Date: 09/04/10 05:06 pm Title: IV: You've Got to be Kidding Me
No way he can handle to be a father right now. I think he said something about karma earlier.
Author's Response: D: Will here or won't he? Hmm... ^---^
Date: 09/04/10 01:30 pm Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
It's a little bit confusing at he beginning, but when everything it's settle down it's good. Don't worry about it.
Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about this. ^^" I've been meaning to re-write this chapter for some time, but I never got around to it. I've somehow decided that I'll leave it be, so I'll remind myself of my growth as a writer. It was my very first of anything, and I think I'll always appreciate it for the mess it is. Thanks for reading! I hope if you choose to continue, the rest won't be nearly as confusing. ^^" <3
Date: 09/04/10 12:21 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
I am so sosososo happy that this is the featured story, you totally deserve it a million times over!
Well done sweetie!
Author's Response: I didn't even know I was featured until I read this review. I had to wipe and rub my eyes three times, and you know, I still can't believe it. I couldn't have ever predicted, that this story, or all my stories would have gotten featured, and because it was my first, I think it makes it -that- much overwhelming to experience. Wow, just... wow. Thanks for everything Heist, I keep saying it, but you're just amazing. *still gaping like a landed fish*
Date: 09/04/10 02:16 am Title: IV: You've Got to be Kidding Me
The stories finshed? I dont know if i should be happy confused or sad about that... i think im all three. lol Congrats. And just to prompt you with a warning; this isnt as scarry as it looks. Its mostly just quotes which is why its so long. But ill say soryy any way: sorry, lo siento, es toot me laid
I dont want to make it seam like your storie is just like every other one iv read- beacaue it isnt- but theres something thats the same about it. Besides Bill's pouting he always having some long monolauge about some very well know person. Obviously with you it was harry potter but i read anoher story where it was jack sparrow. Either way its always a highly entertaining thing.
Tom has to tell himself when clothes look like they should be his?... I hope he doesnt do that with his hats or else there must always be a voice going off in his heead.
As entertaining as Bills harry potter spech was what exactly does he think it has to do with whatever Tom's problem is? Not being a smart ass i just thought about it haha
" He glanced up to the head sign, snorting: Esoteric Design." whats wrong with the sign? lol
Tom would trade the last weeks fo9od budget on xlothes? And here i was thinking Bill was the pretty boy :p
"Lisha – tell me the truth.”
“It’s...” The petite brunette sighed into her palm, attentively nodding as she studied the garment Bill held. “It’s... you?”
I totaly missed the garmet part first time i read this and thought they were breaking up. What happened to my memorie of bills BOYFRIEND in that moment idk. -palmface-
"unable to hide his enjoyment of a good ego-stroke." -snort- as if bill needs a ego stoking.
"bringing up a hand to tug on a stray dread" I think im focusing on your story to hard, it keeps making my mind go blank. I thought this ment TOMS dreads til i saw a picture in the right pannel of bill with dreads on the sides of his head. once again -palm face-
“I did,” Bill was discouraged by her lack of focus on Gustav. ' awwww. know she didnt just completely ignore the hint. #teamgustav
Heres how indesicive Tom is. First insult "I thought he had looked like a chick then, but this is something else ridiculous."
Then complliment" He’s damn near model-esque gorgeous" lol
I wonder if the boys our gawking at each other in disgust or.... well idk what else.
"flustered in denial he’d been unabashedly checking the other out before completely unaware of whom exactly it was at first glance" awww dont deny it Bill. If he's hot he's hot.
"Lisha, c’mon, I gotta get to work. Gustav, being the incredibly responsible, focused, yet charmingly gentle and sweet man he is, will be, erm, disappointed in me if I’m not on time for our class. Did I mention he’s cool?” HA subtle
"Some people just don’t change for the better. Especially spoiled, self-righteous bastards like Tom." Bill shouldnt be complaining. Tom DID change. He tried to play nice with Bill and Bill was a bitch about it. He brought it on himself. If he cant be nice to you how do you think he's going to act? Im surprised he was meaner.
