Date: 06/13/12 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 10
i can,t do this i can,t bill a cocaine addict him beating and marrying and raping his wife he cheats on her multiple times it can,t be true it can,t i hope this is a side of tokio hotel i never ever see or hear about and what about the twins' relationship there more far a part then ever and frankly it scares me especially bill i have a crush on him and now i,m scared of him
Date: 08/30/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
More! Give us all more please!!! It feels like I've been waiting an eternity. lol.
Date: 08/26/10 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Update please? :D
Date: 07/03/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 16
does this mean bills better? please let bill be better. I want bill to be better. lolz
Anyway, this story is like amazing. :)
Date: 06/05/10 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
hm, i really dont know what to say. this story is really deep. and very beautiful. i kinda fell in love with your story <3
Date: 06/04/10 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
This story is soooo good!
Date: 05/30/10 11:14 am Title: Chapter 16
Awwwww, so cute!!!! This story NEEDS to go on, haha, pleasepleaseplease post more? You guys are wonderful!!
Date: 05/30/10 11:06 am Title: Chapter 14
This is effing spectacular. You two are born writers and this is just....too good for words. AWESOME JOB! :)
Date: 05/30/10 10:38 am Title: Chapter 6
AMAZING!!! I knew this was so worth it:P This is [all.i.feel.is.strange] from the other TH fanfic site, if you're wondering:D
Date: 05/10/10 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
OMG I feel so bad for not review the last chapter *bangs head agaist desk* but anyways i love this story so freaking much! I cant wait to read more...please update soon!
Date: 05/04/10 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow, the babys here!
oh i love the name adian. if i have a son it'll be dresden or Adyn (the way i'd spell it) ehh maybe put it together some how. but yeah he's here!! he's here!!
Date: 05/04/10 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 16
Review on this chapter: It didn't make too much sense. Bill is healed too quickly. Men are not like that in an abusive relationship. They'll continue to complain really...
Bill and Tom are complete idiots in this. Tom, how could you take your brother, own brother, your twin's wife and make her pregnant? What the hell? That is nasty and Morgan is a whore for accepting it. You don't just fuck with another man, especially when he's a double of your husband while you're still married! Bill is stupid for being stupid.
Review on your comment on my previous review:
Karma does not exist [in this situation at least]. Do you really think men like Bill get attacked with karma? It just doesn't work that way. Unless they're imprisoned. Most of them get away with it. Most will remain that way, abusive. Morgan is still a bad example for a wife. She's utterly pathetic excuse for a woman. What the hell is her problem. She shall beat the living shit out of Bill, [and what I was saying is that she needs to show him she can be strong too not a little wimpy bitch who cries after his beatings. And go, "oooh tomiiii hilf mirrrrrr!!!! *sob sob*" *rolls eyes*] She didn't do anything but run to Tom. Tom didn't do anything but mess it up. However, you did make it as if Bill is all healed. The reason he is healed and not like the rest of 'meanie hubbies' because he took drugs. Drugs messed him up. It wasn't the natural behaviour and mind. It was something else that caused him to. He's not really that way. So that is what is distant and doesn't exactly fit the whole abusive husband concept. It does, I'm just saying it wasn't that severe. Although, there was rape, which was quite intense.
This chapter made it seem it's all happy now. Are you sure Bill isn't still tipsy and on the edge? Will Morgan remain with Bill while her baby's father is his twin? How will that work out? It can't. A real man in Bill's position would freak and go 'ghetto' on his brother. Tom portrays an complete dumbass in that aspect that he taking his brother's wife. Really? Really? Morgan is just, *sigh*, how does she accept that? HOW? Does she not have any respect to herself?
YOU KNOW WHAT I LOVE ABOUT THIS FIC?
The characters are so realistic, they leave room to hate on them. They all have their own personality that is never OCC [not comparing it to the real TH world. In real life Bill would never do such things. Neither would Tom. Tom would never hurt his own twin brother. Ever. I'm saying in the "The Pain Of Love" world :D ]and they all share a major role in this. It gets us thinking about these situation. Though I believe this chapter was very rushed. The last two were. Not everyone will go to Rehab you realize that? It's very very expensive and most men don't go to it, or prison if the woman decides to do that. Otherwise, they divorce and it's done. Almost done... It will never be over. The memories will remain for ever and ever. So what I'm saying is, the only reason you had Rehab is because they were famous. Well, not everyone has millions of dollars do such a thing.
Overall, this is still a very amazing fiction. I've never liked heterosexual, I find it very very disgusting and I can't take it. I hate men like that, I hate pathetic women. Though, wait.. aren't there two authors writing this? If there, this goes to both obviously. Anyways, the way this is written has a deeper meaning those "Omfgihaveabfhisnameisbillkaulitzhe'ssofamousandsexy" het fictions which are incredibly annoying and very immature.
This has a meaning, moral, and I love it.
I will be honest, when I first read this I nearly threw up at the evilman+weakgirl shyt going on, but eventually I saw potential and progress in the plot. And before that, I laughed at this fic though. :I I found it stupid at first. Actually, I found it ridiculously stupid. Now with these latest chapters you've proved me wrong and that this is spectacular.
GOOD JOB LOVES < 333333
yes, my longest review evaah!! :D
Date: 05/04/10 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
awww...thnx for the update!
Date: 05/04/10 07:03 am Title: Chapter 16
That is so sweet!
Haha Adam...
Date: 05/04/10 06:35 am Title: Chapter 16
Aww thanx for updating
can't wait to read what will happen next
Date: 05/04/10 05:11 am Title: Chapter 16
So sweet! The baby will surely belong to everybody, the Gs included!
Date: 05/04/10 12:16 am Title: Chapter 16
I'm kind of pissed Bill is back to normal but kind of not. I don't know. My brain is confused. Him hitting her and beating her up and stuff was so goddamn sexy and it kind of feels uneasy now that he's not doing it anymore :( But hey, they're getting along, I guess.
Though it's still pissing me off that Morgan is so nonchalant towards the whole thing. Almost like she doesn't even realize she did something wrong, even if she did. Almost like she expects everything to go back to normal. I sympathize with Bill because it must really suck to go and get better and then to come home to your wife pregnant with your twin brother's baby. Kind of tells you you can't trust either of them.
I just see Bill as the victim in this situation. Don't worry about it too much ;)