Date: 02/16/08 10:28 am Title: Epilogue
the way you ended the story with the G's talking is awesome. *jaw drop* It's enough to clarify but it still leaves you mystified.
Author's Response: ::snicker:: In case a sequel comes to mind >.<
Date: 02/16/08 10:07 am Title: Chapter 6
I was gonna read all the way through the fic before leaving comments, but I figured I could here.
The sex scene was fine. No worries. If you read enough, you learn the techniques you like and dislike and that's a lot of help.
As for the Bill pic? That boy gives bedroom eyes way to well to be as innocent as he claims.
Author's Response: ::giggle:: thanks a lot for the great review :)
Date: 02/16/08 09:44 am Title: Chapter 11
fuck i love this! scheisse! i want more! god!!!
Author's Response: That was it sadly... ::sigh:: glad you liked it!
Date: 02/14/08 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 10
*gasps* WHAT?! Bill.. he he.. WHAT?! hurry with the next, i need to know what happened!! dont you daaaaare end it here!!!
Author's Response: ::giggle:: i made you gasp >:) ::feels evil::
Date: 02/14/08 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 10
They were in it together? Thats kinda.....well, sneaky.
Author's Response: i know... but not quite. Read the next one and you'll find out what really happened
Date: 02/14/08 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 10
So.... Bill asked David to help him out with Tom, and now he's done that and David quits his job. Or did I get it wrong? XD Oh well, anyway, I love your story ;)
Author's Response: Shall respond to this thoroughly after i post the next chapter dear. :P
Date: 02/12/08 05:31 am Title: Chapter 9
pleasee update soon....:))
Author's Response: As soon as I finish up uploading my other story, dear.
Date: 02/11/08 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
OOOO YOU TEASE :O:O!!!!
Author's Response: >:) i know. I know!
Date: 02/11/08 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 9
Ooohhhhh jeeezes!!!! Love it!! But u can't leave me hanging like this!! More please!!!!
Author's Response: ::schoolgirl giggle:: i'll give you more, don't worry
Date: 02/11/08 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
loveeee iit
Author's Response: ;) loved that you loved it hun
Date: 02/11/08 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 9
NOOOOO!!!!!
I did not like it:P
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!^^D
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT'S HAPPENING TO BILL NOW NEXT!!!!!!!!^^D
(Please write it in detales)
Keep up with your greate writing hunny ^^)
Love Liebetub
Author's Response: How much detail do you want? :P ^_~
Date: 02/09/08 10:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Oh dear. XD
And, L is sexy, by the way. lol
CONTINUE. :D
Author's Response: Just got home from holiday and have plenty of ideas storming through my head. I'll upload next week for sure XD
Date: 02/05/08 11:14 am Title: Chapter 8
Hi Bill ^__^
poor David, I think he could have had a hearth attack.
especially here:
“He smells different.” Bill finally uttered.
“How so?”
“Well, not like him. He smells more like you!”
Author's Response: Yeah, poor David's under a lot of stress, but if he has a plan he's sticking to it no matter what happens.
Date: 02/04/08 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh you like to torture Tom's mind (and us), don't you ;)
Keep going, loves it! Lol
Author's Response: You know I like torturing you >:)!!
Date: 02/04/08 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
awwwww^^)
He is just toooooooooo cute!!!!!!!!^^D
I love him!!!!!!!!!^^*
But what did David mean bu "teenagers"??
Have he fucked someone else??
Bill mabye???
Keep up with the greate writing hunny^^)
I really love your story^^)
Author's Response: The comment David made about 'teenagers' was simple: teenage boys can't keep their hormones down and cum quicker than older, more experienced men. :P
Date: 02/04/08 05:34 am Title: Chapter 7
I love this story *__*
And I'm curious too about where David got the techniques from.
Tomi with puppy dog eyes is simply irrestible!
Author's Response: I know. he's just so cute, isn't he? Makes you wanna take him home and feed him
Date: 02/04/08 01:23 am Title: Chapter 7
god awesome!!!! loved it, keep going!
Author's Response: thank you dear XD
Date: 02/02/08 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 6
*pokes picture*
That's one sexy look.. *w*
I want sex! Something, please! XD
Author's Response: LOL you'll see sex... soon-ish
Date: 02/02/08 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh my GOD!!!!!!!!
I ALMOUST SCREEM TO!!!!!!
hehe^^)
Love the story hunny;)
Keep up with the greate writing^^)
Author's Response: hehe >:) i made you almost scream >:)
Date: 02/02/08 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 3
mhm^^)
Author's Response: What would TH be without him?