Date: 03/21/10 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
What happened?
Author's Response: You soon shall see!! Thanks for reading love :)
Date: 03/21/10 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh my god :DDDDD
I am so sick and twisted that when Tom came down and saw her all beat up and everything, I got, like, sick flashes of sadistic...I don't even know what. It's so horrible that it's almost...sexy? I don't know. Like previously stated, my mind is majorly fucked, so yeah.
*can't breathe until next chapter is posted*
Oh and haydere, Amanda :D
Author's Response: Both you and Amanda have the same mind... It's so funny... haha... But, thanks for reading!! We will be posting soon and hope you enjoy!!! XD
Date: 03/21/10 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ooooh that was awesome...
I don't like evil Bill but it all fits so well!!! xxx
Author's Response: Thanks!! Thank you for reading LoveIsWasteful!!! XD
Date: 03/21/10 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
Why won't the guys do something?
I'm so confused and heartbroken over this story...
B/c it does happen....
I want all the guys to stand up for her and put Bill in therapy! Lol!
Author's Response: well read more and see what happens!! Thanks:)
Date: 03/21/10 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh my God! Update as fast as you guys can.
Author's Response: Will do! Thanks Love!!
Date: 03/21/10 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
ok now i really need to know the extent of what bill did cuz its just gonna annoy me til i find out...plz update soon!!
Author's Response: haha... updates coming soon! As soon as HazelEyes freakin' texts me back!! grrrr... hehe
Date: 03/21/10 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
What an asshole!
Bill needs to change.
Author's Response: Maybe he will!?! it's a secret!!!
Date: 03/21/10 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 4
Nice nice.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/21/10 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Bad Bill >:(
But yeah. I love the hurt and the pain. Sorry if I am sounding scary or what, but I think I'm just masochistic. Yeah, I've experienced the pain a lot of times. Anyway, back to the story.
I LOVE IT! I really love it because of the agony and hostility between Tom and Bill. And I love the competition.
You really should update faster and write more chapters!
Author's Response: I am writing more now with HazelEyes and our next chapter will be up soon!! Thanks for reading!!!! XD
Date: 03/21/10 05:57 am Title: Chapter 4
HOW CAN WE HELP YOU WITH THAT WRITER's block ?
Author's Response: Well, if you have any ideas that you would like to share, just let us know! I'm doing this with a partner now, so it might be easier for me!! XD Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 03/21/10 01:31 am Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait to read more. Please post as soon as that writers block vanishes!!! :)
Author's Response: Writer's block is vanishing!! Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 03/21/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 4
I love you too, girlie!! I can't wait to help you with more chapters. I could read this over and over and never get tired of it! Great job!
Date: 03/21/10 01:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Does she not realize what Bill is doing to her, he is causing her to be blind of Toms feelings for her. Her mind has her believing if ill do what Bill wants then we will be what we once were. more plez.
Author's Response: Sometimes love blinds people... No matter how painful it is... Thanks for reading!!!
Date: 03/21/10 12:43 am Title: Chapter 4
It's sad that Morgan is telling Tom to stop hurting Bill. But after all, she's sure that he loves her even though she knows somewhere inside of her that he doesn't and is just using her. But she still doesn't want Tom to hurt her beautiful Bill who she's sure is sorry about what he's done.
;__;
Author's Response: Frustrating, I know... It's sometimes hard to write Morgan's character, because I know myself and I would leave Bill's sorry ass, but I'm trying to write outside of myself... Thanks for the loyal comments, Savannah Suicide!! You're awesome ^^
Date: 03/21/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 4
i like the over protective tom!
Author's Response: haha... Me too! I love it...
Date: 03/18/10 11:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Bad Bill >:(
I wish Bill will change. But I want more of the pain and the hurt in the story. (yeah. I know it sounds weird. I'm like of the masochistic type) I want to see Morgan being hurt by Bill. LOVE IT!!! And Tom comforting her!!
MORE PAIN AND HURT!!!!!!!!!
LOVELY STORY!!!!
MORE CHAPPIES!!!
Date: 03/18/10 07:36 am Title: Chapter 3
Omg Love that story
Good description of an abusive relationship
even if as a woman i grow angry to see her lack of reaction to the abuse
Date: 03/18/10 04:18 am Title: Chapter 3
Very good keep going.
Date: 03/18/10 02:49 am Title: Chapter 3
I've enjoyed it greatly so far. I can't wait to read more :)