Date: 03/15/10 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
A promising start! I'm curious to see how Tom and Bills relationship will tur out! But the chapters are too short..I want more!
Oh, and you should probably add "abuse" under the warnings..just a little pointer ;)
Author's Response: I'll try to make them longer =D and thanks for the pointer hehe ^_^
Date: 03/15/10 10:38 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
I'm so glad I came across this story! Your characters are so realistic and well-developed, I have an easy time identifying with them and their situation. I'm really intrigued with this fic and I can't wait for what will happen next!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/14/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
It's pretty interesting so far. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Glad you like it :D
Date: 03/14/10 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
Aww poor bill. :/
I'm liking this story so far.
Update soon... :D
Author's Response: I will :D
Date: 03/14/10 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1: That’s what you get when you make a new friend
I like it. :D
Date: 03/14/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
M0RE!!!
Date: 03/14/10 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
M0RE!!!
Author's Response: Soon :D
Date: 03/14/10 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
Poor Bill. I feel so bad for him cause he can't stick up for himself and not take anyone's crap. And Tom and Georg are jerks and I want to shoot Jorg, but that's just me. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: I feel bad for him too :(
Date: 03/14/10 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
Keep on writing !!!
Author's Response: I am :D
Date: 03/14/10 12:12 pm Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
Sorry for not commenting on the first chapter. :(
Anyways, back to the story. I really love it! The concept and the way you use words are great!!
Awww. Kinda' hate Georg and Tom for being mean at Bill. >:(
Please write more chapters and update faster1
Author's Response: That's okay :DrnI will - I'll update as soon as the next chapter is ready =D
Date: 03/14/10 11:07 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
I'm seriously not liking Jorg and his asshole-ish attitude, it's getting good though, keep it up.
Author's Response: Yeah, he's not very nice. - and thanks ^^
Date: 03/14/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
*sniffs* I already LOVE this story, I love the storyline, I love Bill's character, I just love everything about it!!! I can't wait to read more. Bill needs protecting and hopefully when Tom gets off his high horse he can be the one to love, cherish and protect Bill :D
I can't wait until Tom starts falling for Bill. MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much :D I'm really glad you like it.rnI'll post another chapter as soon as possible! =D
Date: 03/14/10 06:29 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
Ohh his dad is hurting him :S i wasn't expecting that !!!!
I like that Andreas is being good to bill but i can't wait for Tom to open his eyes and be a little nice to bill =)
And Tom and Georg are a little mean to Andreas :(
Author's Response: Yeah, hopefully Tom will be a little nicer soon ^_^
Date: 03/14/10 04:04 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
Give me more! Im close to fall in love! Want to hit Tom! HARD!!!
Author's Response: Haha me too - he should be nicer to Bill!
Date: 03/14/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
love it update
Author's Response: Thanks =D
Date: 03/14/10 01:15 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
aw...bad jorg *hits with newspaper*
Author's Response: Yeah, he's mean :(
Date: 03/14/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 2: That’s what you get when you don’t obey
Really liked this after chapter one-after chapter two-hooked and ready for more!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like it =D
Date: 03/13/10 10:29 am Title: Chapter 1: That’s what you get when you make a new friend
I like it, and I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response: Glad you like it =D
Date: 03/12/10 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: That’s what you get when you make a new friend
Enjoying this story, I like your writing style, it's very clean. I hope there is more to come.
Author's Response: Thanks =DrnNext chapter will be up pretty soon ^^
Date: 03/12/10 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1: That’s what you get when you make a new friend
:( poor billa ah well at least he has Andi :D
Stupid Tom though...>:(
Author's Response: Yeah, Tom is not very nice :(