Date: 03/09/10 03:01 am Title: Chapter 2
deliciously wrong. tes, the deleted scene might be nice :)
Author's Response: Might be nice?? Hmm... lol I'll start working on it.
Date: 03/09/10 12:45 am Title: Chapter 2
you should most definately do that deleted scene ;D
Author's Response: haha, sure I'll work on it.
Date: 03/09/10 12:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Yes, please write the deleted scene XD but, i liked this!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. And I'll try my best with that deleted scene.
Date: 03/09/10 12:11 am Title: Chapter 2
Holy shit, this is glorious. I have a huuuuge weakness for facials AND licking cum up - I'm in love with this story.
"He ran his tongue through the mess then moved his head upwards as a string of precum followed before he swallowed it." < Someone needs to make a picture of that. Right. Now. This image is forever burned into my memory - thank you.
I'd love to see the deleted scenes... ;)
Author's Response: You, my dear, are very very welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I need to get working on that deleted scene.
Date: 03/08/10 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
ja
that would be cool
Author's Response: Sure, I'll work on it.
Date: 03/08/10 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh please-write about after Tom found Bill with hs cap!!!!
Author's Response: As you command.
Date: 03/08/10 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
lol I like this, this was very entertaining. More more!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm sorry about the weird numbers and symbols popping up. I'm working on getting it fixed though.
Date: 03/08/10 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a really hot idea :evil grin:
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad someone else thinks so too. ^.^
Date: 03/08/10 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cant wait
lol
that was good
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that you liked it.
Date: 03/08/10 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1
oooo... can't wait to read more! lol
Author's Response: Haha. Well, I hope that you like the rest.
Date: 03/08/10 07:37 am Title: Chapter 1
I like it. :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you do.
Date: 03/08/10 07:03 am Title: Chapter 1
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!! YES, YES PUNISH HIM !!! Oops. Sorry, I lost it ^^ But it's awesome.
Author's Response: Don't you worry. Bill will be punished soon enough. MWHAHAHAH....sorry
Date: 03/07/10 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ohhh. Pure hottness
Can't wait for the second part
Author's Response: He he. Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 03/07/10 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love punishments! Punish Bill. He needs it, he's been a bad bad boy!
Author's Response: Yes he was. You'll get to know what Bill's punishment was soon.
Date: 03/07/10 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
there are stange number's appearing with the sentences. TO let you know. It's pretty good. :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I edited it and it should be fine now.