Date: 11/03/24 08:16 am Title: {13}
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 01/12/19 12:42 pm Title: {13}
this was a really good story!
Date: 09/04/14 05:27 pm Title: {1}
This is certainly interesting. I really don't get why people always get check mixed up with cheek. Cheek is the spelling you want, check is something you get from the bank and you write how much money you are giving to a person or company. You know, bank CHECK. It just always bothers me and confuses me because they both sound different from each other.
Date: 04/09/13 04:29 am Title: {9}
wasent matthew saposed to be the older twin, in the pictures you named him as the younger
Date: 08/26/12 01:13 pm Title: {13}
AHAHAHAHHAHAHAH!1 I love that mini epilogue!!! You must write more!!
Date: 08/26/12 12:52 pm Title: {8}
“Sorry to be rude but hurry the fuck up, or these babies are coming through my penis!”
xD
Date: 08/26/12 12:47 pm Title: {7}
Oh dear sweet lord..Tom's dad xD
Date: 08/26/12 12:33 pm Title: {5}
"Get the fuck out of my office."
xD
Date: 05/10/12 05:25 am Title: {3}
You really should have got a beta for this, you have tons of spelling and grammar mistakes.
Date: 05/10/12 05:22 am Title: {2}
Simone's an adult right? why is she talking so cruely? how would she know if Tom sleeps around? again why would Bill even admit to this. Bill's 16 not 6, yet it feels like Simone is treating him like one. Do you know what 16 year olds are like? they don't go running to their mommy's if there is a problem all the time. Not every teen wants there parents to know who they've had sex with or if they've had sex at all. Think back to when you were a teenager, is this how you were? whatever, your Bill character is so out of character that he sucks.
Date: 05/10/12 05:18 am Title: {1}
Why do people always spell check instead of cheek? it's Cheek, that's what Bill kissed, Check is when check someones work or you know checking them out.
Date: 04/05/12 08:27 pm Title: {13}
This is awesome lol. Tom's So effin' sweet and adorable.
Date: 02/21/12 11:54 am Title: {1}
And i just loved how Bill referred the twins as "Pea" when he didn't know it was two of 'em! c': *giggles*
Date: 02/21/12 11:52 am Title: {13}
Oh my god, i love this story so, so much. I really thought Tom would be an ass and not care about Bill when he was preggo. But when he right away cared for him ... gosh, my heart melted. Really good job on the fic! I love it so much!!
"I just came to see my sons having sex!”
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!! *dies*
Date: 02/09/12 02:15 pm Title: {13}
WHY IS THERE NO SEQUEL?!?! This fic was so sweet and fluffy, I couldn't get enough. I loved how sappy Tom was, and horny/pregnant Bill was so funny. I think the twins were a bit inaccurate though, they were far too developed for new borns and underdeveloped for four year olds. New borns just sort of lay there and cry and sleep and mouth at things. They can't grin or blow rasberries or lick. And four year olds are actually fairly articulate, the twins sound more like babies than little children.
But it's now 3:15 and I need to wake up at 7:30. I place the blame for my crabby mood tomorrow solely on this adorable story.
Date: 09/03/11 08:04 am Title: {13}
this was a really good story!!
Date: 08/18/11 12:25 pm Title: {2}
Pea... Omg pea... I just... Pea? So cute I'm dying right now lol.
Date: 03/16/11 05:47 am Title: {13}
Haha xD I like the little story afterwards xD
Date: 12/02/10 10:21 am Title: {13}
wow...that was quite the teaser...Ok I just have to point out a timing issue from earlier in the fic. You said that Bill lost his dad a mere year ago in one chapter, then one or two chapters later you said when Bill was 7 his dad took his twin and they never made it back home...other than that this fic was cute and funny.