Date: 03/04/10 03:48 pm Title: Pay Up
Cute and Sexy. :D
Author's Response: goodie!
Date: 03/04/10 10:12 am Title: Pay Up
That was so much fun!! :p x
Author's Response: XD Woowoo
Date: 03/04/10 09:45 am Title: Pay Up
great story! :D
is there coming an sequal,? :P
Author's Response: Yes, there will be XD
Date: 03/04/10 04:08 am Title: Pay Up
I like it! Very yummy and I like the characers. This just calls for a sequel. Pleaaaase? :)
xx
Author's Response: It does call for one doesn't it? Check the recent stories page hopefully next week XD
Date: 03/04/10 01:02 am Title: Pay Up
I demand another. Like right now. with whips, chains, cuffs the works! In another public place if you could. ;) I know you'd love THAT one Iggle babe. And I was grinning like a fool this whole time. Normally I would ask what you were on when you wrote this but I really don't care. I only sorta want to know what it was to be honest. But all in all that's one FUCKED up idea to get from what you and your dad were talking about. LOL I loved this in case you didn't already know. XD
Author's Response: Shit like that in public is just wicked XD And, frighteningly enough, I wasn't on anything lol. *Dies* thank GOD my dad has no idea I write this crap...He might be scarred lol
Date: 03/04/10 12:18 am Title: Pay Up
I've got a feeling Bill's gonna use that number when he get's moved!
Loved it
Author's Response: ;) oh fer totes he will
Date: 03/03/10 10:02 pm Title: Pay Up
well isn't billa just one sexy little tease, huh? rawr. great story: )
Author's Response: Of course he is! I'm glad you liked!
Date: 03/03/10 08:37 pm Title: Pay Up
Hecckkk yeaahhh. Now, the sequel please ^_^
Author's Response: Next week (hopefully), luffy, next week XD
Date: 03/03/10 08:05 pm Title: Pay Up
I think there should be some sort of sequeal (spelling? o_o)
Like, somehow bill DOES end up where Tom is. :D
Author's Response: There WILL be a sequel, I decided today XD
Date: 03/03/10 07:35 pm Title: Pay Up
What?!?!? In the middle of the restaurant?!
Author's Response: Oh hell yeah XD
Date: 03/03/10 07:34 pm Title: Pay Up
When Bill crawled under that table and started blowing Tom, my mouth just hung open.
Bill really earned his tip :)
Hot and funny story with a great ending, I absolutely LOVED it.
*adds to favs*
Author's Response: XD I'm SO glad you liked it ^^ My day has been made
Date: 03/03/10 07:17 pm Title: Pay Up
Oh wow! In a good way. I almost can't believe Bill did that.
Author's Response: *raises brow* come on, man. It's BILL! Lol!
Date: 03/03/10 07:14 pm Title: Pay Up
:OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
holy fuck, lady. that was hotttt.
i was sure that with all the THF drama right now, no one would be putting out one-shots, which were scant enough before.
...which just makes me love this all the more.
loved it!
Author's Response: Well, if you know about me, I'm not scared off by drama. We are TOKIO HOTEL fans...We're insane and there is no WAY a few meesly, stupid people are going to take us (esp that many of us) without a damned good fight, right? Besides, I had this written before the drama XD
Date: 03/03/10 06:43 pm Title: Pay Up
Oh yes.
I think I was going to say something else about how hott Bill and Tom were here with the way they totally openly flirted, but I forgot what exactly the comment was, so I'm just going to say yes. ;3
Author's Response: *Giggles* It's just great that you totes forgot. you rock lol
Date: 03/03/10 06:29 pm Title: Pay Up
That was an awesome story! Well done!!!
Author's Response: Thank ya, thank ya!
Date: 03/03/10 06:15 pm Title: Pay Up
OK...THAT I would like to see happen in a restaurant! Fuck, I think I may just have to do MY guy like that in a restaurant! Thanks for the idea!
Author's Response: *giggleS* You are so welcome! .... When you guys get kicked out, am I going to get blamed? lol
Date: 03/03/10 06:04 pm Title: Pay Up
... in public? That's so naughty...
Author's Response: Well of course it is! XD
Date: 03/03/10 06:03 pm Title: Pay Up
O.o... wow
Author's Response: *hopes that's a good wow*
Date: 03/03/10 06:00 pm Title: Pay Up
*giggles*
*falls over giggling and blushing*
*stands up looking around and seeing room mate watching her weird*
*giggles saying* Bill just blew him in public!
*both fall over giggling*
loved it!!
Author's Response: *snickers* Yes, yes Bill did. And wave at your roommate for me lol
Date: 03/03/10 05:56 pm Title: Pay Up
This was.... AMAZING!!! Loved it XD
Author's Response: Wooowooo! I'm glad to hear it