Date: 03/23/10 07:05 pm Title: Lapsus Linguae
Of course you are! Thankee for the translations! *smooches* I know enough English and Spanish to get by, and know a few odd words in German, but all that at once, made for a very confused Mari. Hee. Thanks again!
Author's Response: You're welcome!! German is my native tongue, but I've been living in the U.S. and speaking English since forever!! lol. Sorry once again for the confusion ^^
Date: 03/23/10 06:46 pm Title: Lapsus Linguae
Awww, poor Bill. I feel so bad for him. Liking this very much, but if I may make a suggestion, could I beg you to put the translation to the sentences in German? I'm not that familiar with the language and it makes difficult to follow the story with so many foreign words in it.
Author's Response: I just added a translation for what Bill says in the chapter's end notes. Sorry for not adding it in the first place. Am I forgiven? :)
Date: 03/23/10 06:32 pm Title: Lapsus Linguae
i really love this story
Author's Response: I'm glad XD
Date: 03/23/10 05:55 pm Title: Lapsus Linguae
love this story
Author's Response: Aww thanks :)
Date: 03/23/10 12:55 am Title: Vae Victis
HA! I looked it up, he's begging Tom for help b/c he's starving. "please hepl me, I'm starving, my stomach hurts, please I must eat"
I love the internet. It know's all.
Author's Response: Wonderful! Yes, the internet is the supreme source of knowledge. :P
Date: 03/23/10 12:52 am Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
*Sigh* do I have to look up what he said? Can't you just tell me? I think you've hooked me on this, though I know things will get better between them, then worse when Jorg finds out, then hopefully better again I'm still a little on edge. I'm hoping Tom can do something to earn Bill's trust so that a relationship can begin and grow. And I'm hoping you update this regularly b/c I'm dying for more!
Author's Response: I'm pleased to have hooked you. *Mwuahhaha**evily cackles* Oh, and regular updates are a definate :)
Date: 03/23/10 12:42 am Title: Vae Victis
I like the idea of the story very much and greatly hope you continue and FINISH it (sorry for the caps, I feel that I need to make a point though, this is one of my favorite types of stories and I am hoping for a conclusion). Tom is an interesting character and I look forward to seeing him develop more. Bill is intreguing though I know nothing about him, and I am greatly interested in this world you've created.
Author's Response: I will definately finish this story!! I only just started righting it the other day, so it might take a while though...:) Don't worry, plenty of chapters to come!! Welcome to my world XD
Date: 03/22/10 05:21 pm Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
Hopenyou continue soon! This is really good :D
Author's Response: New chapter soon :)
Date: 03/22/10 02:56 pm Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
I am really loving this! I love your style of writing and this type of plot really really reels me in. I love it so much so far. Please keep on writing!
Author's Response: Your review makes me smile :)
Date: 03/22/10 03:22 am Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
Love it!
Author's Response: Yay!
Date: 03/22/10 01:43 am Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
Good chapter :)
Author's Response: =)
Date: 03/22/10 12:36 am Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
Poor Billie boy is hungry! ):
I LOVE THIS STORY THOUGH!!!!
Author's Response: Aww thank you :)
Date: 03/21/10 11:46 pm Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
he finally answered him...i can understand though why he wouldn't talk...poor bill...and tomi's got a crush on him...this should be interesting...
Author's Response: Oh yes. It most definately will be interesting :)
Date: 03/21/10 11:37 pm Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
This is so beautifully written. I'm really enjoying how taken Prince Tom is with Bill already, how much he seems to care for him. I'll be looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! It excites me that you find my story beautifully written. If only I oculd convince my English teacher to think that too...
Date: 03/21/10 11:19 pm Title: Cum Tacent, Clamant
more please getting good
Author's Response: :)
Date: 03/21/10 12:17 am Title: Vae Victis
Interesting so far, looking forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/20/10 07:34 pm Title: Vae Victis
what a shocker for tomi, huh? i think it's funny...but where will they go from there? can't wait to find out...
Author's Response: I'd be shocked too. Silly Tomi :)
Date: 03/20/10 07:17 pm Title: Vae Victis
2 words 'love.it.'
Author's Response: 2 words: "Thank you."
Date: 03/20/10 07:14 pm Title: Vae Victis
wow tom clueless much? i love storys for the older days. with kings and queens
Author's Response: I love those kinds of stories too!! That's why I decided to write one. =) ...Plus I thought this would be sexy XD
Date: 03/20/10 06:22 pm Title: Vae Victis
Interesting :D Continue soon! :)
Author's Response: I will :)