"Still a snobby bitch, huh. Some people just don’t change, I guess.
After all, what was he expecting; not all frogs are secretly princes. Or princesses, more accurately" mean as it is this one seams more on the money.
"Maybe he just needs to be kissed.
Tom bit his lip in the widest of grins, forcing back a chuckle. He had an interview to get to, not a toad to examine." you smug thing lol
"Felicia had interrogated him on the short encounter with Tom in the boutique." I hate when people do that. If someone says they dont want to talk drop it. sheesh
"then he rapidly pressed himself up against the door to see better through the window. He just managed to catch sight of a navy blue cap, and dark cornrows following Brauer around the corner." Gee wiz. I know Toms hot but dont hump the door off the hinges. ;)
"mmhm, and you like that don you. you want some of dis. get your hands around my 7 sets of lovehandles. Bet youve had some wicked fantasies about me. ;)"Buhahahahahahahaha Tom is stupid
"You’re creeping me out again. I have to go watch harry potter." yeah cause harry potter isnt creeepy at all
......Even with out being twins any more they have the twin thing. weird
Poor cute little girl with the curls =(
Why was Tom hiding from Bill?
'this is Wilhelm Trümper,' uhh.... Who?
We’ve started on the wrong foot–”
“Three times. That doesn’t sound like a mistake.” You didnt START on the wrong foot three times you just BITCHED at him til you ended up there. Seriously whats Bills problem? Even if he was mean to his friends in high school that was YEARS ago anf he has yet to be mean to him DIRECTLY. LET IT GO.
“Woah, that’s two messages I didn’t think I’d have.” hahaw hy check them if you didnt think they were there?
So I’ll tell you something that I’m sure will convince you into letting me come see you... I’m ... I’m pregnant! I’ll be seeing you in a few days, hotshot.’.....Illl never get why some girls think announceing their pregnant is some kinda trick thats gona help them when a chest game. smdh
"She couldn’t be serious... what had he done?" #wrapyourweenie
Author's Response: Whoa. O____O Where do I, um, begin? Ah, yes well, Harry Potter isn't exactly a focal point in this story. ^^" (I'm not even a fan of him) I was using Harry Potter and the general plotline as a sort of metaphor for life and how to look at it. It's not really that Bill has any direct connection or beef with him/the movies. XD So yeah, you have to look at the issue abstractly, so that you understand how Bill relates to Tom's issues using Harry potter. And yep, I just finished this story this week! It's both sad and happy~
Um, Wilhelm... you don't know? Sorry I didn't explain because I figured it was common knowledge. Haha, ah well... 'Wilhelm' is the German equivalent of 'William', and Bill is a short form of either name. Thus Bill = Wilhelm, which makes Bill's real name Wilhelm. The boss (Brauer) tends to be very proper, and refers to them by their full names rather than their nicknames or preferred names.
Yes, Bill is a snobby bitch, but it's all part of his character. In the end, he'll see the error of his ways. Some people tend to be judgmental like that, but Tom is the kind of person that will persist, not to worry.
Anyhow, thanks for reading and reviewing. O__O Hehe.
Date: 09/03/10 11:52 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
God, I can't believe is over!!!! Bufff, I hope you have a nice time reading and writing fics as I had with my owns :))) Take care!!
Author's Response: It is, I know! D: Boohoo~ Yes, I've enjoyed reading and writing, it's all been a great adventure. Thanks for reading and sticking with this story! ^--^ You take care too! ♥
Date: 09/02/10 07:32 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
I read this story today, all at once and I need to say that it's one of the best I've read in a while.
I love how everythin looked real, the way you created and developed Bill and Tom's personalities during the whole story. I hope I'll be able to see more stories from you like this one.
And I think it must be said that the end was the cutest thing, it really put a smile on my face and for that I need to thank you!
Congratulations!!
