Date: 03/15/10 10:49 pm Title: Silence.
i liked that story
im glad that his surgery turned out ok too.
Author's Response: Thanks! :DrnrnD: Yeah. Can you imagine a world without Bill or Humanoid? That's some depressing crap. Dx
Date: 03/14/10 05:56 pm Title: Silence.
Oh my God, this was so beautiful. I've been feeling emotional the whole day, and woah, this just made me burst into tears. Good tears, I think. They must be, because your story is incredible. And for a first story... Couldn't have been any better, really. :)
Author's Response: Awww, thanks. x3 I was a bit worried that I over described and took away from emotional impact - that's what I have a tendency to do in everything I write - so I'm pretty happy that I did a bit better with this one. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/14/10 04:50 pm Title: Silence.
This was absolutely beautiful. The sad mood in this, and the way you described Tom's emotions and the surroundings fit so well together. I think this was absolutely wonderful for a first story, and I hope to read more from you in the future :)
Author's Response: OHMIGOSH MY FIRST REVIEW. O.O *squees and hugs youuu* xD Haha, I'm glad you liked it. ;D I'm honestly not much of a writer - this is like the first time I've even touched microsoft word in anything resembling a creative non-school essay manner in months. So I'm so incredibly happy to know I didn't ruin it. xD; Thank you for the review!