Date: 03/10/25 01:59 am Title: Pay Up
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 09/18/12 07:32 pm Title: Pay Up
What sort of conversation with your dad would lead to this ROFL XD XD
But wow what a way to spend your last day at work.
Author's Response: Lol I don't even remember but I'm pretty sure it was something as him telling me a story of someone getting a $60 dollar tip and not deserving it. And my mind went 'hehe Bill'd make sure he earned it if Tom was there' and yeah... :D
Date: 04/04/12 10:07 pm Title: Pay Up
"call me up if you want to grind" isn't that a line from a Prince song?
Date: 05/02/11 07:12 pm Title: Pay Up
i got one thing to say to you!...
Date: 01/22/11 09:58 am Title: Pay Up
oh oh i have a comment!!!
that was hot
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so ^.^
Date: 08/25/10 11:59 pm Title: Pay Up
*puddle of goo*...very nice...*puppy face*...sequel?...please?
Date: 06/26/10 06:13 am Title: Pay Up
oh godddddd. so hot. so hilarious. scorching. shit. im awed)))
Date: 06/16/10 12:43 pm Title: Pay Up
"Inspired, weirdly enough, by a conversation with my dad o.O"
hahaa lol THIS was inspired by your dad?? what on earth were you talking about?
okay back to the story ITS AMAZING AND I LOVED IT!!
write more please X
Author's Response: *Laughs* He was saying he went out to dinner and the waitress chick tried scamming them for a sixty dollar tip. . . This came from that convo lol. Dont you just love the way my mind works?
Date: 05/22/10 05:28 pm Title: Pay Up
oh man, Bill is OUTRAGEOUS!!!!!!! in a restaraunt!!!!!!!!the craziest slash story i've EVER read!!!!!seriously, a job well done!!!!!i stil can't believe it. in a restaruant......
Author's Response: Bill is outrageous. That's why we love him XD
Date: 03/11/10 07:10 pm Title: Pay Up
Lol, I'm surprised David even let him finish his shift after that little display! That was great. Bill's not shy about putting out at all. XD
Author's Response: I am too, to be honest lol!
Date: 03/09/10 06:21 pm Title: Pay Up
Haha epic! Well Bill really did go out with a bang XD
Author's Response: Damn straight he did XD
Date: 03/05/10 06:53 pm Title: Pay Up
That was so hot ! Love both of their personality in this. I need a sequel to this so bad, please !
Author's Response: Sequel is going up today ^^
Date: 03/05/10 05:41 pm Title: Pay Up
Ohhh hawt dayyyuuuummm!! This is my third time reading this! I left a review before but it didn't go thru. Basically, what I said could be summed up in one word - HAWT!! I would totally take Tom up on his offer. XP You should really write a Sequel or something of them meeting up for a 'grind'.
Author's Response: THIRD?! Dayum girl! lol oh, and the sequel is going up today
Date: 03/05/10 10:34 am Title: Pay Up
That was sooo nice!
Though, a bit unrealistic, you wrote nice characters for such a short story. Just wished there was a sequel =)
Hot Hot Hot!
Author's Response: Realistic or not doesn't really matter in this case because, well, everyone's too distracted by the fact they wanna be watching them ^^ And the sequel goes up today
Date: 03/04/10 09:51 pm Title: Pay Up
love love loveeeee
Author's Response: woo woo wooo! XD
Date: 03/04/10 05:48 pm Title: Pay Up
that was a really good fic plz plz continue i wanna know what happens next and thank you for writer this
Author's Response: I will have a sequel up hopefully next week. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 03/04/10 05:04 pm Title: Pay Up
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/04/10 04:33 pm Title: Pay Up
U should write a sequel ;D
Author's Response: I plan on it ^^