Reviews For Man on Top
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Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/27/10 11:28 pm Title: Part 1

Um...there is such a thing as black hair dye and a salon. Bill needs to go use it! LOL!

Reviewer: cj89 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/09/10 03:54 pm Title: Part 1

That was hot!

Author's Response: Thank you hunn. :))

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/10 03:12 pm Title: Part 1

really like the story line =D

and i really don't mean to be awful or anything, but since i see a lot of potential for improvident here... i was wondering if u'd let me beta this story? i don't often offer to beta anything, so trust me when i say i really like the story!! it's just that, with a few improvements, it could really be among the awsome fics on this site, and i believe it really deserves that!!

please respond ^^ (i'm going on a trip for 2 weeks on friday, so if u want me to beta it, i can probably do it over easter ;D)

Author's Response: Thank you sweet'art. Yea, that would be nice. It's taken me forever just to write what I have written and it'll probably take even longer to write the rest. I only posted this because it's been sitting in my drafts in my email for near a year so I might as well of posted something.

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