Date: 03/26/10 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
elina is sooo cute!!!! i like her!! she very nice!!! please continue!! and Tom is a good person!! Bill is so perfect for Tom!!! XD
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like Bill's mom, and I definitely will be continuing. Look out for the next chapter!!
Date: 03/26/10 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
u are right, Elina is a sweet character. and tom too for staying, most people wouldn.t be comfortable in that situation and the fact that he willingly chose to stay . . . . he must really like bill :)
Author's Response: I'm glad that you like Elina; and you're absolutely right. It is not a comfortable situation to be in at all. I knew it would be awkward so I tried to ease some of that off by writing Elina as a very cheerful character. I'm really happy that you liked this chapter.
Date: 03/26/10 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 3
aw, that was so sweet. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. ^.^
Date: 03/26/10 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was so sweet! I love that Tom decided to stay for Elina's party! It's obvious he's decided not to treat Bill like any of his other conquests. I really loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really happy that you liked this chapter. I think you'll like the next one even more.
Date: 03/26/10 11:23 am Title: Chapter 3
the mother is...childish...meaning u did a great job writing her lol
Author's Response: Um, thanks. XD Ok, I'm glad you liked how I wrote her.
Date: 03/26/10 10:22 am Title: Chapter 3
What an incredibly sweet chapter! Usually OFCs are annoying to me, but Elina is so sweet and such a great character to add to the mix. This whole thing was just so amazing, I loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked Elina and didn't find her annoying. Characterization and plot are my biggest concern in any fic and I try my best to work just as hard with my OCs as I do the boys.
Date: 03/26/10 06:36 am Title: Chapter 3
So sweet.
Tomi is an angel sent from heaven. A little dirty angel xD
Poor Elina, feel sorry for her :(
Author's Response: Yes, Tomi's a dirty little angel. I do feel sorry for as well. I try to write her as cheerful as possible but anyone in the type of situation she is in makes me feel very sad.
Date: 03/26/10 06:02 am Title: Chapter 3
awwnn this chap was SO good! keep on going!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The next chapter should be out soon.
Date: 03/26/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter 3
I really like this. I like Elina. I like what it adds to the story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked her. I was hoping that someone would appreciate what she did bring to the story and not think I'm just bringing in a random OC.
Date: 03/23/10 01:44 am Title: Chapter 2
This is good. Pretty rushed, but good. And since you're a new writer, here's a tip: Never hope your writing lives up to the readers expectations because belive it or not 100s of people read your fic and you can't please everyone. Your writing needs to please you first :). And never ask the reader what they want to see in the next chap. That's like fiction suicide because before you know it there's a million suggestions that probably makes no sense and once you try to make them into the chap those who suggested am idea to you will be upset that you didn't choose their idea and stop reading and once you try to get back ontrack you'd literally have to make your plot work around those random suggestions. Just a few pointers from a fellow writer! Much love--Lazurline.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review. I was afraid that I was rushing things, but I liked how it was going so far. Thanks for the pointers! I admit I do have a bit of a problem with that I feel I must live up to people's expectations. It's something that I have to deal with, not only with my writing, but for other aspects of my life as well. -_- I've been writing fanfics for a while now; even though it wasn't Tokio Hotel and I did do that once (the asking the audience what you want next). It was a nightmare and I learned never to do something like that again. If I'm going to write a fic, I'll write it how I want to write it.
Date: 03/21/10 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
haha, aww poor hormonal boys, lmao. I like this, its cute.
Author's Response: Oh thank you. haha yes, hormonal boys will always be hormonal boys. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/21/10 04:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love it already ^^ can't wait to see how things will turn out. please update asap :)
Author's Response: I'll my best to. I really will. I'm glad that you're enjoying this story.
Date: 03/21/10 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hahaha stoopid tom.
He was moving really fast for just meet and admitting that he likes bill.
And Tom is Bi? Sexy Hexy.
Author's Response: Ah yes, Tom. He needs to learn to slow his role when dealing with Bill. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/21/10 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 2
that LAST line makes me 'aww poor tom!'
Author's Response: I wanted to give Tomi a hug after I threw him off his stride, but I think he'll be ok. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/21/10 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm liking it so far.
And Bill is a pimp designer BTW! Love that 2nd dress.
Author's Response: Billy the PIMP Designer XD I'm glad that you like it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/21/10 06:46 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom is so in the doghouse. =P
Can't wait for more. =)
Author's Response: Yes he is...now he has to make it up to him. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/21/10 02:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Tom, tom, tom not so fast.. ;D Great chapter, continue soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review; that's my Tommy-boi he likes to get the ball rolling XD
Date: 03/21/10 02:28 am Title: Chapter 2
OMG I LOVE IT!!! Is Bill a virgin? Please make him a virgin, his reaction inthe kitchen seriously makes him sound like a virgin :D MORE PLEASE!
Author's Response: I've been toying with the idea, but I haven't made up my mind yet about it. I'm glad that you love the story. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/21/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like this.. Its starting off good and cute!!
Cant wait for more!
Thanks!
Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon, and I'm glad that you like it.
Date: 03/21/10 12:18 am Title: Chapter 2
i love this story
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy that you like it.