Date: 05/20/10 10:14 am Title: Chapter 14
Awe, Vicktoria is finally ready to open up to Tom.
They have to be patient with each other and then things will slowly fall together =]
I love it!! This was a great chapter!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! =)
Date: 05/07/10 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 13
:') Please update. I really want to see where this goes haha! :) x
Author's Response: :D
Date: 05/05/10 10:07 am Title: Chapter 13
Can I have my own Tom? HEHE
He is just too darn sweet for his own good! ugh
I love it!!
Author's Response: haha! you know what..i dont think the real Tom is so much different ;) thank you!
Date: 05/02/10 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 12
Gosh. This is just awesome to read. It's all intense and rather addictive to read. I am looking forward to finding out all the gory details of Viktoria's history, and hoping Tom can 'Superglue' all the pieces back in the right place. Just like Bill has been doing i guess. It has such a feeling about it, it nice to read something with such strong emotions running through it. That and seeing this super soft and emotional of Tom, is rather refreshing to read.
I look forward to your next installment!
BrokenFeathers.
Author's Response: wow! thank you so much, that means a lot to me. my evil plan worked, i guess ;) you won't have to wait long! once again, thank you! =)
Date: 05/01/10 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 12
Wow! This was a good chapter!
All Tom can do is be there for Viktoria and be supportive...I know he can do it =]
Author's Response: thank you!!
Date: 04/27/10 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 10
OMG OMG OMG
I WAS TEARING
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:(
Please update.
Author's Response: OH! thanks =) i'll update soon =)
Date: 04/27/10 09:36 am Title: Chapter 10
I hope Tom figures things out and Viktoria isn't too hard on him.
I don't like sad Tom =[
Author's Response: oooh, i think most people hope for that ;) ergh, i dont like sad tom either. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/27/10 03:48 am Title: Chapter 3
I just have to say that the last paragraph or so was really adorable. :)
And the story doesn't seem too piecey to me at the moment. Well, except for that three-year jump. But, well...okay nevermind. lol
Author's Response: aw, thanks! oh, i know..the jump and that shit, but there will be flashbacks to those years i've left out in the future chapters, so the puzzle will be complete one day! thanks for the review!
Date: 04/25/10 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 9
OH MY GOD.
WHY ARE YOU TORTURING ME LIKE THIS?
you need to post the next chapter like.. NOW!
loved it :)
Author's Response: ahaha, oh, im sorry. :( more torture ahead, im afraid :( thanks for the review!
Date: 04/25/10 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
more please xD
Author's Response: ooh, there will be more ;) thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/25/10 04:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait for more!!!!!
I Hope He Calls Her!
Author's Response: eeep, i hope so, too! =) thanks for the review!
Date: 04/24/10 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
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no jk. GOD I AM SO SHOCKED.
Please update soon! :) x
Author's Response: dang! well..that was the response i was hoping for! iloveyou. i'll update as soon as i can ;);) thank you!!
Date: 04/24/10 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 9
Poor Tom Tom =[
Author's Response: i know :( hes a mess, i'll fix him, SOON.
Date: 04/17/10 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
"Tom remembered that moment down to every detail, because that was the last time he had cried."
That's so upsetting... -reads on-
omg. :( Tom... why? ;[
Does this review make you happy? Because after reading that I feel sad :(
Update soon?
Author's Response: eek, im sorry :( i need feedback, like yours, to get inspired, so yes..it made me happy, but im sad you're sad! thank you, i'll try to update soon ;)
Date: 04/14/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 7
I think the last bit made me cry a little.
:( No.
Can you update soon please? PLEASE.
You can't just leave us hangin' like that!
Okay, thanks x) x
Author's Response: aw, im sorry :( hopefully i'll have something up tomorrow ;) thank you!
Date: 04/14/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Aww Poor Tom, I Love This Story!!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 04/08/10 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 6
Embarrasing to write, yet well written!
I was like "O_O" but my mouth was open. I slapped a hand over my mouth at times and went "NO WAY!"
Haha! You're a brilliant writer, and I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
I'm tracking btw haha ;)
Date: 04/08/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
'“Who thought this would bring us more closer together than we’ve been in years, huh?” Tom said and smiled though his tears. Bill could only smile and nod at his brother.'
Aww :') okay, reading...
'"So this is what love feels like.. alright.” Tom mumbled to himself and took a hold of the pillow Viktoria had slept on, smelling her scent. He fell asleep for a few more minutes with a smile on his face.'
Aww!
Oh my. That chapter was rather steamy, wasn't it?! ;D Haha! Well written! :) I'll read on now.
Date: 04/08/10 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
'“Maybe you’ll forget all about me this time.” She finished and closed the door behind her, leaving a paralyzed Tom alone.'
GASP. MEAN.
MEAN.
MEAN.
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okay, I'm going to read on... x)
Date: 04/08/10 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
'“This is ok, right?” Tom asked her as he held up the bottle. Viktoria nodded with a smile. One bottle couldn’t hurt, right? Tom kept eyeing her suspiciously for a few seconds before he started to drink.'
I can actually relate to that O.O Haha! xD
Okay, reading...
'“Vik- uh, Viktoria? I'm, uh.. is she home?” He managed to stutter out.'
I GOT SCARED! I THOUGHT SHE MOVED! OMG HAHA xD
Aw, that chapter is so sweet.
You got me scared! I thought she had moved or something! Haha! Okay, reading!