Date: 03/21/10 12:10 am Title: Chapter 6
*chewing nail's waiting for next chapter*....thank you for another update!
Date: 03/20/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 5
Well damn...thinking Tom should have beat the sh*t outta Andi...can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I just sent the update in.
Date: 03/20/10 09:18 pm Title: The Note
Catnip.
that made me laugh
this story is so sad knowing that bill is going to die at the end.
Author's Response: haha i know right? i was sitting at work and i was like ah! i know what im going to call Tom. But you don't know what's going to happen ;)
Date: 03/20/10 12:24 am Title: Chapter 4
O___o that's it Andi...add fuel to the raging fire already consuming Bill, god poor Bill is a mess.
Love this story, thank's for the update's!
Author's Response: hehe thank you :)
Date: 03/19/10 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 4
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And it sucks that they said it was inappropriate. It might be because I'm sick and twisted but I liked it. It was like, BAM. In your face.
Author's Response: exactly haha thats why i liked it, it got peoples attention. but it's okay. im just glad my account got unlocked :X
Date: 03/19/10 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
D:
Bill D:
And you changed the banner >___>
Author's Response: yeah i had to, my account got locked cos they said it was innappropriate. :(
Date: 03/19/10 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is such a raw story-keep's me on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: aww good :) im happy you enjoy it
Date: 03/19/10 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 3
I am really enjoying this story.
Author's Response: good, i'm glad you like it. there should be another update tonight :)
Date: 03/18/10 10:16 pm Title: The Note
Don't change the banner. Who cares if it's not what she wants to see when she logs onto the site. It's your banner and I think it goes perfectly with the story -- it's creepy and scary and so is the story. So yeah, don't change it :)
I'm glad you decided to continue this. I'd like to see the events leading up to the suicide.
I also kind of want to read a Tom-looking-in-the-closet graphic scene xD
Author's Response: yeah i wasnt about to change the banner. haha. i decided not to leave you guys hanging ;) im trying to make it intense
Date: 03/18/10 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 2
that banner has to be changed that is NOT what i wanna see when i get on this site it is very disturbing
Author's Response: haha sorry
Date: 03/18/10 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really like this, though maybe you could make the chapters just a tad longer?
:}
Update soon!
Author's Response: haha ill try. im working on something now ;)
Date: 03/18/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
thank you for continuing with this fanfic.
Author's Response: no problem, thanks for the review :)
Date: 03/17/10 09:21 pm Title: The Note
the "don't look in the closet" line creeped me out...i was able to picture it *shudders*
beyond that, great one-shot!
Date: 03/17/10 07:31 pm Title: The Note
jeez, =( wish there was a full story.
Author's Response: i think i might continue it
Date: 03/16/10 10:53 pm Title: The Note
Damn-even at the very end he was begging for attention, guess he will have it, no matter how late, when Tom look's in the closet-i'm guessing he hanged himself.
Wow-short but deep!
Date: 03/16/10 08:11 pm Title: The Note
So...so he killed himself and his body is in the closet behind Tom ._.;
That's some scary shit, man.
Anyway. This was so sad. So short but so sad.
I wanted to cry ;___;
Poor Bill.
Author's Response: yeah he hung himself in his bedroom closet