< / i .>
But without the period or spaces. :D
Author's Response: OMG, thanks I couldn't figure that out for the longest time on how to make italics. so I will go back and change it. danke!
Date: 03/26/10 07:19 am Title: Just a Kiss
I have to say, it's good to see a story that shows at least one twin wrestling with the ethical aspect of their relationship. A lot of people just go twins...so what? on this site. But I wouldn't find such an uncomplicated relationship between relatives plausible. And nice banner. :-)
Author's Response: I very much liked reading your review. It was nice to see someone read this from the point of view I was headed with this. Plus your own ou tlook on this really was nice too.rnThank You for your review, and I can't wait to read all your fics! :)
Date: 03/22/10 07:33 am Title: Just a Kiss
I hope for a sequel
Author's Response: Hmmmm...maaaaaybe. thx for the review!
Date: 03/21/10 07:04 pm Title: Just a Kiss
Cute. you want constructive crit? um, instead of HIM, HE, etc, maybe italics would be preferable? very good for a first :) very nice story
Author's Response: THATS A GREAT IDEA! way better, now i gotta learn to do italics. thank you so much!
Date: 03/21/10 06:24 pm Title: Just a Kiss
aww so sweet! Just one 'innocent' kiss, how lovable is that!
Nice one shot.
Hugs
Author's Response: Very lovable. :) *kiss *kiss
Date: 03/21/10 12:35 pm Title: Just a Kiss
This was very good, especially if this was your first fic. Love the build-up, reading Tom's thoughts throughout the story and of course the kisses. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 03/21/10 11:28 am Title: Just a Kiss
Aww, so sweet. :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you for your review!
Date: 03/21/10 08:28 am Title: Just a Kiss
Hmm, this was alright... Fluffy and cute. Could use another proof-reading, but it wasn't bad. I'm actually very intregued by the idea of Tom kissing Bill when he's asleep- for me it reminds me of Sleeping Beauty, lol. Plus, it's naughty! And naughty is sexy. :) I loved when Bill called Tom sexy, hehe.
Cute story. Keep writing twincest! :)
Author's Response: Your so right, it was needing another proof reading. I appreciate your honesty, it really does help! :) Sleeping Beauty..aww. We love naughty *evil smirk*
Date: 03/21/10 08:21 am Title: Just a Kiss
holy craaaaaaaaaap x3 that was really good!!! :D i mean it! made me shiver loool
Author's Response: :D awww..goosebumps. Thank you for the review! i'm glad i made you shiver. hehe