Date: 04/26/10 01:33 pm Title: Diverge
*BAAARRRRRFFFFF* XD..kekeke...well that was very touching. *sigh* Just like Tom and Bill, there love cant be like how they want it to T_T. i know the tour is almost over and WHAT is gonna happen now. Bill get back to singing, becomes a lyricist, something. I know its gonna be super emotional when Bill finds out who is coming to the final show ToT. So emotional will Bushido and Bill i_i.
Author's Response: O_O YOU'RE THE FIRST TO GUESS HIS EVIL PLAN. *High fives*
Date: 04/26/10 09:33 am Title: Diverge
I LOVE YOU!
So... not only 37 anymore? =D *dances all around*
I'm madly, deeply, fully and absolutely in LOVE with you! (Just put that on my msn LOL).
And aww, that chapter has been so heartbreaking. I can understand why they can really BE together, but that doesn't mean it isn't painful to see and be aware of it =(
But it's beautiful that Bushido would take off his wedding ring just to make love to Bill whenever it'll be possible, it only shows just how much deep he had fallen for him and for how long he'd been keeping those feelings bottled up inside himself not letting anyone get there, even Bill.
I'm so in awe. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Right now it's moving more towards...39? 40...oh man maybe even more XD at some point I wanna go back and change the beginning chapters a bit too- so readers might end up playing the 'SPOT THE NEW SCENE!' game once this is over, who knows. (And since you're translating this, I'll point out for you what's changed and where after I'm SURE I'll be uploading it and that it won't need to be changed again. I'm picky like that.)
Date: 04/26/10 09:16 am Title: Diverge
*_* yes i'm awwww'ing! This is so cutex] This was a great chapter! I've never read a story where Bushido's character is so deep before! Then again I haven't read a story where he is nice either! But I really like him in this one, and the thing that's between him and Bill! It's so touchy, emotionall and just awesome ^^ I hope it isn't over yet. I'm enjoying this way too much! Good work! :D
Date: 04/26/10 08:26 am Title: Diverge
*crying*
why the hell is this so difficult?
aaaaargh!
damn. I so much understand Bill. I'd just run away somewhere and cry myself to death. This is kinda painful to know they both love each other but can't be together, and it feels like Bu isn't even trying to make it possible.
and Bu actually saying he might have a wife.... is he stupid? why in hell does he need to have her?
UPDATE IS GREAT
Date: 04/26/10 02:08 am Title: Push
what?? did he say it or not? ah!! poor bill, i totally understand his struggle, but at the same time hope he does it.
Date: 04/25/10 08:48 pm Title: Push
and the movie trailer! wow! it took my breath away, literally. it was such a good video. it was so realistic kinda. and you picked the perfect clips for the video, too! I've only read a few billshido story before but this one is so fucking good, and just.. I can't even describe it! I'm just gonna stop rambling and continue to enjoy the rest of this awesome amazing story! good work! this deserved the feature! this is the greatest story i've read so far!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3
Date: 04/25/10 03:42 pm Title: Push
aww damn those two are just so cute ^.^
Date: 04/25/10 01:25 pm Title: Push
Congrats on the blue ribbon on this story. its really good and well written. I love it :)
Date: 04/25/10 10:36 am Title: Frailty
Oh god I love this story. It is amazing how you deal with Billīs psychology. And Anis - how you wrote his character - I like him even more. This pairing is one of my favourites. Thank you for this story, it please me every day.
Date: 04/25/10 09:02 am Title: Push
aaawww
omg
i wanna see Bu's face, please!
Please, tell me there's Bu reaction described
just a little, please
aaawwwww
Bi's a good boy, he didn't make daddy Bu suffer one more year.
lol
Date: 04/24/10 07:38 pm Title: Peace
ah! Both the dream and the flashback made me cry.
I guess I got what I wanted though, some sign from Tom for Bill.
Great chapter, better than usual which is saying something. I just don't have much to say because its too emotional for me.
Date: 04/24/10 07:32 pm Title: Allegiance
wow. I love the Bushido was finally able to admit it. I also love Bill's new hair, and that the masculinity of it is hard for Bushido to get used to. I like the Bushido loves the changes in Bill, but loved him just as much before them as well. I too wonder what Tom thinks, and wish that Bill could get his answer from Tom. We had Tom's opinion in the last story, so i think we know he would approve. but its hard to get used to not knowing his opinion. Any mention of the accident still makes me get so upset, thats how real this story adn these characters are.
I'm super glad Bushido is calling gustav. I want to know what the hell is going on with all of them. and why the hell they still have not contacted bill. I don't think there is any excuse for that.
Date: 04/24/10 04:31 pm Title: Transformation
Looking over himself in the mirror, Bill couldn’t stop staring. His lips pouted as if on cue, eyelids lowered, head turned this way and that.
I didn't read the first story in this series, and it's the fourth time I think ^^" that I'm reading, all times before I couldn't even get past the first chapter. But anyway, that line up above in italics, it spoke to me, and I felt triumph and all these other emotions, like "Yeah, f the world. Bill's coming back" even though I haven't read the first story. Because I felt that, not even reading the first story (which I probably should read, but know I won’t yet) it means you did an amazing play up to the line, with the people, for me to think that. Maybe that made sense, hopefully that did. :D
So yeah, I'm glad I got past the first chapter, not because your writing's bad (if it was, how would it be featured? XD) But because I feel safe reading certain authors who know I won't disappoint. So hopefully, you'll become one of those authors. It helps that Billshido is my favorite pairing, so you know. XD I'm eager to keep reading, we'll see. Wonderful job so far though. :D
Date: 04/24/10 03:35 pm Title: Peace
i know i'm so happy for you.
Date: 04/24/10 03:05 pm Title: Peace
whay is Bu trying to do?
i mean if he tries to gather all his former friends then the question is 'will be want to even see them and forgive them?'
Date: 04/24/10 12:20 pm Title: Peace
You totally DESERVE the Feature.
I'm loving it so much, but what I do not like is that BuBu is getting Simone!Bitch involved. =/ I guess, I'll have to give her some space and shit, but quoting Bill: "I will never forgive you."
Anyways, grats on your feature =3 Loved to find it out.
PS: Btw, I finished updating Obloquy and started with WPE ^^.
PS2:Thank you for sharing this awsomness with us!
Author's Response: But see, if you're not actually IN Bill's emotions at the time, and like...try to read everything he said from maybe where Saad had been listening...Bill was just lashing out. He's been harboring so much anger at the whole world that he just needed a reasonable person to rip apart, and at the time his mother was perfect. She actually didn't DO anything wrong. But as always, Bu's got a card up his sleeve >D
Date: 04/24/10 12:17 pm Title: Peace
Bill is gonna be sooooo mad at Bu!....
Date: 04/24/10 11:52 am Title: Peace
nawww im so glad you finally got featured!!! you sooooo deserve it!
Date: 04/24/10 11:25 am Title: Peace
congrats on being featured! A well-deserved one that! And I can't wait to see how Bu's little plan works out. I have a feeling Bill will freak out at first but then...