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Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/10 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1: "Into The Night"
Date: 03/06/10 11:41 am Title: Chapter 1: "Into The Night"
That's happened to me before; just go through where you paste the text in and insert breaks where you want them (this is dull and time-consuming).
Reviewer: Teoflisch Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/10 08:52 am Title: Chapter 2: "Children of a Lesser God"
Date: 03/06/10 08:52 am Title: Chapter 2: "Children of a Lesser God"
little Bill and Tom are adorable. Please update more!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you. ^_^ i'll update as soon as i can.
Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 1: "Into The Night"
Date: 03/06/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 1: "Into The Night"
I like the idea, and your writing seems decent. You should work on your paragraph structure though:space things out a bit. A beta could help you with this.
Author's Response: thank you. ^_^rni know, i'm still rather new to this site, i'm still working things out here. sometimes things that were spaced on my document aren't spaced on the site.
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