Date: 12/05/11 10:06 am Title: Birthday
awwww, I love them all and I'm so glad that Bill getting know each of these gangsta men. :) I hope they will be his new better family. :)
Date: 12/05/11 08:41 am Title: Scars
YEAH!
I waited for this from whole beginning but it's worth for waiting. I'm feeling so satisfied. :)
"Anis...Anis..." so fucking hot!
Date: 12/05/11 07:05 am Title: Relief
S.M.I.L.E!
yes, yes, YES!
I'm so happy for them. :)
Date: 12/05/11 06:46 am Title: Impulse
aaaaaaaaawww.. :')
finally!
Date: 12/04/11 06:10 pm Title: Hope
here could be possible ending. :) I don't need anything more..just Bill's smile. :) and I'm smiling too. crying, but smiling. :) thank you.
Date: 08/23/11 01:08 pm Title: Breathe
You made me cry , laugh , God , it's so touching I love it , you have just proven one more time how great your writing is !
Date: 08/05/11 04:34 am Title: Breathe
you probably get reviews all the time. but your story really struck a cord with me. i lost my twin when i was 14. and it is hard. he was my everything you would never see us apart. i reviewed on obloquy on chapter 4 you already had me in tears. and i was crying the whole time reading this story i couldnt look away from it for more than 5 minutes. i kept coming back i sat and read the whole thing today. you are a really good writer and keep going.
Author's Response: I'm really sorry for your loss and thank you so much for sharing it. I hope maybe you were able to take a little relief from this story in some way, and I wish you lots of love and luck in the future. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 07/03/11 08:02 am Title: Breathe
Usually when I don't comment on a story, it means I have nothing to say.
For this, both "Obloquy" and "What Patience Earns", I have so much to say I don't even know how to say it or where to start.
This story...hit so close to home. It's weird how it did, but it did none the less. The way I lost my sibling was so drastically different- the circumstances, our relationship, everything. Yet every time I read this, it brings back my own memories; one example: the smothering state of shock with the realization that your life will never be the same again, and there's not a damn thing you can do about it- that and a whole hell of a lot more. Just...ah, God.
That's something that's beautiful about this, that no matter how different your experience with loss is (or if you've experienced it at all, even) you can still relate to this.
Your writing was superb, and no matter how many times it's been said, I'll say it frickin' again; it was absolutely phenomenal. I read this originally back a while ago, and it honestly hasn't left my mind since.
I don't know what to say, really. Just that this story means so much to me (and hopefully I'm not the only sappy bastard who thinks so), and yes. Thank you, so much for penning this.
NEVER. EVER EVER EVER STOP WRITING.
PS- You know I really love something when I write a mushy comment about it, because my usually cool sarcastic demeanor has been momentarily abolished due to this story.
Date: 06/15/11 11:28 am Title: Breathe
wow omg that was the most emotionally taxing and fulfilling fics I have ever read. thank you SO much for opening up yourself to us through this story.
Date: 06/14/11 11:23 am Title: Reverie
This is ridiculous like omg they have the best sex...
You are a really amazing writer.
Date: 04/18/11 02:31 pm Title: Breathe
This is the most awesome story ever
I reading king of kings next. i head it has 106 chapters im looking forward to it
Date: 02/18/11 07:56 pm Title: Breathe
Wow. I've just finished reading both of these stories. And I don't think I have the words to describe. I laughed out loud, gasped in shock, cried, cheered, worried, and was curiously satisfied with the end, even though I really didn't want it to end at all. You've managed a very moving piece of work, both storied combined into one, because that's kind of how I read them. I'm just getting into DeutschRap music, and learning the names of the singers, don't know how close your descriptions were, but I thought them to be real human beings. I do have to admit my favorite is Bushido, and Kay One is next, probably with Fler coming in third. Not heard much about Eco or Chakuza, but I like the way all of them are represented here. How they all managed in the end to include Bill in their world, their music, their hearts and their little family. Very nice indeed. A wonderful job on these two stories, I'm going to be sure to mark them as my favorites. Thank you so much for a very emotional, moving piece of work. Wow.
Date: 01/16/11 12:28 pm Title: Breathe
This is so beautiful,tragic but Beautiful. Every line is perfectly written. I've read this over and over. This is one of the few stories that I really connect and relate to and it's...I'm speechless.I almost lost my twin last year and reading this just makes me realise how lucky I am to still have her.Thank you so much.
Date: 12/10/10 05:52 pm Title: Breathe
Raiju, you are amazing. I can't tell you how much admiration I have for you. You're such a strong person, what you did with this fic is amazing. I hope they helped you, I really hope they did. Losing someone is the most painful thing and what you did with writing these, I honestly, gosh I don't even know. I love you for it, I admire you for it, I respect you for it.
I hope you know how incredible you are. Because you really really are.
Date: 12/10/10 05:48 pm Title: Closure
This made me cry so much, it's beyonf stunning, I can't even find words right now. What finally made the tears stream was when Bill said "It's you, isn't it?" That kick started it. You really are beyond talented, in such a short time you've become one of my ultimate favourite authors, your stories are powerful and strong and true to real life tragedy. It's just amazing. You amze me, I admire you so so much *heart*
Date: 12/08/10 07:45 pm Title: Veneration
oh my! Well that chapter was momentous! So so so SO incredible, god i had shivers throughout that entire chapter! Bill did it, he really did it! And Bushido, Bushido :) there are no words for how amazing that was, it was sublime! I was in awe, i could feel all those emotions rushing from both of them, man this is genius. what a journey!
Date: 12/08/10 12:20 pm Title: Haunted
aw wow wow wow! That reunion with his mother was beautiful :') Bushido did all that? he's so perfect for Bill, so perfect. And this whole fic is even more perfect! It's really too wonderful.
Date: 12/08/10 06:47 am Title: Repentance
ah Bill's performing! I hope he does it, i hope he overcomes that final hurdle :)
Date: 12/07/10 07:40 am Title: Promise
gone where? i hope it's no where permanent. Oh god, their relationship makes my heart ache. It's one of a kind :) it's amazing, so so amazing. I really am stunned by your work, it's just incredible.
Date: 12/07/10 07:21 am Title: Diverge
oh my god, that was... i'm speechless! So so stunningly beautiful, and just wow! I loved it so so much, it was gorgeous yet heartbreaking. I want them to be together properly so bad! But real life can be a bitch. God you're beyond talented.