Date: 03/25/10 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is wonderful. Please please please update soon. I love how it is developing, and I can't wait to see how Gustav/Bill comes into it.
Author's Response: I'm watching for it, too. Because seriously I'm not quite sure what's going to happen next. If you have any suggestions, please contact me. Thanks!
Date: 03/25/10 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
So the song turns him on. That's no biggy. I really like this so far.
Author's Response: You're right. I should justify why he's so freaked out about being turned on by a song. Thanks for that heads-up!
Date: 03/24/10 02:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
BAHAHHA Oh GUSTAV!!!
MORE PLEASE
Author's Response: Yes, coming soon. I think Gustav is sometimes underestimated as a source of humor, so I tried to show how he might be funny here.
Date: 03/20/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
O_O
BRILLIANT!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Whew! It was a lot harder than I expected. My Bill-muse is apparently not as strong as my Gustav-muse. I'm hoping for suggestions on the next chapter about how to improve.
Date: 03/20/10 09:53 am Title: Chapter 1
wonderful!^^
Author's Response: Thank you. This took a lot of effort. I'm not at all used to writing Bill.