Date: 07/03/10 01:38 am Title: Ten
Aw please continue ;(
Date: 05/24/10 10:59 pm Title: Ten
oh no! Gustav please be a good guy! I love the story i was starting to get upset b/c you didnt update but now im happy :D
-MJ
Author's Response: :( I'm sorry! I know, I just got out of the writing phase for a little bit I guess, but I'll still try. :) I'll never abandon this story, but sometimes I might get busy and it may take me a while to update. Especially with finals coming up. :| But you never have to worry that I abandoned this story. :) Thank you!
Date: 05/19/10 11:57 pm Title: Ten
Yay! After such a long wait we got got an awesome update! And I get the feeling Gustav gonna try to pull something. Can't wait for the next update ^^
Author's Response: Aww yay thank you :D Hmm maybe :x
Date: 05/19/10 02:59 pm Title: Ten
Awww poor Indigo
Author's Response: Yeah :(
Date: 05/19/10 06:54 am Title: One
The only flaw i see here is that the 5 year old girl is very intelligent, my 5 year old cousin doesnt make sence most of the time. But maybe thats just my family (: good work
Author's Response: Yeah, I do realize that. Maybe she's just smart for her age, or that's just who she is. Sorry :x But thank you :)
Date: 05/19/10 12:48 am Title: Ten
For some reason this made me cry. Humm I don't like this new character. My mind is wandering on and on but I'll stop . I hope what I think might happen won't! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Awww <3 Yeah, I'm not so sure I like him either in this story. :( Thanks so much :D
Date: 04/30/10 01:00 am Title: Nine
Awww cute chap! it made me cry xD
I love it!!
I canīt wait for the next chap.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3 I'm trying to get it up tomorrow or tonight hopefully. :x
Date: 04/27/10 09:22 pm Title: Nine
Aww the bond they share just warms my heart ^^
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad it does! Thank you :)
Date: 04/27/10 02:40 pm Title: Nine
this is sooo beautiful.. i had to cry (again) :-) pls keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you soo much! I promise I will. :))
Date: 04/27/10 01:03 pm Title: Nine
Aww such an adorable chapter! Love it >3
Author's Response: Thanks so much <3
Date: 04/27/10 12:52 am Title: Nine
awww.. I had happy tears too reading this! :D
Now I'm going to fall asleep with all this innocent beauty from this chapter still flowing in my head. ^-^
Author's Response: Aww you and Bill. :")rnThat makes me happy, that you'd want to fall asleep with my story fresh in your head. Aw, thank you! :")
Date: 04/26/10 10:12 pm Title: Nine
The chapter with the sun completely described and captured what I had in mind for the alley artwork. Now, I see what you meant that our minds worked in similar ways.
Author's Response: Seriously? Omg that's awesome. :D I guess we do have similar minds. ^___^
Date: 04/26/10 09:07 pm Title: Nine
Ohmygeethatwassofuckinggreat
Author's Response: Thank youu :)
Date: 04/20/10 05:00 pm Title: Eight
Awww such a cute chapter, adorable! =D
Author's Response: Thank you! ^___^
Date: 04/19/10 02:37 pm Title: Eight
ZOMG IT A KITTY. I swear, with every chapter, this story gets better and better.
Author's Response: Yay meow! :DD And really? Aw thank you! ^___^
Date: 04/19/10 02:30 pm Title: Eight
Awww, how cute. Gosh, that alley really is something else though. It's just handing things out left ad right. I liked the chapter too.
P.S. I caught a typo for ya >.> pesky things. "She motioned silently bnut eagerly for Bill to come over to her with a huge grin on her fade." The "bnut"
Author's Response: Yep, that alley sure is something. :)rnOOH I knew there would be one since I was rushing to type it up! I write the chapters by hand first during school and stuff, and then I rush to type it up so I can post it since it takes forever to type it all. But thank you, you're always there to fix those tiny nuances of mine. ^__^
Date: 04/19/10 06:51 am Title: Eight
That alley really does hold a lot of importance. I think by the time they saw the kitten I imagined Bill painting Tom, Indigo, Pancake, and him all together on a wall in the alley. I could see Tom's face revealed through a slight crevice through some clouds and rays of sun shining down on Bill, Indigo, and Pancake. It's really good story if it makes my imagination run wild like that.
Author's Response: Aww! Your review made me so happy, thank you! ^__^ I'm glad you can visualize the characters and scenes like I do :DDD
Date: 04/19/10 01:55 am Title: Eight
awwwwwwwwwwwwww so cute! xD
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 04/19/10 12:38 am Title: Eight
Omg Ray! I absolutely loved this chapter :) pancake lol that's too cute :p I'm glad nice bill is back !!I hope I was the first person to read this chap :))
Author's Response: lolll Yay danke zwilling :D
Date: 04/18/10 11:47 pm Title: Four
I love this story!
I can't for the next chap!
Author's Response: Thank you! ^____^