Date: 03/20/10 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom, Tom, Tom...you mistook Bill for the wrong kind of boy. xD
I loved the little twists in this chapter, from Tom running into a fling who turned out to be engaged to the mini-romp in Bill's kitchen. I'm wondering how he'll be able to smooth everything over with Bill. Can't wait!
Author's Response: Oh yes he did. Tommi boy thought he could kiss Bill good and get in his pants. Not going to work. My beta told me I'm so mean for cockblocking. I'm glad you liked the little twists. I try to make every part count, even the odd moments, i.e. paranoid Jason.
Date: 03/20/10 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
hahahahahahahahah tom fucked it off!!! hahaha
please continue!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Date: 03/20/10 10:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
MORE!!!!!! THAT WAS AWESOME
Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try to review soon. I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Date: 03/20/10 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom is soo screwed!!!!!!!!
Still awesome chapter
Author's Response: Ah yes, Tom is most definitely in the doghouse. But he's also a smart boy and will think of something to find his way out of it.
Date: 03/20/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
ooo tom screwed up bad lol.
ok so i luv the story but im slightlyconfused whats with all the numbers through out the story?
srry i just don't know why thr thr lol :
Author's Response: Yes, he did. I'm glad you like the story, and I apologize for the numbers. They appear whenever I upload a chapter then I have to fix them manually. I try to do it as soon as I upload, but because the chapter is so long it took a bit longer than expected.
Date: 03/20/10 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
OH I'm loving this, the chemistry between them is fabulous. Can't wait for more XD
Author's Response: I'll try and start writing the next chapter soon. I'm glad you like their chemistry, I worked hard so it wouldn't be really fake or flat.
Date: 03/20/10 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 2
In chapter two, there are a lot of "r1"s and "r7"s and "r17;"s interfering with the text. But I really enjoy this fic, just so you know. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. The r1s and crap pop up whenever I upload a new chapter. I was fixing the chapter manually when you read it and I apologize for that.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. The r1s and crap pop up whenever I upload a new chapter. I was fixing the chapter manually when you read it and I apologize for that.
Date: 03/20/10 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
It was kind of hard to follow with some of the "r0;" and "r1;"... I think those were computer mistakes... lol
Author's Response: I know...ugh. Everytime I upload they're there. I have to remove them manually throughout the entire chapter. If there's anything that I can do to avoid them, I'd be glad to know.
Date: 03/20/10 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really cute story. Can't wait for an update :)
Author's Response: Story is updated. Thanks for the review. I'm glad that you like it.
Date: 03/19/10 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I like where this is going, please continue writing and I'll continue reading. You have my attention.
Cant wait to get to whatever part has Bill in a dress! :)
Author's Response: You're not the only one who can't wait for Bill in a dress. And I'm glad that you like the story so far.
Date: 03/19/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 1
this is a very nice story, continue soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you, next update is up by now.
Date: 03/18/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
The dresses were beautiful. And I like the way it was written. :) Is Bill gay here? Cause he called Tom a cutie. lol But I do love this story. I can tell it's going to be one of my favorites soon. ;)
Author's Response: Yes, he most definitely is. And Tom's well....we'll find out soon what Tom is.
Author's Response: Yes, he most definitely is. And Tom's well....we'll find out soon what Tom is.
Date: 03/18/10 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
omigosh i luv luv luv this If the Dress Fits and Say Yes to the Dress r like some of my favorite shows this is like gah idk wht to say spet i luv it omigosh u have to post more
Author's Response: I'm trying to remember what Say Yes to the Dress is. The shows all run together and I could never remember the name of most of them *_*. I'm glad you like it. BTW, I don't know if you watched it but the story was inspired by the episode with Pnina Tornai.
Date: 03/18/10 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
hmm great idea tom!!! :-)
thanks !!!
Author's Response: Most of Tom's ideas are great. Especially the one of not letting Bill run off.
Date: 03/18/10 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Only the first chapter and I'm already intrigued! I'm really impressed with how you made the OFC so real and easily relatable, as well as Bill and Tom seem like solid characters with distinct personalities. I also really love the whole premise of the story. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I try my best not to allow characters to fall flat. It's one of my biggest peeves in reading so I try my best to not do it myself. I'm glad you like Bill and Tom, more of their personalities will be revealed as time goes by.
Date: 03/18/10 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Ohhhh MORE MORE MORE!!! I hope sometime we get to read about Bill in a wedding dress :P
Author's Response: Oh we will. We Will. Bill in a wedding dress is what gave me the extra umph to write the story in the first place.
Date: 03/18/10 04:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooohhhh I'm loving it! [Track this Story]
Author's Response: Yay, you like it. I'm happy. And you're tracking. ULTRA happy here.
Date: 03/18/10 02:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Must finish!!!!
Author's Response: Yes Ma'am!
Date: 03/18/10 01:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE it! Keep going!
Author's Response: Will do. And I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 03/17/10 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Totally tracking this and the dress Bill designed is beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks for tracking, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks, I scoured the net looking for a dress that would fit the body type of how I pictured Gabriella's body to be.