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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/25 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1

A great little story!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/20 03:41 am Title: Chapter 1

this was a really good story!!
you should do a sequel to this!

Reviewer: JESSICA118214 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/12 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Edd

Reviewer: Made_in_Mexico Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/29/10 11:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw.

Reviewer: freedom-reader Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/10 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Awww It's kind of adorably HOTT :P I loved it!

Reviewer: tokioblue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/10 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

My thoughts exactlly. I cant stand the raunchy ones...I mean I like a little kink here and there but so many authors are so worried about making the sex great or last threw the whole stories. I want a plot!!! A plot!!!

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/10 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/10 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

-Drools with a stupid smile on my face- I wish it could have been longer but I know you don't like mpreg. Lifetime part was funny haha. I am happy and your debt is paid off woot haha



Author's Response: :P You owe me your soul now

Reviewer: tokioblue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/10 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ohhhhh... well it was still a tasteful one...none the less...

Author's Response: Thank you. I don't like the crappy one liners, or the really dirty ones. Clean and sweet is good. But every once in awhile it has to be naughty. XD

Reviewer: myself225 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/10 07:47 am Title: Chapter 1

Aww, that ending was soooo adorable!! :)

Author's Response: Lol thanks.

Reviewer: tokioblue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/10 04:39 am Title: Chapter 1

You don't like this wonderful mpreg??? It's ok I do! Good one

Author's Response: Haha. I hate writing M=Preg

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

aw i loved that ^^ it was so sweet and reaally well written! I loved it :)

Author's Response: Thanks xD

Reviewer: Sakura Blizzard Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice. Will we be getting more or is the a one shot? :D

Author's Response: It's a one-shot

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dude this was some good stuff. I reaaaally liked it, dont feel bad about this! It was really good and I've read countless oneshots like these that werent half as good. Good job!

Author's Response: It's how I write smut. Haha. You should see the other one-shots I've written. Haha. This one just happened to be on a subject I don't like.

Reviewer: OutRAGme_982 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

For disliking this story so much you sure have done a good job. I am just barely forging my way into the Mpreg world and I must say this is the first time that I have found the idea of a pregnant male sexy. Bravo. Would you consider writing another?

Author's Response: I tried to make it good cause I promised it over a month ago. But I really don't like MPregs. I detest them. So unless I get some type of incentive to do another one, then I will. This was to pay someone back for a favor

Reviewer: schlampe Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/19/10 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

I rather enjoyed it. :3 But just as advice, make the sex a LIIIITTLEE bit slower.

Author's Response: Lol. Dude. I hate M-Preg. Its something I NEVER write, so I wanted it over fast. >.<

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