Date: 05/11/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 4 - Monsters
i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!
Date: 05/11/10 12:57 am Title: Chapter 3 - Secrets
i wonder what happens next!!^^
Date: 05/11/10 12:56 am Title: Chapter 2 - A Blur.
aww poor bill!!!
Date: 05/11/10 12:04 am Title: Chapter 9 - Human Connect to Human
These chapters are quite short, but I adore the concept! However, the twins came together to quickly. Tom kissed him too fast, just suddenly.
but I adored the part in the past chapter where they first met. [I just read this entire thing now XD] and I really find this admirable.
drunk Bill is love. :)
In this chapter, when Bill wakes up, it will be very interesting.
I'm a fan of eating disorders and bulimia [ i know weird XD] so I liked Bill with that.
Date: 05/10/10 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Birthday.
so far so good!!:)
Date: 05/10/10 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Human Connect to Human
Holy crap-what a story! Just read through and loved all of it! Bill picked a hell of a time to fall asleep. I'm hoping when Tom tell's Bill it doesn't screw with his head more, and i'm also concerned about Bill feeling betrayed and having trust issue's...
ready for more!
Date: 04/21/10 01:33 am Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
ugh, Tom was SO close to telling him and now they are in a WORLD of trouble. I don't think Bill is going to handle this well at all. *sigh* ANYWAY, great job! I can't wait to read more.
Date: 04/20/10 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
Uh oh! They're drunk... This is not good xD I wish Tom would just tell Bill that they're twins.. But I guess Bill won't believe him anyway. Since they're drunk xD I wonder what'll happen next, although I do have an idea xD More soon please!!
Date: 04/20/10 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
Mmm... What's gonna happen next, I wonder? Can't wait for more!
Date: 04/20/10 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
=D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/20/10 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
omg
i hope tom won't end *ucking him because AFTER Bill will call him a pervert for having sex with his own bro
omg
oh, aren't we all here for twincest? i'm forgetting this all the time, lol
Date: 04/20/10 09:46 am Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
i hope Billa won't get too mad when he finds out Tomi is his brother. can't wait to see the next bit.
Date: 04/20/10 06:36 am Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
O_O Continue! NOW!
haha so good
Date: 04/20/10 12:10 am Title: Chapter 7- Part 2
OMFGGGG so hot :) plz more :)
Date: 04/18/10 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Part 1
it have potencial. i like the story so far. But the chapters are a bit too short for my liking.
Author's Response: Thank you, we're trying to make longer chapters
Date: 04/17/10 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Part 1
this was lovely!!! (>o
Author's Response: Thank you!! -hugs-
Date: 04/17/10 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Part 1
im gonna keep it short..im really liking..no im loving this story so far...i think its very well written and also the idea is interesting...please update soon =D xo
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much!!!! -hugs- :D
Date: 04/17/10 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 2 - A Blur.
great chapter...im loving the insight into the mind of bill...its very well written xo
Date: 04/17/10 02:04 am Title: Chapter 7 - Part 1
That was so beautiful! I'm speechless. I love how bill is feeling different and better emotions around tom. Can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Thank you :D Bill finally feels safe around someone, and that just happens to be Tom :)