Date: 09/30/10 02:14 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
I saw this fic quite a while back when it wasn't finished when I was searching for something to read. It kept popping up in the 'recent stories' everytime it would get updated and I would never click on it. I'm not sure why, but I never did.
I wish I did though...or maybe I'm glad I didn't. I think I'm glad I waited until it was completely finished. This story was absolutely AMAZING!! I honestly don't know if I could have waited for each chapter. I read it in two days and could not stop reading (although I had to in the evening otherwise I would have been a zombie at work the next day haha)
I absolutely loved each and every chapter. It was great how long each chapter was and I loved how Bill and Tom's relationship developed. I didn't mind at all how long it took for them to finally get together. I think that's what I loved the most! This was...I'm going to say it again...AMAZING!!
I'm sad it's over but I'm so glad I got to experience it. A story like this is hard to find and I'm so glad I found it!
Author's Response: Wouuu~ How to respond! Thanks for reviewing, first of all~ There's a lot (I know for a fact) of people who are still reading this now it's done and still don't want to review figuring it being over now reviewing must no longer be relevant. XD But it is! It is~ Haha~ Even if you didn't click before, you've clicked now, and I'm so happy for that!
I too, sometimes like the feeling of having a finished story to read, because I can read entirely at my own pace without the burning impatience coming with having to wait for updates. XD I won't lie there. Though, being part of the process as a story is worked on, is also an awesome experience too. ^^ Amazing, you say? It's nothing of the sort! ^///^ Yes, my chapters are fairly lengthy, well in comparison to a majority of stories I find, who lean toward the 1~3 grand mark which I may never quite understand. =0 I'm glad you think the pace was acceptable, because when I started this, the first thing I said (both to myself and to readers) was -this is my response to every unrealistic, love at first sight story I've read yet-.
'Amazing' is much too strong a word, but your praise is wholeheartedly appreciated, though I love it more that you just overall enjoyed it. I'm glad that my first story has brought enjoyment to others, and hearing the feedback has been wonderful. You're very kind~ Thank you again for reading and reviewing! Cheers, and hot twins to you! ♥
Date: 09/19/10 09:44 pm Title: XV: You've Got Something to Smile About
This ending was perfect. Just perfect. I teared up.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it~~~ <333
Date: 09/18/10 02:47 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
This was a really really well written story. Well crafted, well worded and the plot impeccable. Tom and Bill's irresistible charms, off turns and turn ons were wonderfully described and of course they had to be drawn towards each other gradually and very realistically. Good job. *Maria
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so pleased to read you enjoyed it, and your praise is far too kind. Thanks for reading and reviewing, so very much! ^---^ <3
Date: 09/14/10 11:21 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
I have to tell you, I don't understand all the self-criticism you were doing throughout a lot of this story. xD I can safely say this is probably one of the best fanfics I've ever read and probably my favorite. The story is really well written. Plenty of fluffy and funny. And drama, as always. :3 I loved it~
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in responding. ;__; Well, perhaps you'll never understand, because for me, it's all so necessary. ;___; I could have done so much better~ Though flaws aside, I'm supremely glad you enjoyed it, and it couldn't make me any happier to know you thought so highly of it. Thank you for reading, very much so!
Date: 09/14/10 03:00 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Great story! I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: I'm really happy you did! ^--^ Thanks for reading~
Date: 09/12/10 05:54 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Wow, it's absolutely amazing :)
Author's Response: Thank you! ^---^
Date: 09/11/10 04:25 pm Title: XV: You've Got Something to Smile About
That was a great story. I read it all this morning, and I loved it, especially the emails, particularly the ones Tom's dad wrote to him. I always seem to read tear-jerking parts right when I'm about to go out, and I ruin my makeup. So thank you for that :) Please keep writing great stories like this.
Author's Response: Haha~ I'm glad you liked it, truly. Oh, I'm sorry about the makeup... I didn't intend for any tear-jerking moments, just warm ones, but I hope you're still all right. =) I will do my best to continue writing~~~ Thank you for reading and reviewing, so very much, and I hope you enjoy the epilogue~ ^^ (If you haven't gotten to it.) Thanks again! ^---^
Date: 09/11/10 09:43 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
hahahha quote: "There's nothing for me in Potsdam,..."
I'm from Germany and I live in Potsdam XD
Really nice story - good work =)
Author's Response: Oh! I'm sorry, I hope I didn't offend you~ I'm sure it's a lovely town - I honestly know nothing about it, I just needed something close to Berlin. =P Thanks for reading, I genuinely hope you enjoyed it! ^----^
Date: 09/09/10 04:55 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Awwwwww X 1000!
I have tears in my eyes cause that was such a perfect and beautiful ending, but also cause I'm really sad that I've reach the end... It was an amazing journey, I had so much fun reading this incredible fic! Thank you so much for sharing this with us, I'll definitely check your other stories cause I adore your writing style! Good job with this fic really, one of the best I've read!