Author's Response: Really? Honestly? Wow, I'm so glad you feel that way. I really had no expectations for the reception of this story, and now to see this kind of review really warms my belly. No need to thank me, for you reading and sharing your thoughts with me, I must, indeed, thank -you-! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and liked the ending, and I couldn't ask for more. ^---^
Date: 09/01/10 08:02 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
ooh, my story is 96,000 and counting! imma pass youuu~;)...okay, review time.
oh my god, such a beautiful ending *sniffle* what do you mean cliche and underwhelming? its perfecttt. omg, did i just read a whole story with no smut? and never get bored?? its a miracle! loved it so much~
Author's Response: Ahaha, that's okay, then I'll be #50. It's okay, I already know, being right at the end of the list, it won't be there for long. (I mean, now that there are no more chapters coming.) It's still an accomplishment in my books, and I can't wait to see your story on that list too! :D
Thanks for thinking it's perfect, what can I say? You've been a totally motivation, like many other regular reviewers, and more than I could ask for. Yes, there was no heavy smut! I too, was surprised to keep people's attentions without sex! XD I'm glad it was worthy of your audience even though they didn't do the nasty on page so to speak. I'm so grateful and overwhelmed and happy, so what else can I say, but thank you for everything! ^--^ ♥
Date: 09/01/10 05:14 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Aaaaw, I love this entire story :D It's too sweet ^^ Oh, and I did see 'You've got mail' xD It was Trolololololol xD Lolz xD Sad to see this one go *whipes tear away* *decides to check out more of your stories* *one day...* :P
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: I'm terribly pleased you liked it. You did? As in you hadn't seen it before? Haha, it really is um... strange kind of movie. My story is of course a lot different, but it's always fun to make comparisons. I'm sad too, but also relieved to see it end. Aha, I hope to see you again some day! (One of those days xD) Thanks for reading! ^----^
Date: 09/01/10 04:58 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhddd it's done! IT'S DOOOOOOOOOOONNEE!! Waaaaaaaahhh... Congratulations for finishing this fic!!:333 I'm definitely going to miss this... You did great!! This is wonderful. Aheeeeeeeeeeee
Author's Response: It iiiiiiiiiiisssssssssss, my goodness! D: I can't believe it either. Thanks you so much! I'm going to miss it too, but all things must come to an end. ): Thanks for your kind words, you're great. ^---^
Date: 09/01/10 03:27 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
And so we finally reach our destination, the end of this long and wonderful journey.. I have loved every minute of it, I've said it before and I'll say it again, this one last time, it's been truly amazing. Somewhere along the line, I fell in love with your adorable characters, and as we reach the finish line, I'm sad to see them go. But, I guess every story has it's end, and this is it for BA.. I really liked the ending, and I don't care if it's underwhelming or cliché or anything like that (as you so elequently put it *winks*), it just felt right.. ;) Thank you so much for sharing this with us, and good luck with whatever's next, I wish you all the best!
Author's Response: We do, we do. *hangs head* It's so sad to see it end. Gah, you're too much, your words always too kind, I never know what to do with myself. The fact that you loved it, and felt my story was all I could ask for, and tons more than I ever expected. I'm glad the ending felt right to you, as it did for me. Thank -you- for keeping me motivated and always sharing your thoughts and feelings, because they've filled me beyond what words can describe. ♥
Date: 09/01/10 03:25 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Lol, okay collected myself. Hehe, that was such a sweet and wonderful ending! And congratulations on making the Top 50!
Aw, it's always sad when a story is finished. I know that feeling (when you don't have another in the works), it's like, 'Well what do I do now??'
More congrats for finishing your first very long fic! :DD *heart*
Author's Response: Bwhahaa, you're so cute. Yes, thank you! I bet it won't be there for long, but it's still an accomplishment for me! :D
Although yeah, I have plenty of stories in the works, so even though I'm sad, I'll always be busy. It's a good thing, I suppose.
Anyways, you're a total sweetheart and thanks for reading and reviewing and sending me your thoughts. My love to you! ♥ ^--^
Date: 09/01/10 03:20 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Aaaaaaaaaa! *squeals*
Author's Response: *squeals more* O__O Ehehee!
