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Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 06:11 pm Title: VII: You've Got More Than You Know

Woot woot! French restaurant probably won't lead to french kisses, but it will lead to yummy food and bonding. It'll take Tom's mind off his legal matters... well, actually, Bill might take this opportunity to learn about Tom more. I wonder when they'll learn they write to each other.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 05:06 pm Title: VI: You've Got to Dress to Impress

This chapter was highly entertaining!!! I loved each vivid moment from their feelings and awkward convos, to Tom's guitar playing and Bill's cockblocking. Awwww they're fwiends~ Kinda!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 04:32 pm Title: V: You've Got to Sing Like No One's Listening

I'm very pleased that they're talking. I like that Tom has grown up and become a little more mature, while only lately has Bill gotten over his dislike of Tom. Mostly. I'm charmed~

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 04:15 pm Title: IV: You've Got to be Kidding Me

.....*jaw on floor* Can Tom's life get any more messy? Wow. I hope it's Mark's, so Karla can go to him and leave Tom and Bill to flourish (for lack of a better word) in peace.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 03:59 pm Title: III: You've Got a Storm Coming

Whoo hoo! Bill is doing well for himself, while Tom is not. Quite a flip-flop from their school years, huh. Wheee, clicking for more~ I can't tear myself away!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 03:53 pm Title: II: You've Got Something to Worry About

Squeeee~~~~ So neat so see where there lives have taken them thus far. Now I'm starting to wonder where their lives will cross again. In real life, like not the anonymous emails.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 01:51 pm Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End

How did I miss this story? It's neat so far. The way you wrote Bill and Tom was great! I totally know what that's like, being in a new place with someone you know, but don't really know. It's so awkward to acknowledge that you never got to know each other. I think I'm rambling.

Your dialogue is really natural, and I like the way you tell a story with the events and order and all. I have homework, but I'm gonna reward myself. For every paragraph I write, or 1/2 chapter I study, I'll read another chapter of this to reward myself. ^_^

Reviewer: Lunabear Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/24/11 12:29 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End

I had started this story almost a year ago but had never finished it, so I decided to read it again today. I had forgotten how much I like your writing style! I can't put my finger on what it is exactly but I can already tell that I will very much enjoy rereading and finally finishing this story.

Author's Response: I look forward to your thoughts on the entire story! I'm so pleased to hear you enjoy my writing style. It's something that is very crude and uncertain in the beginning of this story, but it quickly forms into what more or less defines me later on. Thanks for reading, and again, I look forward to your expanded thoughts in the future on the rest of this story! :)

Reviewer: AlexisKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 05:09 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End

I never been a lover for You've got mail movie, not even bother to watch it, but I looove your story despite my usual love for twc :) The stories you wrote soo beautiful;-) And don't leave the fandom because Bill's getting a bit masculine! He's still the same Bill, still the Bill we love :D

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't really like You've Got Mail either at first. It's too chick-flicky for me. :X Aww but I'm glad you went ahead and read my story anyway! Thank you so much! :)
Ah, pshaha, no, I'm not leaving the fandom because Bill is more masculine in appearance, no no. The only way I'll leave is if their music continues on a steady decline and becomes horrific, or, if Tom say, kills somebody legit. LOL. Nah, I'm not leaving 'cause of something so trivial, but their image, specifically Bill's pays a role in fiction part of the fandom, for sure, so I can only be relieved if he sports an image favourable to me. Generally speaking even, I mean I don't want Bill to look horrible at any point. XD He just seems to be lost all of a sudden, it's worrying me. :X
Anyways, thanks for reading and enjoying! I am glad you liked it! :)

Reviewer: mairasm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/15/11 11:47 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)

Amazing fic, really great, always throwing me for a loop with unexpected happening!!!
Thanks for sharing this >

Author's Response: Much apologies for such a late response to your review. >: Ah but thanks so, so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot! I'm so very glad you liked it! b29;

Reviewer: ruda Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/11 07:37 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)

I just finished to read this story again and fell in love with it all over again! It's one of the best I have read on this site, thank you so much for writing it!

Author's Response: Aww! haha~ Wow so flattering. Thanks for showing it so much love. I can't thank you enough for reading and keeping its spirit alive. b29; (PS. Sorry for replying so late! D:)

Reviewer: Panthere Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 04:49 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)

I LOVE THIS STORY. i cant believe how sweet the epilogue is, you made me cry! thanks for writing such a beautiful story :)

Author's Response: Apologies for such a delayed response. Your appreciation of this story warms me! Oh my goodness? Cry? Haha aww how sweet. ^///^ Thank /you/ for reading and enjoying it so. b29;

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/11 08:47 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)

Awwwwwww heck I can't believe it's over. I loved it! And I totally gasped "Tom!" like Bill at that text lol. Tom is a hella naughty boy. That was a lovely fic. More people need to read and review! Totally adding this to my faves ;-)

Author's Response: Sequel one day soon?? Perhaps :O hehehe~ I'm so, so glad you liked it, thanks for sticking with it till the end. It made me so happy. I also must apologise for the crazy late replies, but I can't express my gratitude enough. Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/11 07:29 am Title: XIII: You've Got a Broken Heart and a Fixed Rationality

His septum has kinda grown on me. I'm really sad that the story is coming to an end. It's kinda strange how it doesn't have more reviews cos I think it's a really cool fic.

Author's Response: I still hate it. D: Yuckie. Aww thanks kind of you, but the reviews I have received are all that I truly need. xxoo

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/11 06:43 am Title: XI: You've Got to Slowly Start Speeding Up

Liebe Tom/Bill. Right now I'm taking whatever I can. This fic is really fun!

Author's Response: :D !!!

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/11 04:05 am Title: X: You've Got to Be Dreaming

Hahahaha never make ultimatums you're not sure of.

Author's Response: >:3

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/11 11:57 pm Title: VII: You've Got More Than You Know

Good lord it took me 6 hours to even finish this chapter. 6 hours! It was great though as I was giggling between clients and it chased my Monday blues away. Really enjoying this story :)

Author's Response: Eeeeek 6 hours! @____@ Your effort is much appreciated, thanks for sticking with it when you did! I'm glad this made your day brighter!! xxoo

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/11 09:03 am Title: VI: You've Got to Dress to Impress

Holy hell that guitar is pure sex and imagining Tom playing it.... *wipes drool* I'm really enjoying your story! Though I'm still twitchy cos I want Tom/Bill! ;-)

Author's Response: Right? :Q___ *waves Tom/Bill flag* Yay I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/11 08:39 am Title: V: You've Got to Sing Like No One's Listening

I'm gagging for the Tom/Bill pairing. Just gagging! I like their interactions :-)

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/15/11 07:51 am Title: II: You've Got Something to Worry About

Alfonse? I giggled like crazy. I can't imagine Bill going out with someone called Alfonse hehe. Shortening it to Ali was definitely more palatable. And poor Tom :-(

Author's Response: LOL, hehehe. I happen to like the name Alfonse, but I totally get why it's funny, too. XD

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