Author's Response: I'm utterly ecstatic you enjoyed it, and it was such a pleasure, and an honour, to have someone take enough care to read through and review my fic thoroughly. Not many have done that, and it's really warming for me. I'm so happy you liked it, and felt it was done well, because I put a lot of work into it, and reviews like yours make it all worth it. Your praise is too good for me, and I appreciate every word. Thanks for reading and reviewing! ^--^ ♥
Date: 09/09/10 04:38 pm Title: XV: You've Got Something to Smile About
Awwww! That was so perfect, I don't even know what to say!I can't believe there's only the epilogue left for me to read :( I'm gonna read it now !
Author's Response: Was it? I'm glad. I tend to be mushy, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. ^---^
Date: 09/09/10 04:25 pm Title: XIV: You've Got to Start Using Your Head (Heart)
Awww! Tom is such a gentleman, not wanting to take advantage of Bill while he's broken heart... I can't wait to read about their reunion. They are adorable together, I can't get enough of this fic! :D
Author's Response: He is~ Bill insists he's an ass, but he's actually a sweetheart. :D Yay!
Date: 09/09/10 04:10 pm Title: XIII: You've Got a Broken Heart and a Fixed Rationality
Wow, Alfonse really his a jerk... I hate him! Poor Bill, I'm glad he called Tom and I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: D: It's okay, he's gone now, we can all rest easy. =P
Date: 09/09/10 03:57 pm Title: XII: You've Got to Realise Something's Gotta Give
Awww! THey kissed, that's a step in the right direction :D
The thing I like about this fic is that they are kinda falling in love via email and in real life at the same time, that totally means they are meant to be together and I can’t wait to read more... I wonder how they are finally going to understand that they have been talking online since the beginning. This is so interesting and intriguing, a really good fic, I can see how it deserved to be featured!
Author's Response: That was the intention~ I'm glad you feel that way, because I was very keen on having it happen just like that - the emails are a little more like their unadulterated affections and feelings, and they're progressing in life, physically, simultaneously.
Wow, your praise is high and I appreciate it so. ^///^
Date: 09/09/10 03:40 pm Title: XI: You've Got to Slowly Start Speeding Up
You described their feeling SO well in this chapter! Bill thinking about his soul mate was adorable. I love a protective Tom, so cute :D
Author's Response: Tomi is like a disguised prince charming, isn`t he? :D
Date: 09/09/10 03:22 pm Title: X: You've Got to Be Dreaming
Finally, Karla is out of the picture! Next one to go is Alfonse I hope! I must say I'm really into this fic, I'm suppose to be doing homework at the moment but I can't stop reading!
Author's Response: Ahh, another who is setting aside their homework to read? Tsk, tsk! XD I must be appreciative though, and I'd be lying if I didn't say that I didn't go to class one time in favour of writing chapters for this. xD (Now -that's- bad, but I hated that class last year xD) I`m so glad you like it this much!
Date: 09/09/10 02:47 pm Title: IX: You've Got to Save Me If I Save You
Ohh! Tomi is crying! At least Bill is there to comfort him! Really good chapter, I like to read about their interactions, they form a good team, same humor and all.. they will be the perfect couple !
Author's Response: It's so sad when Tomi cries. D: Tomi crying in any situation is cute. :) Thanks for liking this chapter!
Date: 09/09/10 02:15 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Oh this just absolutely made my day! I may actually go to work with a smile, who knew?
LOVED this, just as sad that it's over, trust me!
XD
Author's Response: Ah, I'm so excited to read that~ Thank you for reading and loving it, and I'm so very happy I could make you smile. Take care! ^--^
Date: 09/09/10 02:14 pm Title: VIII: You've Got a Few Conflicting Theories
200 reviews! Congratz :D
LOL! Tomfish! Bill is so funny! And Tom was brilliant, getting them out without paying with is genius speech!
I really like this chapter, they may not realize it yet but they obviously belong together!
Author's Response: Haha, it's all thanks to you really. XD I haven't had many people who have taken the time to review each chapter so wonderfully like you have. ♥ They do belong to each other, but they're going to fight it out, first. xD
Date: 09/09/10 01:50 pm Title: VII: You've Got More Than You Know
Oh no, I feel so bad for Gustav! But at least Bill and Tom are gonna use the reservation, I can't wait to read about their ``date``!
The more I read about your characters, the more I love them! Everything is very well describe, I feel like I'm watching a movie and I love it!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you love my characters, I worked so hard on them. ^////^ It's not the first time I've heard that 'it feels like a movie', and I have to say I'm so ecstatic you feel that way! ^--^
Date: 09/08/10 06:39 pm Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
SO GEIL!!! LOVE IT! So well written.... But I didn't understand why Tom left so suddenly after he consoled Bill?
Author's Response: I'm not sure I know what chapter you're talking about sweetie. You've reviewed for chapter one, but I don't think this is the chapter you mean? Sorry I can't answer... but thank you for reading! I'm so glad you love it! n___n