Date: 03/15/10 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Kissing between them! Would get Emma all worked up even more!
And oh god.. The scene with Bill.. *goes off to melt*
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :D Thank you for your review!
Date: 03/15/10 11:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the first chapter, but there is a flaw in it. If Emma is Gordon's neice than that would make Bill and Tom her cousins. And kissing cousins?
Perhaps there's an explation down the road. But other than that little nick, the story is good.
Date: 03/15/10 07:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I like the first chapter, but there is a flaw in it. If Emma is Gordon's neice than that would make Bill and Tom her cousins. And kissing cousins?
Perhaps there's an explation down the road. But other than that little nick, the story is good.
Author's Response: I wouldn't exactly call them cousins. Since Gordon is just Bill and Tom's step father I wouldn't say they're related. Thank you for your review! :)
Date: 03/14/10 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
They should have their complete focus on Emma. I already like this story and Emma. She sounds like a beautiful girl.
Author's Response: Alright, it sounds like most of you want a complete focus on Emma, so it probably ends up like that :) Awesome! Thank you for your review! :D
Date: 03/14/10 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
COMPLETE FOCUS ON EMMA PLEASE!!
Author's Response: Hahah, okay xD It's 2-1 to complete focus on Emma! I'm excited to see what it ends with :] Thank you for your opinion!
Date: 03/14/10 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
A little kissing never does any harm. ;)
Author's Response: Heheh, okay, thank you! :)
Date: 03/14/10 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
I think they should have their complete focus on Emma. I really enjoy this story, I hope it will be updated again soon! :)
Author's Response: Okay, thank you for your review and opinion! :D
Date: 03/14/10 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
hhaa more please!!!!!!!! love it!
Author's Response: I'll hurry, I promise :) Thank you!
Date: 03/13/10 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Emma is such a little devil, I just wander how she might torture the poor gorgeous guys of ours, this actually might be fun to watch ~or more precisely read~ :)
Author's Response: Hehe, yeah, this can be fun ;p Thank you for your review!
Date: 03/13/10 12:19 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg. Love! < 3 I'm so hopelessly addicted to this story and it's only chapter 2! I hope you update soon, cause I absolutely adore this story. Love how you portray Emma as a bad ass and how she's a complete ass to Bill. Can wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You just made my day :D I'll hurry up and update!
Date: 03/12/10 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
more please! Love it already:p
Author's Response: Aww, awesome! :D I'll hurry up and update soon!
Date: 03/11/10 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow. this is a very good start. I'm definitely intrigued . keep going.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you are! :D
Date: 03/11/10 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
You have caught my attention! Can't wait for more!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad I did! ;D Thank you!
Date: 03/11/10 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
kill her shes a bitch qho should dieee. hope bill kills her
Author's Response: I'm glad you got passionate for the story! He won't kill her, but they will fight... and make up ;]
Date: 03/11/10 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think this is really interesting so far! Keep it up :)
Author's Response: I hope it is! Thank you! :D