Date: 03/19/12 12:18 am Title: Chapter 7: Finally
Well... totally an anime/manga-ish thing to happen, but I WOULD like you to continue...*sigh* Also, I don't just want to know how it ends. Personally, I'd rather not know anything than have spoilers. Wonderful job, and I really hope you pick this back up. I mean, you mixed two of my most favorite things: Anime and Tokio Hotel. I can't WAIT for you to decide to continue it and for the next chapter to come out ^-^ *holding out for a miracle*
Date: 03/18/12 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 3: Tokyo E Yokoso
Well... they were correct (mostly), but they were pretty impolite... the only one that was incorrect was "goodnight." So, it's not "yo suimin o mochi nasai" That's... basically, except for "mochi" (which is a food) and "nasai" (which is part of the politeness of the words) that's gibberish. "Goodnight" is spelled, in romaji, "oyasumin'nasai," if you're being polite, and "oyasumi," if you're speaking to a friend with equal status (or if you're trying to be rude XD). Other than that, interesting chapter. I found it hard to suspend disbelief... until I remembered that, basically, you were writing an anime screen-play, and anime DOES move that fast sometimes XD By the way, if you didn't copy this plot, and you can draw (or know someone who can), I'd try getting this published as a manga... It just seems like an interesting prompt, and I'd love to see it worked on to perfection by a professional editor, and then published =)
Date: 03/18/12 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 1: Chiru Karitsu
Okay, as a fellow otaku, I TOTALLY UNDERSTAND COMPLETELY!! The first time I saw a picture of Bill, I thought it was from a video game like Final Fantasy or something. It was just THAT perfect. Then my friend told me he was real and I was like "0_0 Where is this sexy RL bishie?" XD I've only read one other fic where Tom was an otaku, and his otaku-ness was mostly a side note. I LOVE this so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next!! Also, wouldn't "Bill" be pronounced "Biru," not "Chiru"? Only I'm learning Japanese, and that doesn't make sense, 'cause it couldn't even be a typo (B sounds are written basically the same as H sounds, not T/CH sounds... I mean, I'm sure you did your research, but I'm just a little confused...ANYWAY! Well done so far, and I'm sorry that it's discontinued. I shall read until the end!! XD
Date: 06/08/10 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 7: Finally
awwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!
Date: 06/08/10 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 7: Finally
YAY smoochie time
Author's Response: naturally. ^_^
Date: 06/04/10 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Chiru Karitsu
daww they kissed!
Author's Response: of courrrse. lol. ^_^
Date: 06/04/10 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 7: Finally
Loved it! Yay, they kissed! And sort of told each other I love you! Well, Bill did, Tom just thought it. ;) Hot make-out session and I'm glad they managed to get rid of Saki and his minions. I'll be looking forward to more. :D
Author's Response: lol. thinking counts when your partner can read minds. ^_^ oh, they'll be back, hunny. count on it! thanks!
Date: 06/04/10 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 7: Finally
MAKS, even though you REFUSE to give me smut....that kiss will hold me over until you update again!! It seems like a filler chapter so the next one better be filled with secks and dramapants!!!!
Author's Response: SMUT WILL BE SOON!. *gasp* filler chapter? MOI?? ....ok, yes, it was, kind of. it will be, i promise!
Date: 05/14/10 05:31 am Title: Chapter 6: Revelation
~blushes~ zomg yay!!!!!!!
Author's Response: ^_^
Date: 05/13/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 6: Revelation
Maksii...i swear to every higher power ever...that if i didn't love you so much i'd be so mad at you for that cliffie. But since i do love you...you are allowed to survive!! and you better update soon missy!!!
Author's Response: *hugs* Aya, liebling, i knew you'd be mad...lol. i'll update as soon as possible, i promise!
Date: 05/13/10 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 6: Revelation
*whines* YOU ALWAYS DO THIS TO ME!
Author's Response: i know, isn't it fabulous? i'll update soon, i promise!
Date: 05/13/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 6: Revelation
*eyes* I just found this. I love it. Gets me excited for the anime con next week
Author's Response: awesome, ani-cons. ^_^ thanx so much!
Date: 05/13/10 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: Revelation
IM REVIEWING!
RIGHT NOW!
and i still love this story :)
keep updating for meh? :3
Author's Response: yaaay, reviews!! ok, updates soon. ^_^
Date: 05/07/10 09:35 am Title: Chapter 5: Reflection
exploding sandals makes me review faster and so does smut and more chapters... MAKSII. Seriously stop being so good at writing its crazy!! just kidding maks, update when you can!
Author's Response: exploding sandals, ftw! aw, damn...that means i have to write this now too, doesn't it? lol ok, ok...i'll work on the next chapter today, i promise.
Date: 05/07/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 4: Test
ahhh Bruderliebers...you know what this story needs more of...smut!!! and tom shirtless shooting people and Bill being sexy because its just what he is.
Author's Response: aw, Aya, let me build plot and romance before smut! lol.
Date: 05/07/10 09:19 am Title: Chapter 3: Tokyo E Yokoso
Bill and assault rifles...sexy yet terrifying. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: i know...Bill would be very intimidating with a gun, i'm sure...
Date: 05/07/10 09:07 am Title: Chapter 2: "You have to help me!"
I hope the key is something dirty...oh sheesh i just reread that sentence and I now know for a fact that I am a perv. Ok maybe the key is to fall in love with Bill that works too! Gosh, now I'm a perverted romantic...
Author's Response: ...Ayaaa....you're hopeless. XD in so many ways. ^_^
Date: 05/07/10 09:00 am Title: Chapter 1: Chiru Karitsu
Maks...I've become your own persona fangirl...which means I will be harassing you nonstop because you write so well!! This is a fantastic idea and Bill is the perfect bishonen!
Author's Response: o_o i have a fangirl! *gassspp* thank you! :'D
Date: 04/15/10 05:37 am Title: Chapter 5: Reflection
so cute! more please? love ya babe~
Author's Response: more soon! ^_^
Date: 04/15/10 01:55 am Title: Chapter 5: Reflection
So. Ever heard of a "fishbowl drink?" Like a ginormous amount of alcohol in a mixed drink- like a fishbowl, usually has fruit or whatnot floating in it.
Totally. Im drunk.
And I'm so happy you updated. ^.^
Author's Response: lol awesome. that's great. o_o yay! ^_^