Date: 06/18/10 08:21 pm Title: learning to fly
Ooh, this was so wonderful. Short and sweet but wrapping everything up. I would have liked a little more drama but you handled this excellently -- I just have some really weird preferences XD
Thank you so much for writing this, hon :) I shall definitely be awaiting the next story from you. I adore everything you write. You're so original, like me, and it's good to see someone who can come up with amazing storylines and execute them perfectly.
<3
Author's Response: Usually I wrote more drama, but there's too much in my life atm, so I need a break lol! I've got some new ideas in the works, so I'm quite excited
Date: 06/18/10 06:11 pm Title: learning to fly
Awww! :)
Author's Response: XD
Date: 06/18/10 02:40 pm Title: i do believe it's working....good
Hehe, that poetry Bill was reading was very beautiful. Where's it from? Did you make it up?
Date: 06/18/10 02:25 pm Title: learning to fly
YAYA!!!! i LOVED that last line, deff made me think of "Du bist alles was ich bin, und alles durch adern meine fleisst" (don't know the shortcut for the esszet) LOVE U BEAN!
Author's Response: The esszet is the dash button. I love you too muffin!
Date: 06/18/10 02:15 pm Title: i see my shadow fly
HEY! by the muffin man you don't by any chance REMOTELY mean me do you??? lol LOVED this chapter! good for tom, not doing it yet, though m sure he was close and Good for Bill coming (heheeh) excatly when he was needed :D
Date: 06/18/10 01:20 pm Title: learning to fly
aww bye story i'll miss you! i loved the ending! :D *laughs and walks after to hesar you sing*
Author's Response: XD The story will miss you too
Date: 06/17/10 09:22 pm Title: just an earthbound misfit
lol why do you have to sing the song?!?! i'm sad that it'll be ending but hopefully it's a happy ending...*big puppy eyes*
Author's Response: *Laughs* I don't know. It just seems that whenever I finish writing a story, that song pops into my head. So I sing it when I click the complete box too lol
Date: 06/17/10 08:05 pm Title: just an earthbound misfit
Haha, they're so close and nothing can seperate them x] That's so cool that Tom was seeing real things in his hallucinations, though. Now they can spend time together in all those places and it will be just as good as having the drug, and Tom won't be in danger of dying :3
*does a happy dance*
Author's Response: I actually pulled the meadow being real completely out of my ass lol. I so didn't plan that when he hallucinated it ^^
Date: 06/17/10 04:11 pm Title: just an earthbound misfit
yay more. :)
Author's Response: ^^
Date: 06/17/10 02:41 pm Title: just an earthbound misfit
I want a Rumples. No really. I need a dog.
Author's Response: *give you a Rumples* That's just sad. I'd die without my doggies.
Date: 06/16/10 06:02 pm Title: i see my shadow fly
Oh wonderful, I get the chapter dedicated to me and it's about 50% smut XD
Seriously, though, that was so sweet :) I really do try and make you feel better even though we don't know too much about each other, but I feel like I don't do well enough :( So it's good to know that you're feeling better because of the chapters I write for you and my reviews :)
This chapter...ugh, it's so sweet. Their bond is so pure and so strong. It's like...it probably sounds weird, but it's like this strong white line in a field of black. Like you can't be sure of anything except for the twins being together, which would be the white line. I don't know, it's just the weird way my mind works XD I'm sure it's some deep psychological thing that I'll have to get therapy for :3
Anyway...two more chapters D: How are we going to finish this one up? I love reading stuff where you have no clue how the author is going to end it :D
Author's Response: Who can complain about a dedication AND smut, eh? lol. You definitely do more for me than you realize. Usually, my life isn't so dramatic lol but you're always there to make those times just a bit brighter and I appreciate that so very much. And no, it doesn't sound weird, I know what you mean ^^ And as for the ending.. All I can say is wait and see ^^
Date: 06/16/10 02:46 pm Title: i see my shadow fly
Aww Tom and Bill are so cute and the scene was so sweet and romantic. :D I loved it can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: ^^ yay!
Date: 06/16/10 02:37 pm Title: i see my shadow fly
Wow, yay, I'm so happy for this. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: It'll be up soon
Date: 06/11/10 01:31 pm Title: this soul in tension
yay more
Date: 06/11/10 01:03 pm Title: this soul in tension
Wait, so you know something's happening or you feel like something might happen? Either way, I hope things go well for you, sweetheart *hug* I'm working on another chapter of Metamorphose that will hopefully cheer you up :) And if I was there, I'd give you the biggest hug I could possibly give you :)
Okay, so when it said "nibbling on apple slices", I misread it as "rubbing on nipple slices" and I'm not sure how XD Hopefully that gives you some LOLs.
I think their parents are bastards for not letting them be together. When they're that sad, then obviously something is wrong. What are they going to do, keep them apart for their entire life? They can't do that. They have to let them be with each other so that both of them can have a happy life, because unless they're together, they won't have a happy life :(
Very good chapter, I loved it x]
Author's Response: No, it did happen. But there's still a hope of it all working out in the end, so I'm just hoping it does. It could be worse. I appreciate the hugs and love ^^ *giggles* who wouldn't rub on nipple slices? I was dying at that.
Date: 06/10/10 11:06 am Title: i cannot put my finger on it
WHAT. THE. FUCK.
WHATTHEFUCK.
Author's Response: I'm sorry?
Date: 06/10/10 11:04 am Title: when i was a child, i caught a fleeting glimpse
Awwwwwwwh x] This is just so fricking adorable. Bill being Tom's drug and then being real and...and...them being together and...Tom, and... *melts*
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you think so
Date: 06/09/10 03:42 am Title: i cannot put my finger on it
ah! toms gonna relapse now isn't he!? ah! ah kk i totes didn't see the twin thing coming either
Author's Response: I can't say anything for certain
Date: 06/09/10 02:21 am Title: i cannot put my finger on it
Uh oh...
Author's Response: Yeah...
Date: 06/04/10 04:39 pm Title: when i was a child, i caught a fleeting glimpse
CABBAGE!! :3 XD
.. Nice chapter. :] Can't wait for more XD
Author's Response: *flails* cabbage?!