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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/12 05:21 am Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

nice story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: crankytiger Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/12 04:32 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

Heh...Bill's always on top. I like that!

Author's Response: It's Bill's favorite place. ;)

Reviewer: CrimsonClaudia Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/14/11 10:25 am Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

awww cute

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you :)

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 03:51 am Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

I love that clip where Tom is talking about how 'Komm' is actually 'Tom' and Bill starts singing in the background and Tom looks over to him and sings along. I just wish the damn clip was longer lol. And ever since I saw it, i've been singing Komm as Tom XD

Love how Bill looks after Tom even though Tom is really being a brat. My OH is exactly like that when he's sick. Drives me up the wall! Bet Bill has far more patience than me ;-) The ending is perfect.

Author's Response: Definitely inspired by that moment. ;) And I like to sing it as Tom, too!

Bill isn't going to let his Tom suffer! Poor boy. And I dunno about Bill being patient...but, I am glad you enjoyed the ending! Thank you.

Reviewer: mischadevi Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/28/11 09:35 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

aww, I love these little moments. You write the random bits of their lives so well.

Author's Response: Hee, I'm so glad! Thank you very much. ♥

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/19/11 01:35 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

That was sweet :)

Author's Response: Yay, thank you! :D

Reviewer: dusk037 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/10 12:44 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

Awww. Good explanation of the blue-tape-thingy. ♥

/late

Author's Response: I enjoyed it. ;D Poor bb Tom, I'm glad he wasn't wearing it by the end of the tour.

Any comment is good comment!

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/10 12:59 am Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

It was sweet if not much else. A slice of their lives and an explanation as to what happened to Tom's arm. Still 98% better then most of the stories on this site.

Author's Response: Well, that's really all I intended it to be; fluff Friday, a bit of feel-good, topical at the time it was posted. Thanks for the compliment?

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/10 05:40 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

aw..this was so cute and so sweet! I loved the last two paragraphs so much. this was wonderful, great job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm extremely pleased you enjoyed it. :D

Reviewer: IntrigueFantasy Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/10 06:18 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

You have such a great talent. I love your stories. The ending was so sweet I think you gave me a cavity; but you have a gift for parting words. Keep at it, I love getting e-mails telling me you've updated. ;) Thanks.

Author's Response: Well it is fluff, after all. ;) One must risk tooth-rottingly sweet. I'm glad if they were suitable parting words! And thanks so much for your review, I appreciate it.

Reviewer: ophelia_seven Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/10 08:23 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

This was so, so, so perfect. I think my favorite part is the minute Bill realizes that it couldn't be anyone else helping Tom. It's him or no one at all. So sweet, so adorable, so realistic. Tom's totally taking advantage of the situation...and as well he should! ♥

Author's Response: ♥ ♥ ♥ Thank you. Yes, it has to be Bill! I agree, Tom's taking advantage - but he's earned it. I'm incredibly happy you enjoyed this.

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/10 06:20 am Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

This was just so sweet! I giggled at Tom having Bill do everything for him, including getting his toothbrush and turning the bed down (for crying out loud! lol). And Bill grumbled so cutely, but he did it anyway. Yay for attentive!Bill :D

The end was just lovely, too, and I imagine quite true. I thought this was a wonderful story, Tay. :D

Author's Response: Hee, thanks. I totally picture Tom as going completely overboard when he's got an injury or illness, just to kind of...see how far Bill's love gets him, lol. I do think Bill would do a lot for Tom with his injury, but probably not go THIS far. XD

Thank you! I'm really pleased that part rang true. To me, they definitely are each others' home. Thanks Mel.

Reviewer: haenniTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/10 05:23 am Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

aaaw

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: diddlemouse Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/07/10 04:44 am Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

"When aren't we naughty?" ...
"Hmm." Bill has to think about it...."When we're sleeping?"
Tom laughs. "We sleep together," ...
... "That could be platonic," he says coyly.

HEE!!

**"Move over...no, onto your back. Yeah, mmm. If you're good to finish, so am I. So long as I'm on top."
"Fuck, Bill; you're always 'on top' even when I'm in... ah!"**

these were my two favorite parts...that and Tom soo taking advantage of his hurt arm and getting Bill to do everything for him, even when he could soo do it for himself.

Author's Response: *snicker* Kish is telling me I should write a dialogue-only fic, now. Glad you liked! Those last two sentences, I added on the fly. I thought it worked. ;)

Tom is convinced only Bill can do it proper to make him feel better! ...and enjoys milking it.

Reviewer: tearose99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/10 05:45 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

So that's how Tom hurt his arm LOL! I kind of had a feeling it was something related to twin naughtiness XD I love how believable the twins are in this story. As much as Bill would huff and sigh and whine, he would do anything Tom asked

Author's Response: I like to think so. >;D And sure, Bill would roll his eyes and make like it was a big production, but he'd cater to each and every last whim. ♥ Thanks bb!

Reviewer: kishmet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 11:09 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

Whatever you did differently with this fic, it was completely successful. ♥ I love how Tom keeps making demands of Bill, but they're not overly taxing demands, just little things Tom wouldn't necessarily want to ask anyone else for. Really liked the dialogue-only sex scene, too - I'd like to see you write that way again, perhaps an entire fic next time? *prods*

And now I'm done being a brat. This was fluffy and gorgeous and the last line warms my twinny heart. Thank you for organizing this Fluff Friday!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much. *was insecure* And yeah, Tom definitely wouldn't make Bill do something he couldn't, or really didn't want to, of course. ;D Just stuff he wants BILL to do for him.

Mwahaha, I could most certainly do a dialogue-only fic, should I come up with a fitting scenario! So many plans, so little time. ;)

I am exceedingly happy that you enjoyed it and it warmed your twinny heart, and it was absolutely my pleasure!

Reviewer: Fifi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 08:40 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

This was so cuuuute!! *.*

I love your explanation for Tom's injury lol

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I enjoyed it. ;D

Reviewer: FairyCelt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 08:39 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

I needed this fic! The humor in it was so perfect, and the whole premise sweet. I'm so used to Tom catering to all of Bill's whims, it's nice to see the opposite for once. And the way you explained Tom's arm injury...I like to think that's what really went down!

Author's Response: I think we all needed fluff this week, that's why I organized it! ♥ I'm really pleased that you thought the humor and the premise worked. :)))) I thought it was Tom's turn, you know? ;D (It's my personal canon now.)

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 08:31 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

that was cute

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you thought so!

Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/10 06:56 pm Title: I am by your side, just for a little while

so fluffy

Author's Response: Hurrah, thank you!

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