Date: 09/01/10 02:56 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Awwww, this was such a wonderful ending for a fantastic story! I'm sorry to see it end, though. I think you started posting this a little while after I joined this fandom and I've loved it from the start. Think this will remain one of those stories I can read over and over and never get bored. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Author's Response: I owe a lot to you Mari. You really kept me going, you know. You're very selfless, and to always review and give feedback was really a blessing for me. You're amazing in every sense of the word. Thanks for reading and for loving it, and for sticking with me until the end of this! I send all my love! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 09/01/10 01:14 pm Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Amazing, absolutely amazing. I've had so much fun reading your story, and im quite sad that it came to an end. You did great and im looking forward to reading more of your stories :]]]
Author's Response: I've had so much fun writing it, and to know people liked it, or even went so far as to love it, it's all beyond me really. Thanks for everything, and I hope to see you again soon! ^---^
Date: 09/01/10 09:48 am Title: I: You've Got a Beginning and an End
I really enjoyed this chapter, the insight it gives into how much high-school hierarchy can affect a potential friendship. I like the personalities of both Bill and Tom, especially the mixture of cockiness and vulnerability that you see in Tom. Their relationship is obviously really awkward and tense but there are also moments where you are allowed to catch a glimpse of their true selves, which is enlightening and sweet. I especially enjoy the part where Tom plays the hero as it forces them to be civil - even if it's only for a few minutes. So far I love this story and the detailed, fluid storytelling.
Sylvie x
Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much! Thanks for being able to pick out all the little details in between the chaos. I'm so appreciative for your awesome review, thanks for this! I hope you enjoy(ed) the rest of the story. ^---^ ♥
Date: 09/01/10 09:46 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
It's double special! I loved this final bit, and I'll admit that I cried from the sweetness and fluff. I look forward to more from you and your talented soul. Love you, sugar~
Author's Response: Awww, no way! That's so adorable. ♥ You've been so kind, thank you darling. No words, only ♥! *sniffle* <3
Date: 09/01/10 09:29 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
Oh that was so amazing, an absolutely perfect way to end it, (or begin it from a sequel) ;)!
I adore this, the thought you've put into the movie choices, and Tom being a loving ass ;P
Couldn't have ended it better, although I dont want to see it end at all! You are amazing! *prods* And so you better had believe it!
I added you on msn btw, soubi@hotmail.co.uk, just incase you know.. think its a stalker ;)
I'm sad to see this end but its such an amazing story, I'm sure the read count will carry on going up and up.
b29;b29;b29;
Author's Response: No, you're amazing. Thanks so much, I don't know what to say anymore. You put up with me until the end, and I couldn't have asked for more. Oh, I added you back as well, thanks! Sorry, life is a bit chaotic right now (I'm so busy with apartment searching and school starting), so I'm not online often right now. X___X Thank you though, we'll talk soon! ^^ You've been a great friend to this fic and I can't thank you enough. *hearts; ♥ ♥
Date: 09/01/10 07:32 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
OH! Yay for Tom!! That was awesome, just perfect. Though I had to feel sorry for Bill sitting on the train having that IM convo. LOL.
They've come such a long way from the two boys in the beginning on the train.
Terrific ending honey, Congrats on finishing your first fic. I really enjoyed it, *hugs*
Author's Response: I feel sorry for him too, hahaha! Thanks so much for everything, you're amazing. ^---^ ♥
Date: 09/01/10 07:04 am Title: XVI: You've Got Mail (And a Friend Who Loves You)
It's finishedd :(
I loved the ending *heart*
HAAPPPY BIRTHDAY TWINS!!!!!!
*heart*
X)
Author's Response: Thanks, love! ♥
Date: 08/31/10 10:57 am Title: XV: You've Got Something to Smile About
i adored this entire story, and i cherish you just as much for writing it. you are mature well beyond your years, therefore age doesn't matter in this case. i hope you write more beautiful words soon, darling.
Author's Response: T__T Wou, thank you. I will hold those words dear. You've been wonderful. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the epilogue to come! T__T