Date: 04/09/10 12:20 am Title: Scars
Amazingly done, my dear.
Sorry, I need a freaking cool shower over here LOL.
No more? That's it? *puppyeyes*
I DOUBT Bushido will be able to actually not DO it again. I can tell by the way he freaking ENJOYED it as much as Bill did.
Now, back to "normal", huh? I wanna see how they're going to act during the day afterwards =D.
Great job, as always (lies, you did even better).
PD: Sorry if I sound incoherent, but I've been up all night long. It's 6 in the morning right now @.@
I'll be waiting for the 17th chappie.
xoxo
Author's Response: Bill is like a potato chip. Once you get a taste of one you can't help but go back for a second...third...maybe forth...XD; the romance that blossoms between these two is so sweet, and it really shows in the next couple of chapters just how much they care for each other <3
Date: 04/08/10 10:26 pm Title: Scars
Finally some action for bill
:)
Date: 04/08/10 07:38 pm Title: Scars
Okay I'm so obsessed with this story that it's affecting my work. I literally keep this site open on my phone all during work so that I can sneak and read a little at a time. This chapter was well worth the wait; although I almost felt like I was sucker punched at the end. They need to be together, but then a part of me feels like Bill really needed that type of physical intimacy to heal and that maybe that shared moment is all that's meant to happen with them and I can understand that from a rational standpoint, but my heart wants them to have a life together. I know I've over analyzed this, but I really appreciate the fact that you have written a story containing such difficult subject matter. Kudos!! I don't want it to ever end.
Author's Response: Dedication like that is exactly why I love writing <3 you're the best! Just don't get in trouble, it's horrible when you have to explain something like that.
Date: 04/08/10 07:17 am Title: Scars
No, nO bushido what are u doing ?
Date: 04/08/10 06:35 am Title: Scars
LOL
that's what i've been waiting to hear: "Bill is like a potato chip. Once you have one, there's NO WAY you're not going back for seconds...and thirds...and maybe fourths"
THAT's exactly what i meant
i mean Bu's in love for *UCK's SAKE!!!!
and Bill is pretty much fascinated, isn't he?))))
and saying some stuff like THIS is just hard to believe, THIS IS BILL we're talking about!
haha
ty for everything
Author's Response: Nuh uh. THANK YOU. You just made my morning so much better <3
Date: 04/08/10 06:27 am Title: Scars
oh am i always the 1st with my reviews?
LOL
Date: 04/08/10 06:25 am Title: Scars
you're making it too difficult, don't you?
This whole rapper image thing is just too much here. Overblown maybe? Or i'm not being realistic here? i mean i'm sure it's way more relaxed in reality. Nowadays everything is cool and glamorous? no?
oh i don't know...
where did that come from?
this line i mean: “This won’t ever happen again…will it?”
jeee....
oh come on! no one will know
oh i'm hurt (tho the sex scene was steamy and cool, i actually like the idea of a virgin Bu and experienced Bi, LOL)
Author's Response: I tried to really push it here, because image is EVERYTHING in the entertainment industry, and Bu is one of the very most successful German rappers. If he slips on that image, there is SOOOOO much that can go wrong. Plus part of that is macho!Bu's thoughts. Don't worry, he'll come around! And...Bill is like a potato chip. Once you have one, there's NO WAY you're not going back for seconds...and thirds...and maybe fourths... XD that's alllll I'm gonna say.
Date: 04/07/10 09:15 pm Title: Voyeur
oh man, i can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 04/07/10 05:56 pm Title: Voyeur
Lol. I can imagine what comes next! I think some rapper can't freaking ignore what he got in front of him any longer, not after the show off he got just now =D
Love it, really and I'll be waiting for the next chappie to be updated.
PD: I already translated 14 chapters from Obliquy, I'll start soon with WPE (but I just uploaded 5 chapters so far ;) It's having a great acceptance).
Love you!
Author's Response: I saw! I've been creepin' it a bit. Even if I need to run comments through google translator I still love reading what people think of my stuff!
Date: 04/07/10 05:21 pm Title: Voyeur
Yeah...cause that last scene left me feeling greasy and like I needed a shower! Just nasty! Rappers and hoes! Ewwww!
Author's Response: LOL those two words together totally just changed that scene for me XD OMG I CAN'T STOP GIGGLING.
Date: 04/07/10 05:20 pm Title: Voyeur
ohhhh that was kinda hot
hmmm i can guess what happens next
hope for it
Date: 04/07/10 05:10 pm Title: Voyeur
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Date: 04/07/10 05:09 pm Title: Voyeur
at last: lust and love
Date: 04/07/10 03:28 pm Title: Voyeur
Oh shit yeah!!!! WOOT WOOT!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/07/10 12:56 pm Title: Voyeur
:0 omg! I hate Cliffies :(
Date: 04/07/10 10:21 am Title: Voyeur
Omg please update soon. This chapter was amazing!
Date: 04/07/10 09:51 am Title: Voyeur
ok...... now it's somewhat clearer
hm.... now that you mentioned it i now want to read more about that YEAR TOGETHER THING in more details
aaawwww, my dirty mind paints interesting stuff... really, it never hit me... A YEAR! wow
you need to insert it somewhere like a flashback or smth
Author's Response: Said 'year' was Obloquy and like 5 or 6 months of which was in the hospital. Nothing romantic happened between them besides the sweet moments here and there and especially the night that's mentioned in the final chapter of Obloquy. But if you're around anyone for that long, you tend to know them inside and out- what makes them mad, happy, and in this case what will trigger Bill to have a really bad day or a generally good one.
Date: 04/07/10 09:03 am Title: Voyeur
UPDATE
WooHoo
hotty hotty
oooh, will Bu follow and will they make out in that (?)club?
how psychic of Bill to actually understand Bu's TRICK, haha.
Jee, i never understood that attitude really, enlighten me!
Why do they have to do that thing with girls when they both know about each other's feelings? ain't respectful, ain't faithful. the thing i mean here is that in this situation they usually don't have fits of jealousy or whatever.
am i abnormal?
x_x
Author's Response: In all of my love for Ersguterjunge, I've learned they're kinda sleazy (which sadly makes me like them more...). This was just a diversion- because whatever is actually brewing between Bill and BuBu has to be kept absolutely secret- Bill's already been through this kind of thing before and he doesn't want a repeat of events. Therefore, they're covering it up by fake feelings- and the only real feelings are kept in their eyes and Bill is THAT confident that he's got Bu wrapped around his pretty little finger, that he knows there IS no competition. (You'll also notice the two almost NEVER talk when others are around- that's how secret this is) They've been around each other for a year now- so they know each other very well. PLUS Bill's had alcohol! If anything, we'll blame it on the alcohol that he's secretly been chugging <3
Date: 04/07/10 07:13 am Title: Lesson
see this
http://twitter.com/SilverSaturnSW/statuses/11750884913
LOL
Author's Response: If you saw my fb status you might squeal XD I think this calls for an update!
Date: 04/07/10 07:06 am Title: Lesson
can you possibly love Bu more?