Date: 06/23/13 08:40 am Title: Track 00
Intriguing story....I wonder what Bill wants
Date: 05/13/13 11:37 am Title: Track 02
You can't leave me hanging like this!!!
Come back and finish! lol I love this so far and I really want to see how Tom and Bill's relationship blooms, because I can already tell that it's going to be a very interesting ride.
Please please please come back and continue! :(
Date: 05/13/13 11:06 am Title: Track 01
Uh-oh!
This is not going to be good. Awesome chapter by the way, I'm really getting into this. lol
Date: 05/13/13 10:39 am Title: Track 00
Okay, this is a gret start to a story. I can already tell it's gonna be one of my favorites lol.
But I am kind of sad that Bill was so quick to dismiss Tom :(
Date: 02/19/13 06:00 pm Title: Track 02
I like this ^^
I hope you will still update it ?
i haven't checked to see how long its been :( i hope not long
Date: 08/01/12 01:15 am Title: Track 02
Awesome. Where is the new ones?
Date: 06/22/12 11:07 pm Title: Track 02
HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE ME HANGING?! i WANT TO KNOW MORE!!!!!
I love this!!!!!
Date: 06/22/12 10:40 pm Title: Track 01
Okay, you can seriously write. I mean, I'm totally envious. I'm loving this!
Date: 06/22/12 10:12 pm Title: Track 00
I must admit, the story didn't really grab me until the ending where Bill and Tom's eyes locked.
I'm thoroughly interested to see where this story goes.
Jobe well done :)
Date: 09/27/11 03:00 pm Title: Track 02
Not gonna lie, Bill is a real bitch O.O lol
I can't wait to read more, hopefully in time Bill will be a little more ... tolerable :P lol
This is really fun to read, I hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
HAHA, you didn't have to lie. :P Bill IS a bitch. I hope to update soon, too, darling. And I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: 08/30/11 12:20 pm Title: Track 02
AH-MAZING!
Author's Response:
THANK-YOU! :P
Date: 08/30/11 12:07 pm Title: Track 00
I loved this chapter. You sure have a way with words I felt like I was actually in the story. Great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you so very much! I'm so glad you liked it. ^-^
Date: 07/07/11 06:19 am Title: Track 00
Awesome story!! moving on to chapter 2 now lol XD
Author's Response:
:') Thank you, lol
Date: 06/18/11 05:02 am Title: Track 02
SO GOOD!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! :P
Date: 06/01/11 04:18 pm Title: Track 02
EEEEEEPP cant wait for the next one, wow bill is such a bitch lol but you gotta love him and hid diva-self :)
Date: 04/28/11 09:56 pm Title: Track 00
ffffffff! honey this is sooooo good! i love it already! its funny, intresting and have i mentioned amazing? well it is! ^^
Date: 03/15/11 11:24 am Title: Track 02
ooh, I really like this so far. Keep up the good work!
Date: 03/13/11 11:49 am Title: Track 02
Oh, so bad someone deleted the third chapter, at least you had it safe and secure somewhere else.
I'm liking the story so far. It well written, and I'm kind of head over heals for the characters. Bitchy Bills is really funny and, well, generally bitchy; and Tom —oh, Tom— he's so very sweet.
Anyway, I would love to read what's next.
See ya.
Date: 03/12/11 02:27 am Title: Track 02
I love to read the reviews, they make me feel that the story really worth for. Clearly we're not perfect and we can't give to everybody what they're expecting, and I'm talking about everything, for example the thing about what should the twins do in this case. It's not about what would happen in real life and how would they respond. This isn't real at all and that's the idea, some things can't be "too real" because yeah, this is a fiction and if we (all the readers) wanna read something real we can take the newspaper.
I don't know if someone's gonna read this but anyway, but I wanted tell you my point of view of the situation.
I've said this a lot of times. SORRY FOR MY SHITTY ENGLISH, the real translater here is BillsMK and lately I've felt like I'm not working as much as I must to, but I've worked in this chap and I know exactly what we did.
I'm not pretending anything, actually I love the differents opinions because you're taking your time to coment and in that way you reward to us all our effort.
I hope not being over dramatic and stuff.
Again, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I know you all understand what I wanted tell you even if I wrote something wrong.
Thanks a lot for reading (:
With love, MissingMySoul