ew reanne. bill sings! tom and bill need to make musiccccccccccc. im sure your ending will be far from underwhelming, dont be overwhelmed by the prospect :) aah i so love this story, does it have to end? really???

Author's Response: If I continue it, it would drag on without purpose eventually, wouldn't it? I'm going to miss it too. T__T Thanks for reading and reviewing dearest~~<3

Naaaaw, Tom is so sweet to poor broken-hearted Bill! And seriously, the second he saw the Pink Floyd t-shirt and the duffel bag...I squeaked! (Honestly, I rarely squeak, it's to much of a teenage phenomenon, but you made me!) Good boy, Tom, for putting two and two together. (I almost want to pet him, scratch him behind the ear and give him a biscuit for it..)

Okay, I found the fact that Tom sendt Bill's e-mail higly amusing, oh, and a little bit shocking. You just don't go in on other peoples computers! Now, I may feel so strongly about this since there are so many things on my own Mac that's not suited for the general public, but I still think it's a privace breach, you know. That said, I really don't blame Tom, I probably would've done the exact same thing myself ;) I mean, you have to make sure, right?

I really like how Tom literally instructed Bill to stay away until after Red and TD's upcoming meeting, and how he told him to smile once they met again. I "naaaaw"ed out loud! That Bill smiled because that was what Tom liked was so CUTE! I mean in that overly fluffy kind of way that almost makes you nauseous and all giddy at the same time. I think you've written it some other place earlier in the story too (if I remember correctly), and I was quite pleased to see it again. Loved it! :)

I hate ReAnne already. That's okay, right? I mean, Tom was comparing her to Karla, and that alone is reason enough for me to despise the slut. And for unknow reasons, I really don't like David either. He seem money-driven, and I just can't stand those kind of people.

I don't think you should get all nervous and stressed out over writing it perfectly, sweetie, you're doing a great job already! I liked this chapter a lot, especially the beginning - the insinuation that Bill and Tom knows that they're writing with each other, instead of stating it plainly, like "They knew".. It's all good! :)

Now I will say that I'm getting a little sad about seeing this story come to an end. I've sort of grown attached to it, and knowing that I won't be reading much more aboute our lovely boys is a little heart-breaking.. Oh well, I can't wait to see how it all turns out in the end! Keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: Puppy!Tom? xD So you assumed it was Tom to have sent the e-mail? I wanted to be ambiguous about for this reason. On a personal note, I'd kill anyone that went into my laptop (if I had it *angry*) or my PC for that matter, so I have to concur. If Tom was the culprit... no biscuit for him~~
I like how you remembered! Yeah, Bill tends to reason with 'because it's Tom'. He smiles, not because it's logical, but because Tom likes it when he smiles, and I'm sure that says a lot.
It's definitely okay to hate ReAnne, she's not anything important, nothing more than a symbol to guide Tom. As for David, most in this industry are that way, it's a sin but the reality.

Thanks for your support, it warms my heart. I can only do my best. *flush*

I'm SO confused. Does Tom know that Bill's the guy from the internet?
WAIT is it even Bill & Tom emailing? D: oh god.
But otherwise, it's aaaaaamazing

Author's Response: Oh dear, I didn't think I'd confuse anyone! *sniffle* Yes, Bill and Tom are the ones emailing, and Tom is pretty sure Bill is his emailing friend, whilst Bill is only suspicious. Thanks for reading and reviewing, very much so! <3

I hope that Tom doesn't take that position, or that they hear about Bill and change things out. My personal favorite idea of what you might write is if Tom refuses to do it and forms a band with Bill and Gustav. Maybe it's just me, but I don't want to see that girl in a band with Tom. If he does that, he may as well sign his life away. Maybe Jost will stumble upon Bill and swap out the singers on his own. Either way, I hope that things work out between Bill and Tom, they deserve each other and the happiness that each man can bring to the other. How many chapters are left, I hope you can resolve everything before it's over. If not, I hope you make a sequel so they are complete. With love, your devoted fanboy, Tempo

Author's Response: A new reader? ^---^ I love that you have theories~! =P Ah, the world is full of bimbos, and my idea is that Tom is a magnet for them, in both real life and here in this universe. xD I, too, don't want to see Tom end up backing another plastic doll. O__O We'll have to wait! >.<
There is one more chapter to go, plus an epilogue, recently planned out. (Originally there wasn't one for this story.) So, two in all I suppose. Almost there! Oh my, a fanboy? For me? I must have done something right! xD I'm glad it seems you're really enjoying this, it warms my heart~~~ =) Thanks for your super sweet review, and of course, for reading this story (no matter how much of a failure I believe it to be.) You're golden! ^---^

I literally squeaked when I saw this updated. The scene in Bill's bedroom was perfect. I'm interested to see where the thing with ReAnne is going to go, though. I have a theory. :)

Author's Response: Oh, thank you kindly! *flush* A theory? How I wish I knew what it was! ReAnne won't be much of anything, but I'm still curious, nonetheless. xD Thanks for reading, darling. >///< ~ ♥

awwwww~ okay, i loved this cos so much that i wanted to happen did! now the only thing left to do is have Tom mention the pink floyd shirt Bill is still wearing, then ask to use Bill's laptop and see the unsent email to him. then kisses and stuffs needs to happen and then a perfect ending to a perfect story~ i love you, babe!!!!!

Author's Response: Ah, really? I'm glad things went your way this time! Haha! You really have this all planned out, now, don't you? XD Well, we'll see just how perfect I can try and end this. (I hope you'll like it >.<) You review was sweet and lovely, thanks for reading and reviewing sweetheart. ♥

OH honey this chapter was so wonderful. Tom gifting the house to his stepmother is such a gorgeous thing for him to do. ALfonse is a complete douche!! Bill deserves waaaaay better than him. I love that Bill almost figures it out! I can't wait for the next chapter sweetie.

Author's Response: Eeee, I'm glad you liked it! Bill deserves better than him all right; he deserves Tomi, our prince charming. Thanks darling, for your sweet review! =)

Hehe, by the way your banner never fails to awe me every time I look at it :D

Author's Response: Wou~ Really? I never thought much of it at all. In fact I grumble at it whenever I see it, but I'm too attached to the silly thing to make a new one. XD Thanks though, I'm glad you like it. xD

An update?!  I was like "THIS FAST?!" xD... That's what she said ROFL!

Anywayy, this is amazing as is all your other chapters.  Tom is just the cutest thing to me in this story.  Seriously, the way he is so forgiving and tries just so hard for Bill... I like melt everytime he and Bill talk.  I love the part about "U-level Gibberish class" xD  Poor Bill, Feeling all beat up over the ordeal and... *sighs* I could totally see this being a movie.  The whole time I've read this story, I keep picturing it like its on the big screen or something.  That would so AWESOME! I can't wait for more:))

Awww, *cuddles Bill* the past two chapters have been golden, as fantastic as always. Sorry I fell behind, but RL has been busy for me lately.

Ugh, I wanted to slap Alfonse silly for what he proposed and I'm glad Bill did what he did. Good riddance! And I loved that Tom decided to give the house back to Jelana and Else, that was a lovely gesture. And Bill is suspecting TD might be Tom, I suppose he would know for sure once Tom gets there and sees Bill in the same shirt he said he would use when they meet.

I'll be looking forward to more!